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I'm a kind person. When my friends have a problem they often come to me my aid. the problem that If I can help, I will help but I can't help, I won't help. One day my friend have had a problem about monney and she wanted to borrow my money and then l gave it to my monney for she her and until now, I have not got the money back from she. It's a lot of money and it's a lesson for me.
Sometimes I'm aggressive with my family because I'm the youngest. When I feel blue l will be aggressive but when I grew up I learned to be patient with everything I have seen every day.
I think it's good thing and one more, I think sometime I'm unliable unreliableI often break a promise conitract with I give to my friends, I know it's bad thing and I will try to stop it. a bad preson 👍👍👍

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Joana.          I' m a disorganized person. Sometimes my bedroom is so messy that I can't walk to my bed. And it's really bad, because one day, for exemple, it was the time for I take a bus to go at the school and I couldn't find my book so I got late and lost the bus. But I'm a very friendly person. I can make friends so easy, I guess it's because I'm always smile. I always make friends in place like bus and airplane. Like when I was going to Sydney and I have a conection in New York of twelve hours and I was alone to go out of airport, so I make a friend in the airplane that was alone too, and we went to a lot of places in New York with him. And now I'll visit Kleber in Gold Coast and spend my time with him. 

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Joana.          I' m a disorganized person. Sometimes my bedroom is so messy that I can't walk to my bed. And it's really bad, because one day, for exemple, it was the time for I take a bus to go at the school and I couldn't find my book so I got late and lost the bus. But I'm a very friendly person. I can make friends so easy, I guess it's because I'm always smile. I always make friends in place like bus and airplane. Like when I was going to Sydney and I have a conection in New York of twelve hours and I was alone to go out of airport, so I make a friend in the airplane that was alone too, and we went to a lot of places in New York with him. And now I'll visit Kleber in Gold Coast and spend my time with him. 

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My  I’m positive
I am kind person with my family and my friends. I’ll doing everything for him them I don't ask why me but I just do.
The last time I went my family to a shoping mall and we they finshed from in this shopping and asked me for to go to another shopping center far away from this shoping and I went with them. him to this shoping .
And my friend ask me for if I can take pick them up out from their house by in my car every day or if they can take my car sometimes.
My negative
I dosn't don’t talk so much because I don't have anything to say.
I’m trying for to removing change this negative but it’s difficult can't

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Friendly
Always I try to be nice whit my friends , family and the people A round of me . Always try to find the best way  And work in team and  make a good enviroment for Everyone .
Impatient
Everyday I try to do a lots of things and use my morning time , but sometimes for try to do everthing I do incomplete things or go late to every place for example in the school or work .

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My good personality is I am responsible ity. I try everything to the best result. For example, when I was a stylist, I made a clothes for my celebrity all night. And When M my Korean friend came in to Australia, I tried to make her trip the best trip. Although l have been in Australia only one month.
And My bad personality is ‘low self-esteem’.
If I fail at something, I easily feel frustrated.
For example, when I worked in Korea, I trained my a new employee trainee. But my trainee resigned from the job. So l thought, he resigned because of me. But Later I realized that was not the case. So I came here for to increase my self-esteem. I am trying to be dI ligent now.
I work out every morning at Darling Harbour and I listen to ‘BBC 6minute English’ program every morning. I’ll always try to do my best in my future.

Try not to start a new sentence with ‘so’, don’t forget to use capital letter for proper name - Darling Harbour but not ‘my’ or ‘when’ if in the middle of the sentence.
Great essay otherwise, interesting and easy to read. Well done!! 😊

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I am a helpful person, I really like helping people, no matter who they are, and I think that all people should do the same. If everyone helped others, we would live in a reality very different from what we have today. For example, I usually help my friends and even people I don’t know with advice on what would be the best thing to do. Among other things, I believe you can help another person by motivating her  and helping them her find her own way, that not just helping you financially. I'm also impatient with some things, for example, when someone does not understand what I mean and I explain again. and If they continue to misunderstand me, and then I'd rather not explain more by because I’m being impatient.

Great essay!!! It’s a pleasure to read and not many mistakes. Don’t forget to use a full stop (.) not the comma (,) between sentences. Keep one sentence to 2-3 clauses maximum. Well done! 💪💪💪🙌

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-Positive
I’m easy-going because I can wait for a person and I’m not often be aggressive.
Firstly, I really can wait for a person until over one hour. When I go to a house inspection of house, I always wait 10 minutes and then if they don’t aren’t coming I send a them a message to them .Actually I always waited around 15 or 20 minutes.
Secondly, I always have always a peaceful mind, so I have never fright fought with my friends and colleagues. Sometimes I get angry but always it’s only at that moment and then it’s gone somewhere. Maybe I think I can manage my mind. Except when I feel sad.
-Negative
I’m lazy.
Because I don’t want to do anything when I’m in my house and sometimes my homework is Sloppy.
Firstly, When I don’t have plan at the weekend. Before Friday I bought a lot of food for to prepareing at the weekend. At that On the weekend I  do sleeping all day and watching look at my phone and tv on in the bed. Usually I don’t often clean my house and cook.
Secondly, when I do my homework, sometimes I do not 100% power. And I often take rest many times during I’m doing my homework. So My homework is job is really late. But I can hand in before a at h deadline. But it’s a few careless mistakes.

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I’m an honest  person because, I don’t like lies and liars persons.

Where is the rest?? 🧐🙂

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My positive. I’m polite because I grew up in Thai culture that everyone must respect adults. When I learned was in high school it had s many rules to do. My teacher teaches about walk, speak and eat not must be loud all time. Sometime my friend called me a G ghosts because they didn’t hear when I arrived.

And my negative. I’m immature because sometimes I don’t like go to places alone so I’m not confident in myself mine. If I go to places that never want to go to I will be afraid .

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I’m very patient. I try to never lost my head under any circumstances. I hate stress, all the time I’m looking for the good side.
For example: when I arrived in Australia, in the first day, my room was dirty and was the wrong. I hadn’t paid for it. Other person could become agressive and totally impatient. Because I arrived after a long and tiring trip, but I kept my patient, called to my agency, I’m went to hotel, I loughed and in the next day, I went to the right place.
But, however, I’m disorganized, so sometimes I lose things, I forget things as a headphone, all the time, I need buy a new, because I didn’t remember where I left. Sometimes I forget things I was going to do.

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I’m very organised, so this me possibly do very things how long my day and help the people around me. In high school, for example, I could plan and help my friends to get the actives up to date and they were happy to have their things organised.
One negative point about me, I’m timid and this prejudice my relationships with other people. Now, in Australia, I have a little shame and difficult when I talk in published or other students in English. I want change this, so I found study and practice this language.

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I think I'm a independent person because when I lived in my country, I'd been doing everything by myself, cooking, earning money, saving money.And Then I decided to learn English. Also the decision that to going to study abroad is independent,I think.

And I have a problem.Sometimes I get very stubborn.Especially when I choose some meals at a restaurant, I couldn't accept listen to the advice from my friends and ex boyfriends many times!
I know it is not nice but eating is my life.Changing my mind way of thinking is difficult..

Try not to start the sentence with ‘and’ and make sure there is a space between a full stop and the capital letter.
Great work otherwise!!