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The woman was plump and wrapped in saffron sari, the man thin and clothed in a starched white shirt.

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“The woman was plump and wrapped in a saffron sari, the man thin and clothed in a starched white shirt.”

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“If it made them happy, after all, why not play along?”

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“The woman was plump and wrapped in a saffron sari, and the man thin and clothed in a starched white shirt.”

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If it made them happy, after all, why not play along?

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The dying come to die in the holy Ganges River, burning on its banks and escaping reincarnation in its waters.

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When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped.

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“In the Buddhist town of Dharamsala,...”

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“I knew, of course, that my white skin and light features were responsible for the attention...”

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“I offered that, sometimes, it really wasn’t so bad.”

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That night, when the train was dark ,the women’s eyes smiled up at  me before she faded off to sleep

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“‘One photo, one photo,’” they’d coo from the streets and stands: ‘one photo, please, miss, one photo”
Jacob

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“When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped”.

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“The woman was plump and wrapped in saffron sari, the man thin and clothed in a starched white shirt.”

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“The dying come to die in the holy Ganges River, burning in its banks and escaping reincarnation in its waters.”

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When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped.

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That night, when the train was dark, the woman’s eyes smiled up at me before she faded off to sleep.

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“I offered that maybe, sometimes, it really wasn’t so bad. Yes, they responded, nodding and thinking” (203).

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“If it made them happy, after all, why not play along?”

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“They agreed with the emotion, they saw what I meant.”

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“The woman was plump and wrapped in a saffron sari,” this one is an appositive comma because it describes the attire of the woman
Jacob

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“Not a single Indian requested a photograph, and not one time did I snap my own lens.”

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“Luke climbed down off his berth, past the thin aged man and his saffron wife, wandering out between the cars to see the jungle fade to palms.”

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“I knew, of course, that my white skin and light features were responsible for the attention, but some part of me still took pleasure from being stared at on trains and photographed in city gardens” (202).

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“That night, when the train was dark, the woman’s eyes smiled up at me before she faded off to sleep.”

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Embarrassed, I fumbled off my flash from within the stained train sheets, capturing the woman to bring home to a tiny box on my shelf.

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“When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped”

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“In the city of the dead...”

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“We read books, rolled dice, and looked out at rice fields and rivers.” This is an intro phrase for commas because she is explaining and moving into talking about the people observing them in their activities on the train
Jacob

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“When Luke and I landed in India.”

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Embarrassed, I fumbled off my flashfr om  within the the stained train sheets

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“Yet as the weeks wore on, it became harder to see fascination as a flattery.”

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“Thrust into a city where chaos prevails,”

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“The women was plump and wrapped in a saffron sari, the man thin and clothed in a starched white shirt”.

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“When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped” (201).

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“Embarrassed, I fumbled off my flash within the stained train seats,”