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1 must have a point
2 orgnis all the info
3 pout on paper

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Mr tan is as red as a tomato.He shouted at Carson for not coming home early after school.Mr tan had finished his 1 hour nap,he found his house dirty and messy.

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Writing is like an artwork.we use 5 senses to experience
1.smell
2.taste
3.touch
4.see
5.hear

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Writing is an artwork.
We need our 5 senses see,smell,hear,touch and taste.

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show don't tell is about using your senses. the senses are see,smell,hear,taste and touch. But we don't need to use taste because there is nothing to taste.you can't taste fear or joyfulness.

Here is an example,
When Sam saw a snake he jumped in fear. Eyes(see)His eyes were as big as a tomato.
When Sam heard the hiss of the snake he was going to pee in his pants. Ear(hear)the loud hiss.
when sam was walking the smell of the snake's breath followed. Nose (smell)the breath of the snake. then Sam dropped his phone and he when to pick it up but he picked up the snake. then he started to scram. Touch(hold)Sam was holding the snake.

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Mr Tan face was red when he look at his son exam paper and said in a strick voice to his son if he dose not improve in his result he will take away his games.

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Use the 5 senses to show the people reading how the character fell

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1)must have a point
2)write in a order frist thimg to the other
3)write so the people reading the paper will understand everthing that is going on.

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1) is Ideas.Use the 5W and the ih in the Narrative story.
2)Organization. it have to be  be enjoyable and easy to read
3)voice. add dialouge showing feeling
4)word choice. use exceptional word
5) sentence fluency.
6) convention. it have to be error free

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A)I will brainstorm and what will heppen in the story.
B)My problem when i write my story is i do not know how to write the story and when to put the problem in the story.

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Mr tan face was red as tomato flames starts to come out from his nose and ear when he heard that his son and daughter got call by the principle this afternoon. Mr tan went to both of their room and shouted at them and punishing them for 'NO USING YOUR PHONE FOR ONE MOUTH' Mr tan shouted loudly at them.

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Mr Tan face turned beet red when he recieved a call from his son's form teacher saying that his son has been misbehaving in class.Once Mr Tan reach to the school,fumes where coming out of his nose and ears,he immediately pulled,Bob his son,ears and yelling at Bob,Mr Tan even frowned at him profusely.Mr Tan breathe polluted the air smelling like stinky cheese as Bob covered his nose tightly while Mr Tan was scolding Bob.

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MR TAN FACE WAS AS RED AS A TOMATO. HE WENT TO TOM AND SCOLDED HIM FOR NOT DOING HIS HOMEWORK. HE SHOUTED LOUDLY UNTIL TOM STARTED CRYING.

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writing is  a artwork. it is just that you are using words. i can use the  5 senses in order to make my story even  more interesting .
the 5 senses are:
1) touch
2) smell
3) taste
4) hear
5)eyes

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We Show Not Tell.We Use The Senses, Seeing,Hearing,Smelling.Tasting And Touching.But In This Case We Do Not Need Tasting Cause There's Noting To Taste When Your Angry.

Mr Tan Is As Red As A Rose When He See His Daughter Exam Paper.
Eyes(See)-Eyes As Big As A Owl.Face Disappointed.Scary Eyes.
Ear(Hear)-Tone Of The Voice.Stomping His Feet.Breathing Loudly.Sighing *Sigh*
Nose(Smell)-Breathing Loudly.
Taste-(Don't Have)
Touch-Holding The Exam Paper Hard.

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Mr Tan face was as red as rose when he saw his Son exam papers

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mr tan's turn red when he found out that timmy stole his lap top

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Mr Tan's face was red as a cilli. He went to Tom because he never do his homework. Mr Tan shouted until Tom ear drum is pain.Tom cried loudly.

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mr tan's face was turning red as he discover

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Narrative story has 6 traits
1)ideas: 5 w 1 h
2)organisation

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writting is art  writer use art as word to descebing the character felling 

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writting is art  writer use art as word to descebing the character felling 

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choranolagical order
spatial order
have a point

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1) Is about the story
2) Must use chro

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1)STORY
2) CHRONDOGICAL ORDER
3)CREATE IMAGERY
4)SPATIAL ORDER
5) HAVE A POINT

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Write what happen first,then you write about the second thing .After that ,you write everything relevent to the story

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a narrative story

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is descrebing the character's feeling

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The 6 straits are
1 Ideas
2 ORGANIZATION
3 voice
4 word choice
5 sentence fluency
6 convention.

