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Great job! I loved your energy and confidence. Maybe work on your pacing but everything else is great!

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You performed it really well

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Good job, you made it through even with the memorization blips. I think once the memorization is better, the flow will be a bit better paced, by other then that you have a good grasp on the monologue

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You had some really funny moments. You were inconsistent with the accent you were doing (occasionally it was strong, sometimes it was sort of there, sometimes it wasn’t there at all); also work on memorization and being more confident/smooth in your delivery.

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I think it was funny. I think your memorization was good, I recommend projecting a little bit. As an audience member, I’d like to see more David instead of “David trying to be black.” I just feel like it didn’t add to the character like you wanted it to. Otherwise, it was really great!

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get better on the memoraztion. try not to make it as obvious when you forget. good character. super funny.

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This is really good and I feel like you embody the character really well, the only thing i would say is the voice. There is a bit of a like breathy tone to your voice where i feel like it needs to be stronger and more prominent because this guy seems like a hard core dude

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Great job, Davi.D! I loved the choices you made; they were very funny and made a lot of sense with the character. To allow for more focus on what you’re saying, you could try not letting yOur feet wander as much, but that may have just been the Monster drink. Greeeaaaat job!

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After you get the memorization completely down, your performance is going to be unbelievable. I can tell that you know your character, and the moment when that shined through, I thought you were so funny.

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I think the acting was very committed and you seemed like an entirely different person

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You read the monologue with a good level of intensity, but we some points it tended to lack flow and cohesion. The character seemed very evil and unstable, which you portrayed well

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That was so good. You had a lot of natural and great pauses. You had good natural laughs and change in tone. I felt the evil in the character and the contrast between the characters tone and his action of playing solitaire is great.

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Very nice and slimy :). You did a great job showing exactly who the character and I really enjoyed it.

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Goood job developing a character. You know who you are and you’re consistent with that. The one thing I would say is pacing. Some parts tended to be a little slow, but overall it was very good and again good grasp of the character

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Your character in this monologue was really funny and there were some great moments. One thing I noticed was that you tended to pause between every line, which is fine, but it felt a bit too uniform and artificial, and the cadence of the lines sometimes felt repetitive (for example a lot of the time you got kind of breathy at the end of a line, which can work if you do it a couple times, but shouldn’t be the way you do every line); maybe try and have a more organic flow to it. It was cool to see you in a more understated role and I think you did a really good job with it

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Who are you talking to? This is a really cool monologue but you lost me at some points. Really cool intensity.

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I love this character that you created. The cocky and evil persona is really fun to watch. I love how you’re playing a game and not focused on whoever you’re talking to. I think it’d be great if you faced the chair out towards the audience as opposed to being on the side of the table. But otherwise, I thought it was really good.

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you had a lot of really good emotion in your delivery, i think you might want to explore a more haughty attitude, like youre above the person youre talking to and you are also above being emotionally invested in this person. obviously dont take the emotion out, just add that layer. really good job :)

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good, higher volume, good character. try not to hesitate, connect with audience more.

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I really really liked your choice to play solitaire while giving your monologue. In the beginning you sounded a little too angry/aggressive, for lack of a better word, but your tone of voice at the end was like perfect. Also your memorization was great and i really liked the strangeness of your character.