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On my vacation I met my family and we went out to eat.
I also celebrated my birthday with my whole family.
I had a sleepover with my friends and had a lot of fun.

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On my last vacation it was a lot of fun because I had the opportunity to visit my grandparents

On Sunday morning my mother and my other two sisters traveled to Nazca (my father could not go due to work)

The weather was very sunny, every afternoon we went for a  TO walk in the square and shops that were nearby, w e tried  taste all .... the foods, everything was too delicious

A week after our arrival we already had to go home, the farewell was very sad because we wanted to continue together with them

My trip was too fun , because I had not visited my grandparents for a long time due to the covid, I really liked my trip I hope to see you soon !!
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Gabriela Cotaquispe                              I was at house 

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Gabriela Cotaquispe                              I was at house 

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In my vacations I was in my house, helped in house like cook, clean, wash, sweep.

My favorite part was to be with my family and to share

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On my vacation I went on a trip with my family to a country house in Cieneguilla, we went for 3 days, in the house there were many games and a swimming pool, we had a lot of fun.
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In my last vacation it was a bit boring because I was at home, I did not go out much, I only helped my mother or my father, sometimes I painted or drew at night since I was very bored and wanted to distract myself, at night I talked with my friends and I took my dogs out at night to walk on the street because at that time the streets were empty and there weren't many dogs and that's how I spent my vacations

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On my last vacations,  it was normal, but I couldn't enjoy it so much by quarantine, that affected everyone and I had to spend it at my house.

I played on the computer and on the cell phone, playing with friends,or sometimes I played alone.
I woke up late, and I also slept late,I watched TV when I had nothing to do, I also saw YouTube to watch entertaining content.

In the end, I couldn't do everything that I like, for the problems happened by the pandemic. Days later, I had to go back to virtual classes, to start the 3 bimester.
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On my last vacation, I spent most of my time helping my mom and dad, inside and outside the home.

I didn't spend a lot of time on the internet, I watched more war movies with my whole family.

The two weeks of vacation I woke up at 6 in the morning every day so I could tidy up and clean my house with my brother.

To go back to class the day before I was feeling  very tired from everything I had done during this vacation, on Monday when I entered class I was with a little sleep.

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On my last vacation, it was really boring because I just helped my dad and went out to play.

As soon as the holidays started, my father took me with him to his work, I was helping him every morning and sometimes in the afternoons.
From time to time I would go out to play basketball or go out with my friends to walk and eat.

These vacations were not like the previous ones.
 I felt that I did not have that essence of calling it "Holidays" they were very boring. My family always traveled, but this time it was not like that because of the pandemic and I did not that at all.

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On my last vacation, I was at home helping my mom inside the hosue.

The first few days in the morning I would help my mother and in the afternoons I would go out for a walk or play for a while on my cell phone.

On the weekend we went to the Churin hot spring s with my uncles, from there, we went for a walk through the nearby towns, where we found some tourist spots.

Days later we stayed at home, watching TV, or helping to clean the house, on Thursday we decided to go out to the park of legends, but it was closed because they were vaccinating, so we decided to go to the huayna. Capac zonal park with my cousins, uncles where we have fun playing soccer, volleyball, after months without going out.

I am the last days I prepared for virtual classes, after their well-deserved rest.
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On my last vacation it was very boring because I was only at home all day.
I helped my mother with her work and played with my dog, at noon I cooked for my family, and in the afternoons I watched series or movies with my family.
Also, some days I exercised and slept late.
My vacations were some boring but beautiful because I was with my family.
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On my last vacation I played video games and stayed home watching television.

On Saturdays I would go to the park with my dog for a walk or I would stay home helping my mother,

On Sunday, I stayed at home fixing some things and that was my day

The next Saturday I went with my family to Chosica , we had a great time, we got home very tired, it was a beautiful and fun day
On Sunday we got up and spent a family day, soon it got dark
It was time to sleep and get up , to start the day of class well.
you could say that those were my vacations
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On my last vacations,it was very funny because  I had the opportunity to visit my relatives.

On Friday morning we traveled to the highland, I went with my mom and with two other friends. We went by bus and tavelled about 6 hours. I was too tired, but when we arrived there everything changed.

The weather was very nice, it was not too cold. I could go outside and meet new and many interesting places in Santo Domingo. I can say that it's a small but nice city of my country too. The people are kindly and you can meet many tourist places too. Over there we  were able to ride and we took a long walk. The food was very good, I loved it!!

Two days later we went to Quito, it is the capital of Ecuador. Quito is a very nice city. The weather was cold, of course we had to use  warm clothes. We visited many other places and we could find funny places there too.

Then we went to the coastal region, and we visited Salinas beach. Near Salinas is Ballenita, Montañita and Santa elena. There are many beautiful places, and food was good. Of course as it was that time, there was not a sunny day, it was a little cold but we went to the sea and we swam and played a lot!!!

Then we went to other many places, we  had a great time. I won't forget those days... it was very funny for us!!!

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On my last vacations, In August I went to Ica with my family.

I stayed  my aunt's house in the center and had a great time. What I liked the most was trying the gastronomy of Ica.

Also we did some walks with my family in the center of ica. I got a bit sunburned from the great hot weather. After a week in Ica, I returned home and had time to rest for a week. Also I spent a lot of time reading.

So I spent my vacations august.
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On my last vacations I didn't do anything, I was really so tired that all I wanted was to sleep.
My mom told me that I had to washing and cooking .
I was washing and cleaning on my vacations.

One day my dad bought a bicycle and every Saturday and Sunday we went to the park to learned to ridden it.
But unfortunately, I did not learn because I was scared, however, I was happy because my brother did learned to used it
My vacations are summed up like this, as I said I did not do anything.
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wanted was to sleep

I had to washing and cooking .

I was washing and cleaning on my vacations.

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On my last vacation , I always played in the mornings with my dog, I went to buy some things in the store.

Lately since the holidays started I have been watching kdramas in the afternoons. Sometimes I helped my mom with the shopping.

Sometimes, I went to my dad's house in the afternoons to visit him . Every time I went his house I was always riding my bike .  With my dad we were buying chocolate desserts for my family.
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On my last vacations, it was very very serious because i did not  DIDN´T do anything new.
On Monday, I got up early to help my mom clean. then we go to the beach.

The weather was very good on the beach, it's still cold, but the view was nice.

3 days later, we went shopping for shoes and clothes, then we had lunch and went BACK  home.

Before the end of the holidays ,I learned to prepare some dishes.

when the holidays ended, I slept early and the next day I was ready for classes.
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I went to Ica-Paracas my day  at 4:00 a.m. where we went to the bridge to take the bus, we arrived at 9:00 a.m. to Paracas....  WE go to the Ballestas Islands.

Then following our routine, we went to ica la huacachina we walked through the tubulars and the skings was total adrenaline watching the sunset is the most beautiful thing, it was immense heat at the end of the day 8:00 pm we returned to Lima and WE arrived at 1 : 00am was cold.

THIS FULL DAY WAS MY  VACATIONS
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