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1.Score at least 7 in IELTS test.
2.Go to the gym at least 4 times a week to exercise.
3.Past the final exam and be admitted by UT.
4.Try my best not being late and not stay up late at night.
5.Make a phone call to my parents every morning.

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Part II: Reviewing my study past learning approaches

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Part II: Reviewing my study past learning approaches

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I learn best when I learn alone.
The best approach for me is making notes, then review them before exam. However, I should do preview what I will learn in future classes.

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Student Semester Planner - TEMPLATE  - Editable

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BSc Technical Computer Science curriculum | University of Twente

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Some Computer Science themes are so important that they will appear in more than one module of the programme. One example is Cyber Security: how can we protect software, networks, information systems and interaction from attacks and abuse? Cyber Security is an important problem that can only be solved if future information specialists deploy the right methods and techniques.

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My attendance is not so good so I need to improve it.

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More communication

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Part IV : Original emails and feedback from other group.

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Part IV : Original emails and feedback from other group.

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To: j.d.vloon-haartman@utwente.nl
CC/BCC:
Subject: Seek for help
Mail:
Dear sir or madam,

I’m Justine B. a student form UT. I’m suffering from pressures which come from my studying problems. I strongly hope that you can offer me some helps. I need to do a re-sit in 4 weeks but also have to do 2 assignments and a presentation due over the next few weeks! I have tried my best to managing time so that I can have all this being well prepared. However, the time is still no enough for me. What’s worse is my landlord ask me to fix the window broken during a party. I’d be appreciated if you can help me go through this.

Best wishes,
Justine B.

Feedback:
The email should be little more polite to sure your respect to the person who will help you. Secondly, you should put forward a specific request to make the person you ask can offer you help more effective and make them feel convenience to offer help.

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Part I evidence: Birthday with mom and dad!

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Part I evidence: Birthday with mom and dad!

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I absolutely followed concepts of academic integrity. Here is my first AES Essay which has been modified.