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I think that  it was a good essay, because they stayed on topic and did not go off topic.Because they had good punctuation and capitalization. -J Watson

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The passage met a criteria. Inside it the topic was clearly introduced to the readers, it has good punctuation, and clean transitions.

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This was a great essay. It had excellent punctuation. It also had a very good hook and the gave you a lot of information.

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I think that in the hook they could have used a different attention grabber because it seems very scripted and awkward. I also think that they could have pulled more evidence. -J Smith

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I think that in the hook they could have used a different attention grabber because it seems very scripted and awkward. I also think that they could have pulled more evidence. -J Smith

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Destyni Parham (What's good about the Exemplary Essay)

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Destyni Parham (What's good about the Exemplary Essay)

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It was a good essay because it had:
. Good Hook (It made me wanna read more)
. Good Capitalization (They put capital letters in every sentence or when they mentioned something specific)
. Stayed on task (They kept the idea on robots and didn't go off task in their essay)
.Good Punctuation (They put periods and exclamation points at the end of every sentence.
. Good Transition (They had good transition words and they told me when they were starting a new idea)
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I believe  it's a good essay  because there point about robots are good.

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I think that this was a good essay and they had perfect punctuation placement, and I was able to understand what they did in the essay.

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I think it was a 7/7 essay because they listed the details, the information. Also they underlined what introduces the topic. And they had proper grammar.

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pros good and I can understand it and it's a good reason

cons well I think it was good 7/7 but it just needs more its not  convening
-shakir

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I think that the essay is very excellent because it had great punctuation, a good hook, a good conclusion, and  has more than 1 paragraph.

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I think it was a good essay because it has good spelling and punctuation also good capitalization. Joshua s

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I think it was a good essay because it has good spelling and punctuation also good capitalization. Joshua s

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I like how they used their punctuation, and their point is clearly stated.
N.T.

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I think it was a good essay because its not hard to understand the story and they put everything like reasonss and information was right there so we wont have to think hard. it was amazing -j.forrest

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I think it was a good essay because its not hard to understand the story and they put everything like reasonss and information was right there so we wont have to think hard. it was amazing -j.forrest

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The passage was amazingly written. Also they had all the requirements (wrongly spelt) and we could understand what were they talking about. I like the informative passage but it was kinda boring. I love ROOOOOBOOOTS

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I think that it was a good essay because the reasons were listed very clearly and the conclusion was different from the introduction while stating the same information. The essay also stated where they got their information from, making it a great essay. -J Smith.

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I think that it was a good essay because the reasons were listed very clearly and the conclusion was different from the introduction while stating the same information. The essay also stated where they got their information from, making it a great essay. -J Smith.

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con* In the underlined part of the essay, his statement is still not really convincing enuff, but it will convince you.

pro* It gives you good reasoning.

con(if it was being read on the internet)* It is a long essay.

pro* Gets straight to the point.

con* On pg 4 it states"since they can
change their shape and squeeze through the rubble of a collapsed
building using camera eyes” not robots do that yet. so they lied.