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6 TRAITS OR WRITING AND NARRATIVE WRITING

1) CANT MAKE THE STORY MAKE THE WRITING BORING.
2)THE WRITING MUST BE ENJOYABLE AND WE NEED WRITE THE DIALOUGE.
3)THE SENTENCE THAT IM WRITING MUST MOVE SMOOTHLY.
4)I NEED TO COMBINE THE SENTENCES TO MAKE A COMPOUND SENTENCE SERIES OF WORDS
5)CONVENTIONS
6)SPELLING GRAMMER AND PUNCTUATION
7)HOW TO REMEMBER THE 6 TRAITS REMEMBER THIS IOVW

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story
chrondogical order
create imagery
spatial order
have a point

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-story
-chrondogical oreder
-create imagery
-spatiol order
-have a point

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Mr Tan face i as red as a tomato.He slammed the door like a bull waiting to kill someone .Mr Tan barked like a  dog as loud as he could.When Mr Tan was awake from his nap,the house was messy with toys.Mr Tan face turn red like a hot spicy chilli.Tom and John heard their dad barking like a dog across their room.Both of them knew that they were in massive trouble.

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I REMEMBERED THERE ARE 6 TRAITS 5W 1H ,ORGANIZATION,WORD CHOICE,VOICE,SENTENCE FLUENCY,CONVENTIONS,ONCE FINISH DO PEER REVIEW

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have a poin ,story,spatical order,chronological order,create imagery

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descriptive writing is a story that is written in chrondogical and spatial order with imagery and having a point

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Mr Tan close the door.than he was shouting at billy room than billy ran to the his mom room and he knew that he forgotten to wash his cup now there is ants on his study table

now Mr Tan was so an

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Writing is a artwork,but instead of using paint,the writers will paint their story with words.

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THIS IS SHOW DO.T TELL BUT WE SUPPOSED NOT TO TELL :?

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STORY CHORONDOUIOAORDER CREATE I MANAGE SEAT IA OLDER HAVE A POINT

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Conventions  ,idea ,organization ,voices ,word choice ,fluency.  I need to remember the  6 trait.by yee tong

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i need help

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STORY IDEAS COLCE CAPTURP USE ADVERBS CHECK OVER USE WILL SENTENCE TURNEY COMBINE SENTENCE CONVENTS

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its a story has 6 traits
1)idea
2)organization
3)voice
4)word choice
5)sentence fluency
6)convention

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Bathan

1.Story.
2.Chronolagical
3.create Imagery
4.spatial order
5.Have A Point

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Writing is a artwork,but instead of using paint

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THE 6 TRAITS OF NARRATIVE WRITING IS  :
1) IDEAS
2) ORGANIZATION
3) VOICE
4) WORD CHOICE
5)SENTENCE FLUENCY
6) CONVENT

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MR.Tans face turned as red as a chilli as he saw the sons report card and exam marks as he failed all the subject and got one digit marks instead of two digit mark

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MR.Tans face turned as red as a chilli as he saw the sons report card and exam marks as he failed all the subject and got one digit marks instead of two digit mark

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he bite his teeth just for seeing the marks. just seeing his son made him angry. he wanted to break stuff
like the chair and table . and he smelled fire and he could hear his son saying give me  one more chance
VISHAAL

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1.Idea
2.Organization
3.voice
4.Word Choice
5.Sentence Fluency
6.Convention

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1.ideas-5ws and 1h
2.organization-enjoyable,easy to read:Beggining,middle,end
5sense
1.sight
2.hearing
3.taste
4.touch
5.smell
3.voice-thoughts and feelings
4.word choice-use exceptional words,capture the experience
5.sentence fluency
6.conventions

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A narrative story should be written as a simple story and based on the theme. e.g. A Kind Act.
a narrative story should include the six traits. Such as
1) ideas (5 w 1 h)
2) organization ( enjoyable + easy to read and using the 5 senses)
3) voice ( thoughts and feelings)
4) word choice ( use exceptional words)
5) sentence fluency ( combine sentences)
6) conventions ( must use punctuation, capitalization,spelling and grammar.

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THE 6 TRAITS OF NARRATIVE WRITING .  You need ideas to form your narrative story                              1)ideas
2)organization

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Improve on this sentence by applying the show, dont tell strategy.

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Improve on this sentence by applying the show, dont tell strategy.

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Mr Tan is angry.
How will you show and not tell he is angry?
Rewrite this sentence. Describe. Remember you must show and not tell!
Example: Mr Tan slammed the door. He was shouting across the room. Tom and John quickly ran to their bedroom. They knew they were in trouble for not doing their housework.

