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Waiting for the green light, I prepare myself for a birthday race. This is the first time I’ve done go-karting. I don’t know how I will do and I don’t understand the rules.

The light goes green, we’re off! I’m already feeling the helmet starting to get hot from my breathing. I turn the corner, but it’s too harsh and I crash my kart into the tyres that form the corners. Someone has to come and set me back onto the track.

Once I get started again, I feel a rush of adrenaline go through my body. This time I know how to get around. I attempt to overtake the other people on the track. I manage to take 2nd place for about a lap, but I get overtaken again.

I crash about three more times but after a few more rounds I am getting better I still don’t understand how the scores work.

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I pressed my chest against the soft, slightly damp grass looking at the atmosphere around me. Hundreds of small torch lights guarding the token that all 200 of souls like me came to take. A light was nearby. Everyone dropped to the floor, helplessly waiting for it to move on. The light was getting closer. It was building up speed. Venturing in a path of destruction looking like it wouldn’t ever stop. I couldn’t just let myself be served on a silver platter. Running away would make me an easy target, but waiting would lead to my destruction. Mindlessly I made a decision. I rolled. I rolled faster than I ever could. I was safe. But at an expense. By that time one of my jandals had slipped off and onto the ground. But it was too late. The light had spotted the missing shoe and didn’t move on. I could of kept going, but everything felt strange with only one shoe. I had to take a risk. With the torch still on the shoe I swiftly took it. Rolled to safety, and put it on. Then I learnt that wearing the wrong shoes could lead to your destruction.

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Paintball.

As we walk down the hill to ready up our guns and load them with ammunition, the owner shouts, “Get ready to run! 3! 2! 1! Go!”.

We all sprint down the hill and I hear shots already.  I see a long dark tunnel and go towards it. I hear footsteps behind me as someone falls down.

I look behind me in the tunnel to see If anyone is still chasing me but see nothing. So I sit down to take a rest outside it.

As I walk silently back into the tunnel, I think there are just two of us left, so I go to search for my enemy. Outside, he knows I am there and is prepared to shoot.
I quickly fall on the ground  with perfect timing just before he shoots.
He misses and then I reflectively shoot him in the chest!
"Yes!!!!!!!!" I say to myself.

We say 'good game' to each other and walk away.

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I sprint up the hill the dusty smell and the air tastes so bland and misty I don’t want to stay up in this horrible place but I guess I’ll be safe here for a while. I’m still afraid for my life though, I’m only a herbivore.  Finally I'm up at the top right by the humongous water tanks. I lean into them hoping for some warmth,  but all I could feel was cold metal. I breath. Waiting. But no one comes, Great, I’m safe for now. I watch overhead as I see herbivore after herbivore getting caught and robbed of their lives; what a brutal scene. Then an element starts running straight for me but gets distracted by a carnivore.

Phew that was a close one. But I spoke to soon completely out of nowhere comes two raging carnivores hungry for some lives. Looking around I see no escape except for behind me, I turn and start sprinting down the hill but I stop in dismay. Right there is a damp, murky swamp. Their not to far behind me now, I panic I don’t want to die. I fight through the mud and stop, there’s no way I can go any further. They stop. They think and come for me, they just won’t turn back one of their hand reaches out. This can’t happen, I only have 2 lives left. They connect this is terrible 1 life left, the next carnivore reaches, I react I jump and then the lifesaving car horn screeches I’m saved except I’m just super muddy but it was all worth it in the end.

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Go-CartingI’m winning,I think,as I slide around a corner just to catch a glimps of the scoreboard.NO I scream,secound this is not good, so I speed up,slide around a courner and CRASH.Dahm 5th.I take a deep breath and start up my engine, I turn the courner and take it to the next gear.As my go-cart  speeds up I turn the courner and come in with the overtake missing the cart by milimetres.Then I see that the overtake had caused him to crash.Whoops.Now I take the long streak like a drag racer, push it to third gear, hear the thunderous engine, smell the fuel being burned up and do the overtake.Yes 3rd,now just two more to go.I slide around the courner, tap the person ahead of me’s back bumper, and they suprisingly spin out of controll.2nd,wait a minute, the person in 1st just crashed.I go round the courner and i’m in first.I can see the finish line and am nearly there,but suddenly all of a sudden I CRASH and think NO I will lose but then the person behind me crashes causing everyone else to crash so I quickly pass the line and WIN.Victory was mine.Now I was the king of the track 3 years in a row. By:Jackson Brown

