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Jaytyn Collier
https://docs.google.com/a/njuhsd.com/presentation/d/1CnBG2cuybr_8IGXx2TSSz45ZiO1oOHSMBfNsNr71WtA/edit?usp=sharing

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Lukas Brodie

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Thank you for the nice evaluation and the time you spent.
Camden Criesco

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Thank you for the kind evaluation of my work and for checking everything out.
Camden Criesco

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Then you should understand that sometimes you have to make hard decisions. Japan was not going to surrender and the bomb ended the war. Invasion would result in the death of many Americans.

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Radiation feels good
Kayla

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Your essay was one of the best I've read on here. Extremely well put together and very reinforcing of your side. Fantastic job on both collage and essay.

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I like that you have a different point of view and that you had really really good points about the ends not justifying the means
-Tiana

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have you felt radiation poisoning??????????????????? nat

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1e4ELGobeaMcqMHyQImHnf1T8_6fca36kWJdie_lJ0R0/edit#slide=id.p

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Whats inhumane sam, is making people still suffer from radiation sickness, as in cancer that people are still experiencing that were part of the bombing. The bomb was unjustified, you don't bomb for political reasons- serenity

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Thank you. Yours is good as well. ;)
Lukas Brodie

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That is very true
K L

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Your project was very neat, making it easy to look more closely at the pictures you chose. Your feelings about the atomic bomb had shown through your essay clearly. I liked this because it made your writing more intriguing to read. It was interesting to read/look at material from someone of the same perspective. Great job!
Dora

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Thank you! i really appreciate what you said about my project! You're so sweet! -serenity

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Whats inhumane is forcing you country into a bloody pointless war with no winner. Bombing Japan was the best thing America could have done. -Sam Nichols

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Thank you so much! I know we have different perspectives so it means a lot that you were able to look at my project as a whole, instead of focusing on the fact that my opinions are different than yours.

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Your writing was very convincing and I enjoyed your collage. Good jab!!!

-Trevor

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That is very true

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Thank you very much
-Tay

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I dont appreciate your comment about it predictable but i do respect your decision but i think you just want to argue and if that is the case then the bomb did not need to drop due to the fact it was inhumane- serenity

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Yes, I agree. Glad we could debate this and come out with the same view point.

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https://docs.google.com/a/njuhsd.com/presentation/d/123RGIN-s3hVtbX3S1TL7uaIhQV7NSYJoUV3U6cGis2Q/edit?usp=sharing
tiana

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I understand. But I am viewing this from a professional point of view, and if you don't care about making your essay "perfect" then that shows how much you feel on the matter. Just sayin'. I feel no need to argue further on this matter, as we see from the same point of view on this debate

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Ciana DeMink
https://docs.google.com/a/njuhsd.com/presentation/d/14kS16fX9J2xEuwadwAUYfwK4qT9PF5F3zm1KtwrAxrw/edit?usp=sharing

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I thought that your essay was very good, I do agree with you that the people of Japan were used as lab rats. But I still think that it was justified. But very amazing project. Nice job. -Mallory Rath

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I like the writing, possibly more of it but good thorough information. Straight to the point. Good pictures to support your stance.
Lukas Brodie

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i think that if we would given Japan more time then the second bomb wouldnt have been necessary, maybe the first bomb was necessary- serenity

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Thank you!
-Tay

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That was only because of my cat-like reflexes
Crossen

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Thanks Bud!!
-Kaylee Bohrer

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Your whole presenation including your document, your images, and your links really show exactly how I felt about the whole situation regarding the Atomic Bomb. Fantastic job!
-Jaytyn Collierr

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Its predictable, let's just say that. -Sam Nichols

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You make a good point, but it's not like that was the only reason we dropped the bomb. It was more of a benefit to everyone, I suppose. Aside from Russia, of course. But at least that way Russia wouldn't have control over Japan.

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I appreciate you taking the time to look at my essay, despite us not having the same views. Yes, it's true that I am against the bomb due to the effects on its victims, but I cannot dispute the fact that the bomb ended the war so I can also understand where you are coming from as well. Thanks for your feedback!
Abby Weir

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Thanks very much!
-Jordanb mann

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I enjoyed your choice of images that incorporated people during that time as well as the interactive map video. Also, you chose good articles because they contained interviews and many good stats/perspectives. The font was a good choice for both the article and title. Your article was well written and easy to understand.
Camden Criesco

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Your writing is really good and the pictures you chose to portray your viewpoint were well chosen. Nice job.
Lukas Brodie

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Thanks for the advice, but that is completely impossible. Nothing has changed and it never will, it still will always barely miss you
Kayla Lyn

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I think your collage was very well put together and I liked the touch of colour in the middle. Your writing was very strong, well thought and organized. I can see how someone supporting your arguments would follow this because it is really good.

