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Glow: interesting topic you picked, loved the creativity, and you have successfully answered the key questions necessary to fulfill the presentation.

Grow: Do not rush it, the speed of the slides were a bit fast. Slow down and take your time

Well done!

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Glow: you went into good depth about the technology we use daily and how we communicate

Grow: the amount of text in the slides was a bit much at times

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Glow- your presentation was very neat and clear. I liked how you took many factors into consideration when talking about technology. It was very interesting as well.

Grow- This presentation had a lot of information which made some slides have too much words. But great presentation.

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Glow: I liked how thorough you were with discussing technology and how it impacts our lives. Such as, having new methods of communication and improved housing. I think your slides were visually pleasing and well put together.

Grow: I think your inflection was a little monotonous. The slides also had too many words on some of them.

Great job!

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Glow: I really liked your presentation it was organized and neat

Grow: However, some slides had a little too much words

Arianna

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Glow- I really liked how you discussed both the positive and negative impacts of technology. Also, I agree with the fact that technology can be bright in the future if we know how to use it correctly!
Grow-I also like to include a lot of words so I can include a ton of detail, but too many words can cause the listener to lose focus. I would just shorten up your bullet points to get your main thoughts across!

Good Job David,
Dylan Kleinfeldt

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Glow: I really like the aspect of how you relate your life to the content learned in class. It seemed as if you were having a conversation throughout the entirety of your presentation.

Grow: The text found in some of the slides was way to long and inefficient for an effective presentation.

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Glow: I like the use of your own personal life into the reflection about this course and the use of your own artwork in the presentation.

Grow: The only thing that I would work on is speaking more about the technology aspect of the course and how it has caused you to think differently.

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Glow: The way you spoke made your presentation flow and I liked how you incorporated your life into the reflection of this presentation.

Grow: There were times where you sped up your speaking. I would try to maintain the same speaking speed throughout the presentation.

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Glow: I liked how you incorporated your personal life into the reflection about the course and being creative with your presentation.

Grow: The only thing that I would do in the future was format Screencast-O-Matic a bit better and speak with more power.

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Glow: I liked how you conducted research from different sources to make the content more interesting.

Grow: Making the visual medium into a presentation would have made it more intriguing to the viewer and would make the presentation look much more like a slideshow.

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Glow: Your presentation was one that was very organized and very easy to follow and did not cause the viewer any confusion.

Grow: A discussion of the class or main topic being presented in the future would make the presentation better and more intriguing.

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Glow: Within your presentation you have answered the key questions needed to complete the assignment and you spoke in a tone that was very understandable.

Grow: Many of us have done this in our presentation and that is using too many words. Few key words is all that is needed.

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Glow: The presentation as a whole was one which was very interesting. It talked about all the aspects of the class and you reflected well upon it.

Grow: The only thing that I can say is that there are moments where you can slow down so that the audience can understand and comprehend better.

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Glow: I like how you combine technology and being a mom into a positive aspect in regards to the advancements.

Grow: Although this was a good presentation, there was no mention about the course and what technology knowledge has been gained.

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Glow: The incorporation of your life into the reflection of the course.

Grow: I would say all you need to work on is making the slides more readable and speaking a bit more clearly at times

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Glow: I like the visual medium that you have utilized and how you incorporated your basketball career to relate to this course

Grow: Some of the slides included to much wording which can lose the viewer and cause confusion

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Glows- I liked how you mentioned VR. I agree with you that VR will be the future and it is important that we advance time and money into it.

Grow- I feel like that there was a lot of information in this project that I struggled to keep up with. Bullet points with 4/5 words can be just as effective as a paragraph when done correctly.

Good Job!
-Philip Nasisi

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Glow: I liked the graphics in your presentation; it was interesting to look at. Also, your presentation covered a lot, but did not get confusing, and the usage of outside sources was helpful.
Grow: I think that there was too much text at some points. Instead, you could use a few key words or phrases and have notes to read aloud.