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I saw a teleplay was very  interesting. "The  First Half Of My Life " . This  teleplay  narrated:  A housewife with a comfortable life,her name is Luo. She indulged in a life of priulege,so she was unaware of the crisis in the marriage. Until one day her husband asked for divorce. Luo has been married for 15 years, so she can not acceped this reality. She want to save her husband with her daughter and family, but her husband was determined. She feel she lost everything and she was so sad. Then, she broke the the dilemma with the help of her friend and started the new life. She enter the workplace, work-hard everyday. Finally,she eventually became an independent woman. In her life,there was a man who accompanied her though difficult times,so they're together. This teleplay made we very touched. In my opinion, I think have a good job and being independent it's very important for a woman. Hopefully, I can grow up to be an excellent person.

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I like pet very much, I have three cats and one dog and one rabbit and two cave cobayas in my China's home. And when I arrive Vancouver I got a cat in my home. My dog really like eating.When I eat anything at home she always hug my leg and ask for food everytime. My little cat name is "huahua"means"flower".She like play with my dog so much. When my dog go through with her , she usually trip my dog.And her hoby is clamp the curtains and stay air conditioner and cabinet.

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My name is Carina.I am from Beijing China. My Chinese name is Yang yang, my friend usually tell me the"little sheep" because the"yang" means "sheep" in chinese. My hometown is a beautiful city and it is capital city of China ,So the tourism of my hometown is very developed during the holidays.There will be a lot of people traveling here. So, the scenic spot is very busy.such as The Great Wall、The Forbidden City and so on. When I arrive Vancouver, I get a cat so when I stay at home I am not feel lonely.He have black and white fur and he always use his watery eyes look at me .When he feel board he usually make faces .
I think he is a cute cat and he bring the happness for me

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This is my first free writing use English, I think free writing is you talk to yourself. So, I think I am great, In next summer I will go to Hong Kong to see my friends. I will drunk on the street. I want back to old school. I will take many picture about my cat. It is an angel. I like black that is my favorit colour. So I often sun to make myself be black. My life is interesting I like the strange things. I like winter and rainy day. Headphones are essential for me. It is not time to make a change. I want to glide. I hate hot. I do not like basketball. I care about soccer. In free writing I do not want write a story. My favorite winter is coming. I wish everyone in this winter can be happy.

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In the world have more than 3003 million gods. I have been thingking about what my faith is. I went to church to pray, kneel before the Buddha, I said namaste, I went to the Taoist for destiny. I know some of God's stories. I think that I respect but I do not believe. In my heart I have a god but I have not seen. I can not forget all the things that have helped for me. Thanks for everything I have. I have seen the life of ascetic. I become friend with believers. If you want the world to believe you first you have to believe this world. So, I can say that all faith I believe by me or I do not believe any faith. My faith is connect in my mind

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My name is Tylor. The name is important for me. I come from Yan Tai city Shandong province China. Here is a coastal city. I am good at swimming. My favorite  countries are Netherlands and Chinese. I like Canada, such as Toronto, Halifax and Montreal, but I do not like Vancouver, because it changed me a lot here. I like travel, Chinese Rap, cats and horror movie. The reason I come to Vancouver was my sister and my best friends were here, but they all left here to their dream cities. I am envious of them. I want to talk to them:" Take care of ourselves." I want to have a studio in The Hague about music, painting and phoyography.  I will be here waiting for you to spend a dream life together. I think family is the most important for me. I do not big dream, but I love life.

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freewriting 5 min
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its so boring today, I didn't get out home because I caught cold its suck . yesterday night my friends called me to club  but I cant go there I'm feeling ill  and I don't what am I write .but I must keep writing  . ok lets talk about my home town  that is a wonderful beautiful biggest interesting place well done! ........  I thought time is enough   so  bye!

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My name is Ding , I come from China, Xin Jiang , it is northwest China . I'm 20 years old and , I went to Canada for study I have been here for two years .
When I first came to Canada Vancouver I thought I don't like here because here is so calmness and no friends no body care u but when I lived here 1 years I thought I cant leave here  because I started love this place . people in here are friendly and, weather was always  a bright spring days so I won't leave here this beautiful place.

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Free writing
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Today I read a book called Harry Potter. It was written by JK Rowling, a british writer.She old us a story about a witch named Harry Potter. This brave boy's parents was killed by a bad man. This man wanted to kill Harry but failed. Harry is kind and brave so that he beated this man.

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Skiing is an interesting sport which I really like.  I live in northern part of China. there don't have too much snow, so I don't have too much chance to go skiing. My brother loves skiing very much because he had never seen the snow until he came to Canada. He is a friendly person and he likes to share his hobbies with me，so my first contact with skiing was when my brother took me to go to the ski resort.I wear the warmest clothes because the weather is cold, but I still feel happy and excited.

