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Beautiful

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And whenever you people are free, you people can take advantage of this wall.

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Tanya where did we lack one point

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Yes, Tanmay even I love it

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I would rate it 9/10

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Ma'am you have modified it beautifully

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Ma'am It has turned out to be very good and thanks for making our lines more beautiful

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Mam  10

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10

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Or let's answer on whatsAp

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I am waiting for all of you to ans

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Thanks Nikhil

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Rate it now and then take the next class. Rate it out of 10

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Her hands held me gently from the day I took my first breath.
Her hands helped to guide me as I took my first step.
Her hands held me close when the tears would start to fall.
Her hands were quick to show me that she would take care of it all.

Her hands were there to brush my hair, or straighten a wayward bow.
Her hands were often there to comfort the hurts that didn't always show.
Her hands helped hold the stars in place, and encouraged me to reach.
Her hands would clap and cheer and praise when I captured them at length.

Her hands would also push me, though not down or in harm's way.
Her hands would punctuate the words, just do what I say.
Her hands sometimes had to discipline, to help bend this young tree.
Her hands would shape and mold me into all she knew I could be.

Her hands are now twisting with age and years of work,
Her hand now needs my gentle touch to rub away the hurt.
Her hands are more beautiful than anything can be.
Her hands are the reason I am me.

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I just had to provide a few changes but you people have composed the most beautiful poem ever

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Check your hard work

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Nikhil-------

Again a day full of hope.                                                                     It starts with the call of my mate
Feelings would be able to cope
Love yourself as there is lot of hate
When,I feel tensed my mother says nope
People will judge,hate but she is always good to rate

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Nice line

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Guys, respect all girls because she too will become someone's mother.

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Maam poem was compelt

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Like my mother's face ,  like a ship that carried me along through the deadliest storm

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Mother in happiness, mother in sorrow, mother in every aspect of life, steam the pain, measure tears, mother at every step of life

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Are you all excited for the results and all of you have to rate the poem from 1 to 5

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yes

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Yes ma'am

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Mom, you're a wonderful mother,
The many ways you show you care
Always make me feel I belong.

You're patient when I'm foolish;
You give guidance when I ask;
It seems you can do most anything;
You're the master of every task.

You're a dependable source of comfort;
You're my cushion when I fall.
You help in times of trouble.'

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Yes ma'am

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Mother in happiness, mother in sorrow, mother in every aspect of life, steam the pain, measure tears, mother at every step of life .

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Now, do you all want me to share the poem with you?

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Love you for that baccha, I have liked all your posts

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I am the one who is liking all your posts mam🙂

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Maam how many line are left

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Tanya, I love the line but I believe I could not put it in the poem like this

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A tender smile to guide my way
You are sunshine to light my day

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People will judge, hate but she is always good to rate

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Beautiful Diksha but how will we write poem

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My mother ,my friend so dear
Throughout my life you are always  near

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I love this lone

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Witty Tanmay, greAt

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When I feel tensed my mother says nope

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Next line should have the rhyming of first line.

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I have got four lines

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Good Himanshu but I need the poem to be completed

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ok mam

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Aditi, I think its repeated and now we are trying to compose a poem

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Sometimes I am surprised that my mother has only two hands but how does she do so many things.  Men go out of the house at work in the morning, but the mother keeps working all day at home without salary.  Mother never leaves her children,

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Beautiful Tanya

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My Mum, she's the best,                                                                                                                                                                        From her head to her toes.                                                                                                                                                                she's warm and she's soft,                                                                                                                                                                    smelling sweet like a rose.

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Yes maam

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Yes mam

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Believe me at last we will have a really beautiful poem

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Love yourself as there is a lot of hate

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Reyaz, poem?

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“Mother is the heartbeat in the home; and without her, there are no heartthrob in your heart .”

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So be steady.

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We have only 3 minutes

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Okh maam

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Now three more lines

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So I have got three lines

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Kids we will write a poem only of 6 lines

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Very Good Tanya.

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Tnks maam okh maam

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Feeling would be able to cope

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Hari next time come with your name, even your name is a good name

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But my nick name is honet

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Thanks

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Very beautiful, Himanshu

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Maamy name is hari ballabh

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Yes Tanmay

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Mystery Mom

Mom, your love is a mystery:
How can you do it all?
You’re always there with the perfect fix
For my problems, big and small.

Your love protects me day after day,
So I’m fearless, safe and sound.
I feel that I can do anything
Whenever you’re around.

Mom, your love is a mystery,
I haven’t got a clue
Why you love me all time,
But I’m very glad you do!

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So ma'am now have to write the third line

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Ok mam

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Good Reyaz, now let's focus on writing a poem together.

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Well done Tanmay

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Third line has to rhyme with first one

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A mother is your first friend, your best friend, your forever friend.”

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Second line

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It starts with the call of my mate

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I am trying to write a poem

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True

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Guys, Is anybody writing another line

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Little souls find their way to you whether they’re from your womb or someone else’s.

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I agree but who is Honey Pandatm

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Yes mam

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My mom, she’s the best,
From her head to her toes!
She’s warm and she’s soft,
And smells as sweet as a rose

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yes ma;am

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Continue, the rhyming scheme is abab

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Again, a day full of hope,

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I will start.