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Go-CartingI’m winning,I think,as I slide around a corner just to catch a glimps of the scoreboard.NO I scream,secound this is not good, so I speed up,slide around a courner and CRASH.Dahm 5th.I take a deep breath and start up my engine, I turn the courner and take it to the next gear.As my go-cart  speeds up I turn the courner and come in with the overtake missing the cart by milimetres.Then I see that the overtake had caused him to crash.Whoops.Now I take the long streak like a drag racer, push it to third gear, hear the thunderous engine, smell the fuel being burned up and do the overtake.Yes 3rd,now just two more to go.I slide around the courner, tap the person ahead of me’s back bumper, and they suprisingly spin out of controll.2nd,wait a minute, the person in 1st just crashed.I go round the courner and i’m in first.I can see the finish line and am nearly there,but suddenly all of a sudden I CRASH and think NO I will lose but then the person behind me crashes causing everyone else to crash so I quickly pass the line and WIN.Victory was mine.Now I was the king of the track 3 years in a row. By:Jackson Brown

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When the days are cold and the saints keep falling that means paintball war! But this was my third round so  War III.  I  called it Paintball World War III.

The last stand began...

the balls went whizzing past my head. (Probably because I was the team captain.)  We were playing capture the flag, very painful!

I decided that my team would win because that's how I roll.

Then I went for the flag like a cheetah sprinting from a flash flood.  I had do do dive rolls and roly polys to snatch the flag off the cone.  Before the other team knew it my team had won.  We were the victors and we did a show off dance, screaming 'We beat you! We beat you!'

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Go Home Stay Home

I jumped up into the tunnel and watched the tagger count. Loudly I hear shout and I suddenly knew, the tagger was coming. Quietly I lay still in the tunnel, I slowly get into a crawling position and get out, I lay low not knowing where the predator is.

Now I was on a rock wall on the far side, then someone shouts “don’t tag me.” Slowly like a snail, I climb down then the tagger is near and I climb back up as they trap me, suddenly I hop down and run away like my life depends on it, everyone is at the base and I get cut off by the tagger, shock flows throughout my body, but it doesn’t distract me and I dodge the tagger and run away.

After a while I get out into open space and run, I touch The Base and I didn’t believe it  at first but I knew victory was mine, throughout my victory celebration I knew that the tagger would be out for me next time.

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As we rush in the grassy bank slipping and hiding we make it down. I run but slip into a bush as my friends stay back up suddenly it's ,”Found you boys! Now go back and try again,” as I still hide holding my breath nearly giving out to the seeker.

My friends rush back quickly and quietly till we make it around the back of the place. Sneaking, praying to not be caught till we see someone.Running through the bushes grasping for the flag trying to stay still but grabbing it till the defender slips and  doesn't see me jump for the flag grabbing and sneaking back around rushing to Home making it.

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Spotlight

The light beam was reflecting the enemy getting closer and closer. I was about to get endeveld down like a wolf ripping me up.  My heart quickened its beat thumping faster and faster.The enemy turned and looked the other way.

“found you”

he said with a crooked smile I knew I was going to be next I ducked and ran trying to win the battle. I was about to be the meat who got summoned and feasted on. My shadow was reflecting the enemy shon the light on me I ducked in an instance not knowing what was going to happen. Footsteps were getting further away I knew I was safe. The rattling sound of the tree was getting suspicious for the enemy who was going to find me soon “spotlight”.

my face turned evil with a sly grin I hadn’t been found yet haha I said like a evil witch who was cooking up there curse.silence that's all I could hear. Footsteps getting closer. Step by step. The wicked laugh rose again. Not wondering where to go or hide. Beneath my feet leafs were being crunched the noise was louder than a cicada in the summer morning “crunch”.

