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Saint Patrick's day occurs anually on March 17 observance the death of St. Patrick the patron Saint of Ireland. But Saint Patrick wasn't Ireland, he was a Roman citizen because Britain was Roman then an then he was ensalved and taken to Ireland where he either scaped or was released.The tradition said then he become a priest and went back to Ireland and was who had a lot of luck converting the Druid culture into Christians.In the early 18th century Irish inmigrants brought the tradition over to American colonies and it was there the Saint Patrick started to become a symbol or Iris heritage and culture

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Saint Patrick's day occurs anually on March 17 observance the death of St. Patrick the patron Saint of Ireland. But Saint Patrick wasn't Ireland, he was a Roman citizen because Britain was Roman then an then he was ensalved and taken to Ireland where he either scaped or was released.The tradition said then he become a priest and went back to Ireland and was who had a lot of luck converting the Druid culture into Christians.In the early 18th century Irish inmigrants brought the tradition over to American colonies and it was there the Saint Patrick started to become a symbol or Iris heritage and culture

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Miguel, your speech includes most of the elements mentioned in the criteria, however you made several grammar mistakes, please have a look at the following sentences you said:
he was architecture
he was museum
he was poem
Leonardo Da Vinci didn't have leadership skills because he has very quiet.
Leonardo want to be architecture

In addition it was not a real speech as you were reading all the time, you really need to work on preparing tasks and not reading as your fluency is your main weaknes.

Also, please check the pronunciation of the following words:
born | bɔrn

considered | kənˈsɪdərd

eleven | ɪˈlɛvən

women | ˈwɪmən

sculpturer | ˈskʌlpʧərər

invented | ɪnˈvɛntəd

painted | ˈpeɪntəd

wanted | ˈwɑntəd

inspired me | ɪnˈspaɪərd mi

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This is good in terms of grammar, however you really neeed to bring the energy up to have a more natural speech, Rhythm and intonation are very important.

Watch out for the pronunciation of the numbers.

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Uploaded by Miguel Mendoza on 2017-04-15.

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your presentation evidenced many of the resources to support your ideas, and your speech is very clear and interesting.

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I like your video, you explain very good the paper of tecnology in our lives. you use tag questions and answer the topics proposed in class. I agree with your opinion.