# data[].attributes.body
1.  What do you think about this story?
2. Do you like it or not?
3. What can you do to make the story much better?

# data[].attributes.body
1. I think the story is too short but easy to understand the main topic
2. I don't really like it
3. I will add more interesting discourse markers and more details in the story

# data[].attributes.body
1. I think the story is too short.
2. Yes, I like it but only to a certain extent.
3. I will include more details to make it more interesting.

# data[].attributes.body
1. This story is too short and not interesting

2. I don't like it

3. I will add more storyline to make it more interesting

# data[].attributes.body
1.the story is too short
2.not really because the story is too short to understand
3.i will add more sentences to the story

# data[].attributes.body
1.The story is too short yet concise and there is no interesting storyline
2. I don't really like the story.
3.To make the storyline more interesting we can add descriptions such as why it is necessary to go to the store, time, and so on

# data[].attributes.body
Azri 3F
1.to short
2.no
3.you can extend the story by using who, where,when

# data[].attributes.body
1.The story is not interesting.
2. I don't like it.
3. I will add as much details and incorporate challenges that they face.

# data[].attributes.body
1.I think this story is short but easy to understand
2.Yes
3.I will add more storylines to make this story better

# data[].attributes.body
1. I think this story too short and  very boring to read

2. No, i don't like it at all
3. I can add some interesting story and add some conhensive divices and tell more detail about the trip
.

# data[].attributes.body
1.This story seems too short and quite simple
2.I don't really like it
3.I will add more interesting storyline to make the story more interesting

# data[].attributes.body
1. I think this story is very short and doesn't sound dramatic.
2. I don't like it because it unattractive
3. It can be much better if put some structure in this story. this story can be much better by following a basic structure of:
• orientation
• rising action
• climax
• falling action
• resolution
Lastly, make sure this story has a rough idea of where the story is going before it starts

# data[].attributes.body
1. I think this story is very short and doesn't make me interested.
2. I don't like it because this story somehow lacking and not interesting.
3. The author should make some plot like something funny, adventurous or horror  happen to make it more enjoyable.

# data[].attributes.body
1.I think this story is too short and it is not good enough to impress other people who is reading this story.
2.I don't like it.
3.I think we can add more storyline .

# data[].attributes.body
1. The story is too short and not interesting.
2.i dont like
3. Add more activities

# data[].attributes.body
1.it is really short story and boring.
2.i dont like it.
3.i will add more situation and make it better

# data[].attributes.body
1.I think the story is interesting but the story is too simple
2.Not really
3.You can add some story about the day he/she went out with his family so that the story is not to simple

# data[].attributes.body
1.This story seems to need a more interesting verse
2.Yes,i like the story
3.I will add some interesting storyline like horror or curious

# data[].attributes.body
1. I think the story is funny though it lacks plots, which make the storyline short.
2. I do like it but there's so less things that occured and it's expected without watching it completely.
3. I think they should've put a twist and more protagonist and antagonist scenes.

# data[].attributes.body
1. To be honest, for me I find it quite boring to read. I'm sure that the person writing this felt lots of emotions and had fun. However, the choices of words are not there to make it stand out.

2. For me I don't really like it.

3. Instead of telling the story like your giving instructions for baking a cake, might as well use interesting vocabularies, synonyms, sentence openers so you can hook the reader into reading your story.

# data[].attributes.body
I think this strory about a family go outside. I like this story. We can put more story.

# data[].attributes.body
1.I think the story is too short to my liking.
2.I don't really like it but it's not so bad.
3.The story also need lot of improvements in terms of choice of sentences to explain a little bit more of the details that happen in the story.And maybe consider putting some dialogue to make the story even more interesting.

# data[].attributes.body
1.I think this story is so  short and it's too direct.
2.I don't like it.
3.Maybe add more activities and mention the place that he or she go and people he or she meet.

# data[].attributes.body
1.This story seems to need a more interesting verse.
2.No, i don't like the story
3.We can add some more details such as the venue's name ,times and add some storylines for the reader feels excited to read the story.

# data[].attributes.body
1. In my honest opinion, this story is lacking in vocabulary since I can't really see any details.
2. I dont really like it but it is not a bad story at all.
3. I think I can add more words. For instance, I can change the word "next" to "after that" or more interesting words. The word 'funny' can be replaced with a better sentence that describes how the character was enjoying the movie.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I think the story is very short and simple.
2. I don't like the story because it's too plain.
3. I will add some interesting storyline like horror, comedy, suspense, drama and so on.

# data[].attributes.body
1. It is actually quite simple but meaningful as he enjoys being with his family.
2. Yes
3. I will add more stories inside it and also add more positive emotions to show them that i'm having fun with my family.

# data[].attributes.body
1. this story sounds a little bit plain. there's not much details to make it interesting.
2. i dont really like this story.
3.add more fun details such as time, place etc. to make the story more interesting and enjoyable

# data[].attributes.body
1. The story is very short and simple.
2. I don’t really like it.
3. Try to put more explanations or create some plot to make it more exciting for readers.