“SPOTLIGHT”

I had been found I froze and stood still no emotion came out of me except for a loud laugh which got everyone laughing.

Alex

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I am buried underneath a pile of blankets, anxiously waiting for the seeker to find me. I can hear everyone else running around trying to find a hiding spot. 3, 2, 1. Everything goes silent. Moments pass and I start to think that they have forgotten about me. Suddenly I hear footsteps coming my way. I rustle underneath all the blankets trying to keep myself from getting caught. As the door creaked open I started to lose hope in my hiding spot. Then someone yelled

“Found you!” And I got up and said

“Let’s play again.”

By Stella

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Its was a cold Winter's night when Me, Willian, Naomi, Talia, Tasmi and Will.“3…..2….1.... HERE I COME” Talia yellsWhile I hide behind a tree with William. Two others climbed a tree and and of course my sister lies in the middle of grass. Talia starts running footsteps get louder and louder. I run. Talia chasing while Naomi and the others run Home. I try to lose her but it doesn't work so I turn around run towards her go left then right and back to left breaking her ankles some would say, it works so I run as fast as I can to Home. “Go Home stay Home 1,2,3” I shout 

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Its was a cold Winter's night when Me, Willian, Naomi, Talia, Tasmi and Will.“3…..2….1.... HERE I COME” Talia yellsWhile I hide behind a tree with William. Two others climbed a tree and and of course my sister lies in the middle of grass. Talia starts running footsteps get louder and louder. I run. Talia chasing while Naomi and the others run Home. I try to lose her but it doesn't work so I turn around run towards her go left then right and back to left breaking her ankles some would say, it works so I run as fast as I can to Home. “Go Home stay Home 1,2,3” I shout 

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JONO

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Only 10 seconds left and i still don’t have a hiding spot, i look round panicking till i see it, the perfect one.I run as fast as i can towards it diving in the hole. “3...2...1” and then the game begins, i stand still trying not to move at all. People are  screaming  and shouting  as they are  found, which makes me panic  even more. The light gets closer getting more people by the second until  it’s behind me, my body turns to stone  , motionless. But they walk straight past me, i relax and take a deep breath, they turn around the light blinding me, i stumble  back hitting my head on the ground “spotlight!” they scream i climb out of the hole and walk back towards home, disappointed but happy I  got that far. 

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Only 10 seconds left and i still don’t have a hiding spot, i look round panicking till i see it, the perfect one.I run as fast as i can towards it diving in the hole. “3...2...1” and then the game begins, i stand still trying not to move at all. People are  screaming  and shouting  as they are  found, which makes me panic  even more. The light gets closer getting more people by the second until  it’s behind me, my body turns to stone  , motionless. But they walk straight past me, i relax and take a deep breath, they turn around the light blinding me, i stumble  back hitting my head on the ground “spotlight!” they scream i climb out of the hole and walk back towards home, disappointed but happy I  got that far. 

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Quiet

Cold sweat rolled down my back as I lay on the floor and rolled under the bed, making the bags under the bed crackle. That should be enough noise, I thought to myself. I rolled out, quietly this time, and peered out the door. He heard the noise! Still, he was taking his time, trying to be quiet. As was I. I padded back into the bedroom and grabbed my brother’s phone with shaking hands. Quickly I texted my phone. I had hidden it specifically for this plan. DING! The scary silhouette turned, and lumbered towards the sound. This was my chance.

While darting towards the safe room it felt like time had slowed down. Every step was loud, slow and exhausting. But I made it. I would make a pretty good spy.

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I kneel down silently in the shrub next to my friends. My heart beats fast as the tagger passes me. Silhouettes of my classmates running cast on the lawn as the tagger suddenly turns around and flashes the torch onto them “Spotlight!” she shouts.

Complaining children shuffle back into their cabins, but we still haven’t been found.

“I think we have everyone” shouts one of the teachers

“No you haven’t” whispers my friend Kate

All of a sudden the tagger turns around and shines the light onto the bush we were in "got you!" she shouts, we had been caught.

