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OPINION IN SOCIAL ISSUES

LIKE RESPECT AND TOLERANCE OF DIVERSITY

SEPARATE LONG SENTENCES WITH PERIODS, NOT ONLY COMMAS.

WRITE THE NAMES OF INSTITUTIONS IN SPANISH IF THEIR NAMES COME IN SPANISH

FOR A MORE WORTHY LIFE.

TRAY TO PUT YOUR QUALITIES IN THE SAME PARAGRAPH.

WELL DONE!!!

SCORE: 4.7

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PLEASE, USE COMMAS AND PERIODS TO SEPARATE YOUR IDEAS.

IT´S SOMETIMES DIFFICULT TO READ AND UNDERSTAND BECAUSE I DON´T KNOW WHERE THE IDEA BEGINS OR ENDS...PUNCTUATION IS A KEY

What I like about Bogotá
craft fairs
a very large city
to improve
I love my city that has given me all.

THE BEST PART OF THE WRITING IS THE DETAILED DESCRIPTION OF PLACES TO VISIT. YOU EXPRESS YOUR OPINION AND FEELINGS ABOUT THIS CITY. THERE IS ALSO A GOOD RANGE OF VOCABULARY.

SCORE: 4,2

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Proyect 1