-Trevor

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break it up

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The emperor only talked on the radio after the second bomb was dropped. After everything we learned, I do think the second one was necessary, although we probably could have given them more than three days. I agree with that.
Savannah Collyer

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Thanks for your wonderful input. Try to remember this wasn't an actually English Assignment and that it ain't gonna be perfect.
~Rachel

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i believe in bombing them just not nuclear bombing them

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Well thought out arguments for your side of the issue. It was short and simple, but importantly it was straight forward. I would like to see more facts to your arguments but otherwise great job on the project :) -CAt

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Even though we did not see eye to eye on the bombing of Japan, you arguments are very good and thought out. They make since and are very convincing. Nice job. -Mallory Rath

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I agree with your arguments and they are well supported.
-Taylor

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Thank you for your kind words! They are much appreciated!
Abby Weir

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I guess we wont ever know and i understand that Japan was very big on honor but they were also big on the Emperor not ever talking and he spoke on the radio so things were changed in this war- serenity

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Do you realize that many more lives would have been suffered if we would have invaded. The bomb was the only real logical solution.
K Toft

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Kate

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Keep your weight back....and wait for the pitch....you almost killed me so many times last year
~Crossen

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Bella Batula
Good balance of statistics and opinions in your writing.

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Thanks man. - Ben Coffman

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We are too kind to each other
K Toft

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i think that three days was not enough to have Japan get the full information due to the soldiers they had sent out died

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Your writing is outstanding and the articles you chose are great. Nice job Abby.
Lukas Brodie

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Your point of view was extremely well written. I do not feel the same way about the situation because I think the good outweighed the bad in the end but they way you stated all your points really made me understand where you were coming from.
-Jaytyn Collier

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Thank you! That means alot.

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I loved your video and we had a lot of the same points. Very organized project all together.
Savannah Collyer

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Your writing is very nice, I liked what you talked about and the points that you argued about. Your slide is also very nice, clean easy to look at. A very nice job. -Mallory Rath

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I really like the layout of your collage.
Kayla

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Thanks man!

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Although I liked the points you made in your essay, from a writer's point of view, I think you should have opened the essay up a little better. It seemed like I was thrusted straight into the middle of something and I was left slightly confused. If someone read it who didn't know the prompt, the first sentence doesn't make much sense. But aside from that, good job.
Anna

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Thanks for the constructive criticism, I honestly didn't even notice that so thanks for pointing it out! The fact you noticed it means that you actually read it so thanks for taking the time to do so! And thanks for the kind words too!
Abby Weir

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However....debate ya'll!!
~Crossen

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Although I disagree with your opinion, you had well constructed arguments.
-Taylor

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thank you i really appreciate everything that you said- serenity

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Thank you oh so much :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
-Jordan mann

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hmm... I don't know. Japan was all about honor and surrendering would have been very dishonorable. Guess we will never know.
Savannah Collyer

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Your slide is very well made and has a great artistic flare. Your essay provides such complete arguments that I found myself questioning my points. Very well done. - Ben Coffman

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It's true that we told Japanese civilians to leave industrialized cities, but without a demonstration, they had no real reason to do so. And besides, it's a bit of a tall order to ask someone to leave their home.

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Thanks for the feedback!
Abby Weir

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Thanks bud ;)
-Jordan Mann

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Good stuff man - Sam Nichols

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Thanks fam
-Mal B

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You're all so sweet to each other....I'm feeling the love ~Crossen

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Thanks Katelyn. I am glad. -Kaylee Bohrer

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Thank you for your kind words! They are much appreciated!
Abby Weir

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Thank you very much!!!
-Jordan mann

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your writing was fabulous :)
Julia Y

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I really like the way you conveyed your point of view. I personally do not feel the same, although I do feel bad for all the innocent lives lost. It was important for America to get Japan to surrender. We did not know if they were surrendering or not so we did what we had to do.
-Jaytyn Collier

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I'm not sure if I could fit many more pictures on the slide, but thanks for the suggestion.

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Though i do think that Japan would have surrendered due to half of the people already being thinking about surrendering but i really appreciate everything you said about my project- serenity

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Thanks!

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Your project could not of been better. I see the same clear train of thought in my own work.-Sam Nichols

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I really liked your essay and you had good compelling arguments with strong points. -lauren

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Thank you for all the compliments!!
-Alyssa Telles

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Thanks, and don't worry, I fixed the link.

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thanks!
Julia Y

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Jaytyn Collier
https://docs.google.com/a/njuhsd.com/document/d/1ubJxSUFq9n8tWRl0H3bZTyShL3lqPBsNZK8xRbSiNME/edit?usp=sharing

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Thanks fam.
-Steph

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Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate your kind words!
Abby Weir

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Thanks for your input.
~Rachel

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I think that we had to give them not a lot of time because we wanted them to surrender without any thought about it. - Cameron

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Thank you
-Kaylee Bohrer

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Thanks man!
Hunter Kennedy

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thanks i really appreciate what you said!

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Thanks!
-Stephanie