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Laser Tag

It was my best friend's birthday party and we were going to Laser Force. We all got geared up and then watched a safety video that showed us how to play. We got put into teams and started to play.

The instructor said, ‘One, two, three go!”
I ran as fast as I could, trying not to get shot. I was like a sneaky little mouse hiding from a hungry vicious cat.
‘Oh snap!” I said as I got hit on the shoulder.
Suddenly one of my friends slipped and she started to cry, but no one else could hear her but me. So being the good friend that I am I went to help her.

Unfortunately, I was losing all my points. Everyone kept on aiming at me. In the end I lost because I helped my friend, but at least I was being nice.

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I am at the very back of my parents wardrobe covered in coats and shoes. Anxiously waiting for the seeker to enter the room.

It’s sunny outside in the light but I’m locked away, so all I see is the dark, this makes me even more fearful. All of a sudden I hear a loud noise from above me, and something falls onto the ground. I scream but cover my mouth afraid someone will hear me. I can’t see anything. Something rubs against my leg and I jump, terrifed. I look down and see that it’s only my cat. I relax and start to laugh forgetting to be quiet. Then the door opens and someone yells,

“Found you!” and I sigh, for I have been caught.

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PAINT BALL                          I leap over the old jagged wood my heart is pounding like a leopards running from their prey. I hear gun shots left, right, under and above me. BANG !!! I am shot. The paint splatters down my leg like a river I run like I have never run before. I see my enemy from a distance. Away I run so snake like that they don't see me coming I approach my victim BANG !!! I shot them right on the arm my team mate runs towards me and yells, "I have got the flag. We won!".

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PAINT BALL                          I leap over the old jagged wood my heart is pounding like a leopards running from their prey. I hear gun shots left, right, under and above me. BANG !!! I am shot. The paint splatters down my leg like a river I run like I have never run before. I see my enemy from a distance. Away I run so snake like that they don't see me coming I approach my victim BANG !!! I shot them right on the arm my team mate runs towards me and yells, "I have got the flag. We won!".

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💥 JAMI

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I’m crouching in the swallowing darkness. I’ve been shot. I look around, a target is to my right. Once I regained my strength I hurtled towards the target. I aimed at the target, and with one shot and one burst of light, the target had been hit.

At this point of the game I am confident. I run through the maze shooting everyone in sight. Everyone yelling in dismay as their light flickers out. I have eventually hit all the targets but one. The green target. I'm hide in the corner waiting to run, but a green player is running down the ramp. Getting closer, and closer. I think quick. I aim at the player through the window and with a burst of light, The beam reflects off the window and hits the green player, right In the chest.

As I sprint, excitement and adrenaline flood my body as I’m just so close to the last target…. Suddenly a green player stands before me blocking me from coming any closer. The green player aims. There is nothing I could do…. The beam burst out of the gun, but hits the wall, because I’ve ducked under the laser and is now sprinting past the green player. As I am sprinting around the corner, I turn and hit the green player right in the stomach. Their light flickers out.

Now I am directly in front of the green target and no one is in sight. A beam of light flows from my gun. I hit the target. A burst of relief fills me as I run back to my Base. But Just I arrive, the game finishes. I leave the arena confidently. I won.

By Baeleigh

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Hide and Seek

10,9,8…..She starts to count I have to find the best place to hide, this seeker cheats, I run to the nearest room looking for a cupboard or something ,nothing, on to the next room “come on evie find a cupboard or something even better like some draws under a bed!!” Yes I get into one and push it under the bed awaiting my fate.

I hear the seeker coming down the stairs to the room the tension is so thick you could cut with knife, I stop breathing for a few seconds, my breathing is really loud when i'm scared. She looks in the cupboard, and tries a few tricks to make me give up my spot like turning, hesitate walk a few steps and turn around super fast or call out really loud “hey i found you you can come out now”. Nothing works she's convinced i'm not there she swivels around and runs to another room, I’m safe I win “let's have another game!!!”

