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Strengths: Examples from text, grammar

Weaknesses: Thesis sentences, Quotation Analysis

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Strengths: Spelling, integrating quotations
Weaknesses : sentence length variation, introduction / conclusion

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Strengths:  setting the scene with an interesting intro paragraph and integrating quotations.       Weaknesses: not staying on topic and being too repetitive in conclusion paragraph

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Strengths: able to write a large amount and prove my point in any topic, as well as creativity in free writing

Weaknesses: not making my big idea clear enough in my body paragraphs or either doing the opposite and restating it too much (especially in History class essays)

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My Weaknesses:
- Using strong support/evidence to get my point across clearly
- Maintaining a consistent tense throughout my essay

My Strengths:
- Vocabulary
- Spelling
- Formulating topic sentences for body paragraphs

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Strengths
- length and type of sentences
- forming useful ideas

Weaknesses
- redundant points
- topic and concluding structures

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Strengths:
- analyzing/discussing quotes
- using complex formal language

Weaknesses:
- picking topics and evidence
- strongly supporting my overall point

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strengths: vocabulary and sentence variety

weaknesses: organization (making my writing flow) and taking too long to get to what I'm trying to say (too much background)

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strengths: good context and strong quotations
weaknesses: stay on topic, good hook

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strengths: grammar, creativity

areas to improve: having strong topic sentences/body paragraphs

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My weaknesses include switching tenses in my story and formulating a better introduction paragraph when writing essays.

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My writing strengths include setting the scene for the story well and detailing the story so the reader can understand it more clearly and really feel connected to my story.

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i tend to go off topic
citing quotes

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creativity
word use and flow

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Strengths: Creativity, and how realistic my writing comes across.
Weaknesses: too many commas/run on sentences, and  digressing from the point

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Strengths
-spelling
-vocabulary

Weaknesses
-revising my writing
-finding evidence and quotes to support my thesis

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My weaknesses/areas to improve on:
- grammar
- strong thesis

My strengths:
- mechanics
- spelling/vocabulary

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Hi everyone! Click on the plus sign below to add  your strengths and areas for improvement. Be sure to write your name, and add two each, so we have a comprehensive sense of our skills going into the year. Since tonight's homework load is light, please take the time get outside and enjoy life.