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Không hiểu tại sao sau tất cả các bài tập đã làm ở lớp, thì rút cuộc em lại chọn viết tất cả các câu văn ở dạng chủ động, thay vì bị động, em xem lại toàn bộ phần bài tập và video của Simon, gần như dạng bị động luôn được sử dụng mà!!!!

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310817 - writing task 2 - animals - feedback

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310817 - writing task 2 - animals - feedback

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You need to pay attention to the agreement between subject and verb in a sentence.

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question 25-30

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question 21-24

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Question 11-14

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Section 4- Four business values

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question 17-20

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Talk to new kitchen assistants
question 11-14

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090817 - writing task 2 - recruiting - feedback

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090817 - writing task 2 - recruiting - feedback

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Question 24-30

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Question 21-23

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250717 - line graph - fast food - feedback

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250717 - line graph - fast food - feedback

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Writing task 1 - fish and meat - feedback

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Writing task 1 - fish and meat - feedback

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I think that I repeated too many phrase like "the consumption of..." in this paragraph. Is there another way to rewrite it, teacher? Thanks.

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230717 - Writing task 2 - Education - Feedback

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230717 - Writing task 2 - Education - Feedback

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Thank you for submitting this work. Your grammar is improved in this piece though there're stil some basic mistakes. The essay is quite short, so you need to develop the idea. Here is my detaild feedback.

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Do dictation

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Full reading test - education - feedback

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Full reading test - education - feedback

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28/40=6.5

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So the counselling services we offer deal with any problems arising from your studies, or in your file outside the university. Let's take academic counselling. If you're confused about ....(to be continued in the picture)

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Thank you for making effort doing this exercise. However, your thoughts are quite shallow; you haven't developed the answers in a persuasive way. Answering questions in part 3 can be compared to a mini-essay because you have to support your ideas by reasons, arguments, examples and even comparison (with the past or with other countries/ areas). If you do not do so, you can't show your level of grammar, vocabulary and fluency. Another remarkable weakness is that you  haven't had the habit of using proper grammar, which confuses me  a lot about how you learned English at high school. Please, pay  a lot of attention to notice grammar points.

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I've written a new paragraph of discussing paragraph. Please check my latest one and let me know if it's good or not. By the way, I was wondering that is it okay or I will have low score if my paragraph is not enough 250 words. Thanks teacher!

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Thank you for doing dictation for this Section. I attach here the script so that you can compare it with your version.

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Dictation

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers , whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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9/13

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Questions 23-26. Sorry for my late posting teacher.

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Questions 14-22

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Thank you for submitting your work. You did have some relevant ideas to answer less complex questions. However, when it comes to more challenging questions, you need to read more to widen your knowledge related to trends of technology and energy issues. It is not necessary to be something in Vietnam, but you can talk about the general trend in the world instead.
Please see the attached file for details of my feedback.

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Thank you for submitting your work. You described the process clearly by a well-structured piece of writing. At some points, you could use PASSIVE VOICE because the subjects are not important (workers). You know how to use step language but there is a lack of rather complex grammar structure, for example which/ where.
Please see my detailed feedback  attached in "Track changes" condition and view "all markup" to see where I corrected.
If you have any question, don't hesitate to contact me.

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The process of recycling glass - feedback

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Bob tells his wife bad news

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The process of recycling glass

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7/10

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Question 34-40

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Question 31-33

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Describe an electronic equipment that you use it at home 

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I didn't know how to answer question 8-10. Because I never thought about these question before so it quite hard to me. I tried to search on google about question 8-10 but I think it was unrealistic compared to Vietnamese life. Could you show me some ideas to answer these question? Thanks teacher!

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Thank you for submitting this recording. You got almost perfect pronunciation and intonation. Please check the pronunciation of these words and practice them a few times:
developing, application, current, program. Well done!

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Glass production - vocabulary and answers 

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13/13 - well done!

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glass production - vocabulary and answers

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mineral => minerals

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Recording VOA speech. Because I'm sick so my voice is a little bit weird and it's hard to hear. I'm sorry

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Question 9-13

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200617 - Bakelite - answer and vocabulary - 8/13

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200617 - Bakelite - answer and vocabulary - 8/13

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Thank you for submitting this exercise. You got 8 right out of 13 questions. Please read my explanation for each answer in the comments.

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Question 9-13

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Question 4-8

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Question 1- 3

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Perkin's dye question 8-13

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Perkin's dye question 1-7

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Listen and fill in blanks.

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This is my latest version of private car paragraph. Thanks for your correction. I removed some unnecessary details and tried to replace some sentences base on your comment. Please let me know if there are some mistakes in this new paragraph. Thanks Ms. Ngoc!

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Thank you for submitting your work. You developed many relevant ideas to answer the question. The structure is acceptable. However, repetition of words and the fact that sometimes you went so far on the "cause and effect" are major weaknesses. Here are my detailed feedback:

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More and more people are relying on their private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

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Thank you for submitting your work. You have such a beautiful pronunciation and there were quite a lot of ideas in your talk. However, it seems to lack something to conclude your talk and the tense should be mostly in the past because the task is "Describe a journey you remember well". This means you describe a specific journey rather than a habit of your family.

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