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When choosing strong words/verbs, pick a feeling that you experienced and chose words to describe it.

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Once you have written your personal experience narrative, you can always go back an add stronger words instead of some other weak words you might have,

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Strong verbs can especially help. You can use them to SHOW the reader, instead of TELLING the reader.

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Check for correct spelling as well as the correct spelling in a certain usage.

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You also want to check for proper punctuation and grammar.

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Reread and revise your paper.  Make sure to have lots of detail, so if you don't, add some.  Try using peer editing to help.

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When writing, you don't just want to tell someone what is happening. Instead, you want the reader to be able to visualize what is happening.

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By using strong words, you can help the reader understand it better. Descriptions will also help.

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- Imagine that you have not been in this experience.  See if you can visualize it.
- Ask someone else to read it.
- Add more descriptive and strong words.  You can never have too many!

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Before writing your actual paragraph, plan.  Here are some ways to plan it our:
- Write about the specific experience and part of it that you want.
- Make a list of words you want to use.

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The next step is to write the actual paragraph. Use everything you have learned to write it.

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Make sure to use this in the paragraph! This is a very important part of describing something.