I had skate before and I also like snow because snow looks clean and beautiful. So when I started skiing I learned very quickly and I liked it too.  In last years I went to take an instructor test and teach some student it makes me feeling pride and the sense of accomplishment. I will do it again this year because I really enjoy whatever skiing or teaching.

Remember compound sentences require two subjects and two vers

William

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China is a country which have a long history in the world. 5000 years ago, people already have their own culture and different types of the living system. When people invent the languages, the relationship of equals was broken. Thus, some people became an emperor, because those person is a competent person and they can leading  others.

Over time, in this country, more and more interesting things were peoduced and people's life become more rich and happiness. Our tactful ancestor peoduced compass、gunpowder、papermaking technology and printing. All of the things are really amazing and useful, so we have been using it up to now.

People always have different life style. More specifically, people eat various food and they wear unlike clothes, because those different things are represent the different national cultures.

Accordingly, people traveling to China is a great thing.

Nola.

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Please write a paragraph: 100-200 words: You can choose any topic from your freewriting or ideas we've talked about in class.
Please include:
- 3 compound sentences (make dark)
- 10 adjectives (put in italics)
- Make sure each sentences has a subject and verb.

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Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? Some think certain numbers may bring good luck. These numbers include “4,8,9” and so on. Therefore, when they want to choose a car number or a phone number, they are included to choose the number which end with these lucky numbers.but i do not have lucky number. 0 to 9 all is my bad dream

http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_54840285010003pj.html
Wow! This person wrote exactly the same as you!!  Unfortunately, she's not in my class so I can't give her a grade. Please use your own words so I can give YOU a grade!

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I slept late last night because I missing my parents. I have a phone call with my mom and she was busy. I am not really talking with her. then I thinking about a girl. She is pretty and cute sometimes she is funny when she talking to me. I feel tired so I drunk beer for relaxing.but it makes me feel dizzy. but I still have homework have to do. then I stop thinking anything and shut down the music and do my homework.

William

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My name is William Zijun Yu . I come from Beijing China. I like listening to music, and electronic music is my favorite because I really enjoy going to the music festival with my friends. I have a lot of hobbies, such as watching movies, skiing, and other outdoor activities.

I love to live in Vancouver. there is such beautiful city I ever have seen before. article people are friendly. if I have any opportunity, I would like my family comes there to come here and live in Vancouver.

I am a social person, I love to make friends with others. I enjoy talking with my friends. Whether it is to share happiness or share the pain. I like helping people who really need it and also I have the ability. it makes me feel so great.

Good! Please make the changes

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Tomorrow i want to go to Metrotown with my friends Esther and Jane, we will eat the chinese food in the restaurant and i would like to buy a pop drink, when we finish eating, we will go to the cinema, and watch the new movie that called "it", it is really scary, my friend told me before, this movie have a bad man in there, he catch a lot of peoples (people is already plural, you don't need to add s) and i think he killed him, maybe...Ah,,i hope i do not have too much homework tomorrow, and i hope we will have time to go to the mountain to see the sunset, ah, i am just kidding..lollll....

Nola : )
(i did not found any button that can helps me to under line. so i just make the word become more thick..)

Good job!

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Set a timer for 5 minutes and type WITHOUT stopping! Don't worry about grammar or making sense for this one :) After you are finished, re-read and underline anything you think was interesting or funny!

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Hello,every one!

My name is Feng Yang. I'm a 17years old

I live in the beautiful city of FuJian Fuzhou.  Now I'm went to Vancouver for study it's good for me cause I can learn a little bit English. I'm an active ,lovely and clever

I belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.I also like sports very much.Such as,running,volleyball and so on.I'm kind-hearted.If you need help ,please come to me .I hope we can be good friends!OK.This is me.
Good job Feng! I like your adjectives!

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I am a girl from china. My name is Nola and my Chinese name is Shi, Xiaonuo. The mean about my name is "I need to keep my words whatever the promise is, it can helps me become a responsible person'.The name is significant, so i really like my name.

I come from the northern part of China and my hometown is very close to the ocean, so i always go to the beach in the afternoon, and there will have a beautiful sunset that i can enjoyed. My favorite country is Singapore because of the air is very fresh and this country is a multicultural country. Also, Singapore is near the ocean as the same as my hometown.

There are four people in my family, it includes me, my parents and my little brother.I really love my brother, because he is very cute and he is very quick-minded. We like travel to the other citys, it makes us feel happy  and cheerful.

Nola
Good job Nola! Girl and happiness are nouns. Can you change them to adjectives?
Fix Spelling: citys, significative,
fix: Verb: My brother have a flexible mind

Thanks! I'm looking forward to reading more!

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Write an introduction to yourself! Please write 100-150 words telling us about yourself. Please use at least 15 adjectives and put them in italics. Make sure to sign your name!
- Yolanda