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I liked how she used knowledge from her head and from the text

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I think you did an amazing job Hazel! I love how you brought up some background knowledge of your own.

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I 100% appreciated your willingness to share! Your essay was strong in many ways. In class I mentioned that you supported your points with text evidence and your own background knowledge. I also thought it was great that you never used the word "I".

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I like that you explained everything in a matter that it is specific.

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The text evidence and background information was good

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it's fine video games are a sport

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I love the details you putted in there and i loved how you the text from the background

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Love the details and you make a point on The NBA 2k 20 XD

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I like how you brought up your own background Knowledge.

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I do like how you have color in your paragraph, and how you used text evidences, and I just loved it:)

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i love all of the details good job hazel you did awesome.

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I like your reasons but i still think its a sport

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I like how you gave lot's of details to go along with your reasons.

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i like  reasons they where good but i still think its should still be a sport

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i love the details!

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it was ok

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NICE JOB

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wait your alive

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i liked the transitions very eye catching essay

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I really liked your details, and the font it was really good.

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sick but i think video games are a sport

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how you guys talking you guys died

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i love the deatalis

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OMG I LOVE IT!!! it was so convincing I really think you did it good i love how you used text evidences and a link:)

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I love everything about it! so much details and information and also the link was very helpful!

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It sounded very professional and the font was very nice to look at.

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I loved it because it sounded professional and i think video games should be a sport

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I really like your reasoning and points they were really strong.

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I like how you put in the link to the article. Also I liked your strong reasoning.

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It was really good yet I can't decide what to congratulate from it.

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Iris,
I so appreciated your willingness to share your essay. It was a great example. Two of my favorite things were your smooth and sophisticated transitions and your strong final sentence. Well Done!

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i like how your points were strong

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good job

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i like your reasons

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i liked the details

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i loved how you phrased thing and your transition words

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i liked all the deatails and then u where vary smooth at writting

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Good job,
you did a amazing job i love you did details

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Knowledge was in that Argument Essay.

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You did an amazing job listing your reasons

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I like the body paragraphs and they really had good detail in them so you did a good job

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i think your reasons are valid

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i love your reasons and how you made it clear with the other side and i felt that you were confident

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Good job i like how you gave reasons and how you worded

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Grace,
You made sure your reasons were clear and made sense. You didn't read to fast which made it easier to hear what you were saying. Over all your essay was very neat and clear.

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𝕀 𝕝𝕚𝕜𝕖𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕖𝕤𝕤𝕒𝕪 𝕨𝕒𝕤 𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕪 𝕕𝕖𝕥𝕒𝕚𝕝𝕖𝕕 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕦𝕤𝕖𝕕  𝕘𝕠𝕠𝕕 𝕥𝕣𝕒𝕟𝕤𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟 𝕨𝕠𝕣𝕕𝕤.

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I like your text evidence and how you transitioned from reason to reason was good.

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gooooooooood

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Good job u put a lot of details

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Grace,
You did an excellent job with text evidences supporting your position. It is clear that you don't just think video should be a sport. You also think kids should not spend so much time playing them.

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I like your reasons why video games shoulld not be a sport

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good details and information i give it a 12345654/10

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1,000,000,000 \10

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you have really good details and amazing transitions

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Good job,
i think you did a wonder full job you did details really good ones

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you did great, I think you listed great reasons, but I think you should have presented your essay

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you did a nice job I like the reasoning

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Trevon,
Your reading was fluent and you didn't try to rush through, you made sure your argument on the debate was heard. You used nice describing words as well.

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𝓘 𝓵𝓲𝓴𝓮𝓭 𝓽𝓱𝓪𝓽 𝔂𝓸𝓾  𝓹𝓾𝓽 𝓭𝓮𝓽𝓪𝓲𝓵𝓼 𝓯𝓸𝓻 𝓫𝓸𝓽𝓱 𝓼𝓱𝓸𝓾𝓵𝓭 𝓪𝓷𝓭 𝓼𝓱𝓸𝓾𝓵𝓭𝓷'𝓽.

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You told us why and it should be with details.

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Nice job with your reasons

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i think you did a good job on saying why you dont think that video games should be a sport.

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explained why or why not.

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I like your reasons

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#1 YOU DID IT! Do you realize that many students are not yet done!
#2 Your point about needing hydration and good nutrition was unique.

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Good job, i really like the reasons and i like how you said it should and should not be a sport Great Job!

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I like each of your reasons for each side. Good Job!

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Good job I think you had good reasons

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good job

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Good job

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Good job,
you did a wonder full job you gave good reason and details i love how you said everything correct  you did a really good job 🎊

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Good job, I think you wrote a really good job and I think you listed plenty of reasons and text evidence, Good job

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Good Job! i love your reasons and that you used evidence in your writing about the author and you got it done and i am happy for you and It sounds really grown up.

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Good job i really like your details and i like your reasons

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nice job it was a long detailed story

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a thing i would like to point out, is that everyone who said games shouldnt be a sport aren't acknowledging the fact that there are VR games, Games with motion controls and exercising games

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I liked how you used good strong words and evidence to state your opinion.

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i like that your reasons are not all just from the article .

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Nice job with your reasons. You made the essay sound very sophisticated. I also like that it was so long

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good job I like how you gave good reasons and its long

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That had me in tears it was so amazing.

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Thank you for volunteering to share your essay with the class.
You did an excellent job presenting evidence from the article and your own supporting details. Your conclusion was very respectful, pointing out that everyone can have their own opinion. You gave strong support or your opinion.

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nice details

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I like how your essay was so long, Good job

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You gave really good details, good job

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Janaya,
It was clear what your position was! You presented it with strong facts with good text evidence.
Also, I am so pleased that you offered to let me show it in class! How could I teach with out you!

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I really love how you really felt very strong about your feelings and had amazing detail. Also it was very informative but entertaining i loved it!

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i like all of the details and your explanation and i also like the font blue is one of my favorate colors strong conculsion

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it was nice you pit so much detail in to it.

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I like how you included text evidence and "non" boring words.

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hank you for doing main idea those beautiful story was nice.

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I love it . you have good detail

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I thought your essay was well written. I thought referring to video games as a hobby was a very good way to think about them. All hobbies are not sports.

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I love how You stuck with your idea and gave very valid reasoning and evidence that video games should not be considered a sport.

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i love the word choice and details and your explanation

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wow that was a clear as glass report you made it very easy to understandind it was very informational and amazing

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it was amazing really detailed

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good job the detail in a main idea