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There are 6 characteristics of narrative writing,i.e,ideas,organisation,voice,word choice,sentence fluency and finally conventions

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his face was full of salty water which dropped on the floor quickly and splashed 

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his face was full of salty water which dropped on the floor quickly and splashed 

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VISHAAL

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her face turned green as a bell pepper after watching the video 

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her face turned green as a bell pepper after watching the video 

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Vishaal

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Writing is like an artwork.We Experience Life By Using The Five Senses,Feeling,Smelling,Tasting,Seeing And Hearing.We Show Not Tell.

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Story
Chronolagical order
Create imagery
Spatial order
Have a point

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Narrative/Descriptive Essay
-Story
-Chronological Order
-Create Imagery
-Spatial Order
-Have A Point

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When John saw how chicken bleed he vomit out the food he eat

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Ideas of 5w1h 6traits and narrtive writing

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There Are 6 Traits Which Is
1.Dialogue,Details(Experience Or Event)
2.Organization(Beginning,Middle And End
3.Voice(Showing Thoughts And Feelings)
4.Word Choice(Use Exceptional Words That Capture The Experience)
5.Sentence Fluency(Combine Sentences)
6.Conventions(Punctuation,Capitalization,Spelling And Grammar

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1. story
2. chronological order
3. create imagery

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Writing is like an artwork. By carefully choosing words that paint a picture of a story using the 5 senses, we can make our story come to life in our readers' mind, thereby making it more engaging and real

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Descriptive writing is about telling a story that you normally witness in person . You should tell the story in a chronological order relevant to the story, create imagery that paints a picture for the reader, and also use spatial order to organise your paper.

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There are 6 characteristics of narrative writing, i.e. ideas, organisation, voice, word choice, sentence fluency and finally conventions

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I will start my brainstorming with the 5w and 1h and setting ,then I will have the problem ,then the resolustion and the conclusion .

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Writing is art.We can use our 5 senses to experience life.We show them instead of telling.We also can show the reader about the 5 senses we use for the story.

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her face turned as green as a bell pepper when she saw the video

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her face turned as green as a bell pepper when she saw the video

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Writing is a art work.I can use the 5 senses to describe a situation.If I apply this method in my work ,my story will be more interesting and not dull.(touch,smell,taste,hear and eyes)

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1.spatial order
2. have a point
3. create imagery

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task 3: I don't know what that guy is talking about
task 4: e.g when my parents fights can feel my goose bumps tingling on my body and tear dripping on my foot

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Narrative/Descriptive writing:
1)story
2)chrondogical order
3)create imagery
4)spatial order
5)have a point

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2. Organisation
3.voice
4.word choice
5. sentence fluency
6. conventions

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1.Narrative is you are being a narrator.
2.Create Imagery
3.Spatial Order is a way to organise your paper

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The traits:
1)Ideas
2)Organization
3)Voice
4)Word Choice
5)Sentence Fluency
6)Conventions

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2.organizastion

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The

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1.IDEAS WE NEED TO UNDERSTAND THE QUESTION AND THE 5WS AND 1H .

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1.Ideas
2.Organization
3.Voice
4.Word Choice
5.Sentence Fluency
6.Conventions-

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a)i will do my best in my brainstorm

b)i find brainstorm o hard for me

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the hard thing is that I do not have any ideas about a narrative story

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a)i will do my bast at my brninstorm

ib)

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a) iwill brainstorm and use the
5W+1H i will write about the character traits .
b) my problem by writting out a story is the selotion and it always have a problem in the story.

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a)I will do my bast in branistorm

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write 5w and 1h,write the problem in paragraph 2 and give your character traits

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I would Start To BrainStorm
and I Would Make a Problem While Doing Cause Its a Narrative Story Its a Little Difficult But i Try My Best To do It

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Part 1: i would  choose  the  picture that i want to talk about in my story.i would brainstorm the picture that i am going to write about.

part 2 the difficulty i have faced is when i was writing about the problem.

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A) I NEED TO IDENTIFY THE 5WS AND 1H AND FIND THE MEANING OF THE WORDS THAT I DONT KNOW.

B)I DONT UNDERSTAND WHAT TO WRITE IN MY STORY AND I CANT BRAINSTORM PROPERLY.

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use the 5 w and 1 h
what .when .why .who .where .how

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I will actually brainstom

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part 1 I think of the charachter and his tras and the problem

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a)i will do my bast at my brainstorm
b)i find brainstorm hard for me

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a) What I will normally do is brainstorm on the picture and describe it. And write according to the theme.

b) I find it difficult to narrate as i am not able to write according to the theme and the picture. I also do not link the sentences together .

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i need to make the story interesting but I can make it interesting .

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1) I would brainstorm on the picture that I wanted to write
2) I find nothing difficult about it

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I will apply the thing in my narrative story like brainstoming and 5W and 1H
PART 2:BY thinging how my story is related to the title and pictures