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In the corner of my eye I see the light beam reflecting off the car mirror.
I haul myself further into the tree smashing into my freinds,
‘What was that for!’
one of them whispered
‘Hes coming’
I said as quiet as a mouse.
So we all huddle like a soccer ball hoping not to be found. We counted the seconds under our breath till one person tilted their head.
‘Were all good’
he praised in a glorious voice.
Unable to see who is who I grabbed someone's jumper and dashed through the cold night. Like a army we dashed out of bounds but someone lets ot a howl of victory. We all froze like ice as we saw the beam charging towards us. I surveyed my surrounding and dive into the gutter. Everyone followed one by one. I held my nose as the sewage water stunk the air. The sound of two people getting sited echoed through the dark sky. All i could hear now was my heart beating as fast as bolt, hoping for them not to snitch me in. they led him away. Thankfully my heart slows down. We sprint down the alleyway like a car chase and hide in the stairs of a building. Minutes tick pass as we realize they have given up. The feeling was spectacular.

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“3...2….1…. HERE I COME!” My cousin Pesi shouted from downstairs.

I quickly run into the bathroom looking for a place to hide. I hide underneath the sink and wait there hoping not to get found. Pesi throws open the bathroom door. I hold my breath and my palms become sweaty. He leaves the room still looking back, I can breath again. I rush out the bathroom sneaking quietly into his bedroom leaving no trail. I scan the room looking for any hiding places.Suddenly I hear footsteps getting louder and faster. I open the window it makes a bit of a creaking noise, I jump out of the window onto the deck. I pear around the corner looking if Pesi was there. I see no sign of him so I enter another bedroom from the deck then rush down stairs.

“RAHH!”

I jump. I start running to the door then when I turn around I see Moses.

“ I thought you were Pesi!” I shouted.

“ I know” he says smiling.

I had a feeling that Pesi could hear us so I crept behind the couch and Moses tagged along.

“ I know where Miguel is hiding” he whispered.

“ Okay.” I whisper back.

I watch Pesi walked down with Elizabeth looking everywhere from under the couch.I see Elizabeth and Pesi smiling and they start walking toward us trying not to look like they’ve found us. They start running and I jump over the couch running back upstairs leaving Moses behind. They don’t see him they start chasing after me. I rush onto the deck, I see Pesi on the other side I turn to head back then my sister Elizabeth tagged me.

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I stand in my team's headquarters . All other teammates are away to earn points , I am alone.There’s a loud shooting noise behind me , Someone had tried to shoot me and failed . With a rush of adrenalin I realise I must protect the base . It is the point of the game after all. I stand back to back against the multi-coloured poll , no one will earn any points off green team . More shots are fired around me as the fear sets in. I hear footsteps , someone is close and is trying to be quiet .

“Away! I have a gun you know!” I say peering into the darkness

“So do I!” The voice says . They fire , I take the bullet .That’s what counts ,as long as they don’t hit the poll green team will win .

“Ha !” They say in triumph . I try to shoot at them and remember the gun will be disabled for another four seconds . Long enough for them to hit the poll . Without hesitation they fire .One point is taken. Lucky for me I regain my shields and gun power as soon as they strike. I start firing in their direction , I let out a sigh of relief as I hear them run away.

~Olivia

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I poked my head round the corner of the building, and to my horror, saw four Carnivores waiting there. I looked behind me and saw five Elements. I was trapped! None of them had spotted me yet but it was only a matter of time, and I only had three lives left. There was only one thing to do.

I ran out in front of the Carnivores and when they spotted me, I turned around and ran towards the Elements. The Elements saw us coming their way and charged towards us, but I dodged out of the way and tiptoed away from the chaos, quiet as a mouse, stealthily sneaking away. I hoped nobody would notice me.

Behind me, a firey battle raged. Some of the Carnivores were caught but others realised what was happening and ran away. Then one of the Elements spotted me and ran in my direction.

I ran faster, but the Element was gaining. I suddenly turned down some steps and the momentum carried the Element on. Then a Herbivore appeared. Forgetting their pursuit, the hungry Element greedily charged at the Herbivore while I scrambled away to safety. I was tired and sweating. Panting like a dog, I tore open my bag and drank some refreshing water. Then it was time to get back into action.

