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I want to be the best at reading.So I haft to practice my skills during reading time,at home,and at dance.I can also practice my skills by paying attention during class and to not be goofing around.

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My goal for the TDA is to put more evidence and to be able to write a good conclusion.

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My goals for my TDA is. To make it make since. and my spelling correct . and I want to Remeber to put comas and put periods and correct everything and make it better than what I’m not paying attion to.

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I want to remember what the important thing about the text that I read.
I can get their if I pay attention to what the texts says.

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I want to become a better reader and how I’m going to become a better reader is I’m  going to read each and every night for 30 minutes.

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I want to use as much time as I can on my TDA because I want my TDA to be long and I want to give good evidence. I think I can achieve my goals because it has worked for me before.

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My goals for TDA are to be able to supply more evidence from the text. I also want to be able use “bigger” words. I think these goals are attainable because I have seen others, some in school others at home, do this.

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I want to stay on topic and actually answer the question this time and not right a whole summary basically like the other passage I did my other TDA

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I now believe I can write a good response (essay) to our TDA as long as I focus on properly answering the question that was asked. I really need to sharpen up on my vocabulary. But I WON’T be afraid to take spelling risks. It’s not acceptable at all to give a summary instead of an answer. And if I make a claim that’s really “out there” I’ll have to back it up with some solid evidence. I need to have a good opening to my essay, a body that makes good since, and a powerful conclusion that restates my answer. I hope that my essay will be mandatory!

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1. I don’t want to say “I hope you like it because I didn’t”
2. Put a lot more effort in it
3. I want to get my grammar together

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Kimberly’s reasons why.........for the TDA

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Kimberly’s reasons why.........for the TDA

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The things that I would keep in mind for a great response is to add a Introduction a Body paragraph and a conclusion and to keep in mind and that I actually need to answer the question and use the question in my response, and to include sentences from the paragraph in my response to understand it better.
I would also keep in mind that I need to put quotation marks when I use a sentence from the text. I need to make sure that I do not just right a summary.

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One thing I will remember next time I do a TDA is that it should not be like a summary, it should be well worded, and that it should answer the question, the way that I can attain it is by asking my mom to make me a TDA to answer and keep on doing TDAs until I know I will be able to get a good score on a TDA. Something that is good and helpful to remember is that your response for a TDA should be explicit. One last thing that you should keep in mind for a response to a TDAis that you should mention the author and the question.

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One thing I will remember next time I do a TDA is that it should not be like a summary, it should be well worded, and that it should answer the question, the way that I can attain it is by asking my mom to make me a TDA to answer and keep on doing TDAs until I know I will be able to get a good score on a TDA. Something that is good and helpful to remember is that your response for a TDA should be explicit. One last thing that you should keep in mind for a response to a TDAis that you should mention the author and the question.

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I want to stay on topic because when we stary i went all the way off tasks. I need to work on the intro and the body and the conclusion of the story because i need have and intro that people will like. I wont to answer the question that they are giving me to do.

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I would make sure that I would refer from the text often, use key details, make sure that it is not a summary and an actual analysis of the text, stay on the topic of the main idea, make sure my response was explicit and NOT implicit, plus I could fix any problems, spelling mistakes, and punctuation errors too. I could also keep in mind for my TDA that I would be able to read the TDA if it was handwritten, not a messy slop of letters.

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My goal that I have for my prompt is to include evidence from the text and also refer back to the text whaen proving a statement.

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A goal for me is to stay on topic. A way for me to make my goal “attainable” is for me to put my effort in my TDA. Another way for me to make it attainable is for me to reread and fix any problems in my writing.

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I want to not just summarize but Anilize the test how I am going to do this is by taking my time and referring back to the text for evidence. I am also going to origanize my writing before I do my final draft. The last thing I am going to do to improve is answear the question trufully and put it in my own words so that it is not playderising.

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I want to stay on topic because when sometimes when i write something else instead of the question its telling me to write, And i need to make sure I’m trying my best.

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I want to include  a passage atleast  and I also want to include strong evidence from the story. I want to makeshore I put apostrophe in my story.

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Something that I will keep in mind or do better on is to reread my response so I won’t miss anything. Another thing that is important to keep in mind is to stay on track when I am writing because I need to awnser thape question.

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I want to stay on topic of the main idea and also I want to make no or at least very very few grammar errors.

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I would make sure that I will have more details and giving reasons why or how you will put your story. Stay on topics do not change what you are doing

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I would make sure that I don’t make it a summary, I will take words from the text ( with quotation marks), I will do this by going over what I wrote/typed and I will make sure that it doesn’t sound like a summary but a analysis, and I will make sure if I take words from the text that I will add quotation marks.

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I want to give good details so my writing sounds mature and smooth.
I want to have good spelling so my readers know what I’m trying to explain.
I want to  give explanation from the text to show my statement to be true.
I want to stay on task so my readers won’t get confused.
I want to be proud of my work.
I want to take in others opinions so that i can make my response better.
And lastly I want to get a good grade on my work.