Jack B

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Bull Rush

It's all on, me vs all I've got to somehow get through everyone. I'm now the prey everyone is targeting me, I look around for gaps to run through but they all decide to build a wall.

I make a split second decision to run around the sideline but an army of people are chasing me. I weave through a few people and fend off another, I can view the finish line but I have one man to beat I predict it will be a tough encounter. I know he's faster than me so I just run it straight he tries to tackle me he grips on with one bare hand but I keep striding for the try line. Eventually I feel his grip come loose.

There it is I thought, the try line. Glory was mine, I finally made it.

Murphy

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I will find you

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run go hide

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-Paintball
-Laser tag
-Go-carts
-Ball rush
-Black panther

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may we cross the river

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paintball

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crocodile crocodile

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Spotlight in the backyard.

Running away. I don’t have many options, but finally I see a perfect spot. No one will find me here.

Silhouettes of trees everywhere.

“Ready or not here I come!” I hear in the distance.

I see tiny specks of white in the corner of my eye.
"Oh no, they're getting closer and closer…"I whisper to myself.

“I found you!” someone says to another player.

Oh no I think to myself, the voice keeps gets louder and louder.
“Ahh!”
The light gets brighter and brighter.

“I found you!” they shout.

A bright light flash flashes straight in my face.

“You're covered in mud!”

Grace

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Tamsin

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2016 Camp spotlight

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black panther
hide and seek
spotlight

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Black panther

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Lazer force

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go home stay home

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last year playing animal survivor last year at camp

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Jack B

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Jackson                     Lots of figarative language

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Jackson                     Lots of figarative language

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figurtive language

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Really Life Like

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spotlight

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specific detail

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Jack B

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Short

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Jami and Hannah

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Jack B

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I liked the sentence: 'It's funny how no one ever bothers to look up.'

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Tells you whats happening and scary. -Balsa
It's very descriptive and lots of simple sentences. -Rita
Very desripitive easy to imagine. -Nico
At camp Balsa played capture the flag. I ran away from luke
At rotoiti last year i played spotlight. - rita

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Short sentences, Specific detail.

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Figurative language like similies and metaphors.

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Jack B

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Jack B

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Hannah and Jami

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5 senses (Description.)

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Good description of everything like dewy grass.

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its been described really well it's kinda scary

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It's very well described. It's like you are the person and you are the one who almost got caught.

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The reader is able to imagine the scene perfectly

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Its written well so it is like poam

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I am squashed into the wall with my heart beating fast.  I can smell the rabbit I kept in here two years ago.  People talk and yell as they get caught.  Minutes pass and I'm still laying here. Still. Silent. The minutes feel like seconds.  I can hear someone coming.  Whispering. Breathing.  They are coming towards me.  I can almost feel them walking.  I am motionless.  The cane basket is now poking into me.  My heart starts beating fast again like my chest is going to burst.  Beside me is a blanket.  I quickly cover myself with it.  I cannot feel anything except the warmth of the blanket.  I see her peering in.  She looks around a little while, then she walks away.  The blanket saved me.

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It’s funny, I think, as I look down at the park below me, how no one ever bothers to look up. The night is blanketed in darkness, clouds blotting out the moon, but I can see the others down below, working their way toward the middle of the field, toward the safety of Home.
They are moving in short dashes, trying to avoid being seen. I can see a dark silhouette crouching in wait beneath one of the larger trees. There is a triumphant yell from somewhere to my left and a figure bursts out from their hiding place in the dense foliage, the tagger in hot pursuit. This is my chance!

While the tagger is distracted I swing down from my vantage point in the tree and sprint towards the middle of the field, toward Home. The tagger spots me and alters his course, coming at me on the diagonal. I run faster but realise, with growing dismay, that I'm not gonna make it. Then I hear a yell and turn just in time to see my pursuer trip over their own feet and fall to the dewy grass. He’s ok, just really, really muddy.

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Remember... intro / middle/ conclusion