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On page three the main character says he does not like Jeremy because he laughed at him baseball and his dad makes enemy pie but the last step is to play with your enemy for a day and in that day the main character becomes freinds with Jeremy and says he thinks the pie is poisonous

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Dear Literary Essay Writers,

Thasos! Well done!
Thasos thank you for your audio "air writing" your essay! Well done! Today, 1/25 (Monday) think more on your noticings of the relationship between the father and the son...what do you mean by 'normal' - find places in the story where you see examples of their 'normal' relationship. Then, try your magic by put it all together in a Literary written essay!

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In Jabari Jumps by Gaia Cornwall, I think Jabari has a strong relationship with his dad, because when Jabari feels scared to jump off the diving board, his dad shares his own strategy with Jabari. He tells him it’s OK to feel scared when you’re trying something new, just take a deep breath and then he said sometimes after you take a deep breath it sometimes starts feeling like a surprise. So Jabari  feels encouraged and then he jumps off the diving board. In conclusion Jabari has A very strong relationship with his dad.

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Writers edit your essays to have proper punctuation, capitalization, and spelling

REMINDER:  If you are coping an exact line from the text, or a character, it needs to be spelled correctly

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In Jabari Jumps, by Gaia Cornwall, Jabari wants to jump off the diving board in the beginning of the story. But when he goes on the line, he hides a scary feeling and says to every kid behind him: "You can go first." He was thinking of a jump. When it was his turn, he got up, up, but he said,  "I'm tired”. so he went back down and told his dad that he was scared in a way. His dad said, "When I do something scary, I take a deep breath and think it is a surprise." Jabari thought he loved surprises, though and he wanted to not be scared. So he took a DEEP, BIG breath and got calm. He got up, up and up. Then, he jumped down, down and down. Under water he went. then back up, up, and up. He did it and he was not scared anymore.

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Writers choose an essay they are proud of and want to publish

Choose an essay you wrote about with your partner.

Re-read that essay. Go through the checklist to make sure you:

Have a strong introduction

use transition words to frame your evidence

Give exact quotes from the text

Explain evidence

Have a strong conclusion

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TO DO TODAY: Session 13
Writers Provide Closure with a Conclusion

Reread your essays in the PADLET below

1. Reread your endings. All of them...You might revise the conclusions in all of the essays you have written across the unit.

See PADLET for sample STRONG ENDINGS (same are featured on the video you'll watch today)

2. or Write a new essay, using all you know, now.

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by Gaia Cornwall

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Emily and Leon decided to write about Those Shoes. Antonio needs new shoes because his shoes are taped up. Brandon T. is a showoff. He went to the bathroom 7 times in 1 day just to walk slowly in the hall, because the main character used to be the fastest runner until Brandon got those shoes. The main character was really kind in the end of the story, because when he finally got those shoes, they were too tight, but Antonio needed new shoes, so the main character gave those shoes to Antonio, and they fit him just right!

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Emily and Leon decided to write about Those Shoes. Antonio needs new shoes because his shoes are taped up. Brandon T. is a showoff. He went to the bathroom 7 times in 1 day just to walk slowly in the hall, because the main character used to be the fastest runner until Brandon got those shoes. The main character was really kind in the end of the story, because when he finally got those shoes, they were too tight, but Antonio needed new shoes, so the main character gave those shoes to Antonio, and they fit him just right!

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in enemy pie by derek munso. The main character hated his enemy. his dad told him about enmey pie so he used it the main  character had to be with him for a day also had to be nice to him for it to work then The main character  became freinds.t he main character went to his   house   The main character s dad told them to come to dinner The main character  was sacerd he die or soming! but The main characters  dad ate it and it was fine so   main character ate and his freind eat it but nothing happed then after he had to go home. The main character learend an enmey can always become your freind. This story is import because you learn a better lesson then any other book

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We both decided on the dragon from the paper bag princess. The dragon is very rude at the beginning because he burns the castle and takes prince Ronald. We think that Elizabeth is very brave because she went after the dragon to free prince Ronald. The dragon was a bit of a showoff when Elizabeth asked him if it was true that he could burn down fifty forests and fly around the world in ten seconds. She did this because she knew the dragon would get exhausted and then the dragon would fall asleep and she could get prince Ronald.

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Williams traits:
independent
determend
persitent
playful
creative
brave

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by Derek Munson

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The mane character is a kind kid because, when Antonio needed new shoes the mane character was really nice because when he noticed Antonio needed new shoes the mane character gave him his shoes because Antonio needed them.

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in Williams Doll by Charlotte Zolotow, The problem is that William wants a doll, but his father thinks its only for girls. His brother thinks that he is a Creep. and the boy living next door calls him a sissy. This is a problem because William just wants a doll but his father won't give him one. and William is being bullied by his own brother and by the boy living next door. for example "a doll" "don't be a creep!" said Williams brother "sissy sissy sissy" said the boy next door. This is where the problem began. Later on in the story William's grandmother visits, and William tells her about how he wants a doll, but that his brother and the boy living next door call him a sissy and a creep. also how his dad gets him everything except for a doll. so Williams grandmother gets him a doll, a doll with blue eyes, curly eyelashes, a white dress and a bonnet. just like Nancy. but when Williams father hears about the doll  he gets mad. that is the problem in Williams Doll.

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this is why I think William is brave, tune in again!

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by Charlotte Zolotow

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caring kid and a friendly
kid hes caring because Antonio needed shoes and the mane character gave him his. hes friendly because he just gave his shoes to Antonio with out really thinking about it.

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Brave
daring
kind
live saver
dragon exhauster

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like all grandparents William's grandma gave him a doll!

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We both decided on the book the paper bag princess. we chose to focus on the dragon.  The dragon is very rude at the beginning because he burns the castle, takes prince Ronald & burns all of Elizabeths clothes. We think that Elizabeth is very brave because she went after the dragon to free prince Ronald. The dragon was a bit of a showoff when Elizabeth asked him if it was true that he could burn down ten forests and fly around the world in ten seconds. the dragon ended up Burning 100 forest & lost all his fire (He didn't even have enough fire to cook a meatball.), then he flew round the world in ten seconds, Elizabeth asked the dragon to do this again that he ended up flying around the world in 20 seconds. then the dragon was so exhausted he coldn't move. Elizabeth did this because she knew the dragon would get exhausted and then the dragon would fall to the floor and she could get prince Ronald back.

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by Maribeth Boelts

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Antonio is a polite and kind kid hes polite because he said thank you after the mane character gave him shoes. And hes kind because he didn't laugh at the mane characters Mr. Alfery shoes.

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selfish
Rude
cares about beauty only

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William (the book) starts in a house.

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by Robert Munsch

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I am writing Jabari Jumps by Gaia Cronwall,In Jabari want to Jump of the diving board then he gets scard

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In Jabari Jumps by gaia Jabari is brave.  Jabari finished his swimming lessons so he wanted to go to the diving bored when he got there he got scared when he got up he said he was tired his dad said its ok to be scared so he went up and he was in the water with a splash! it was really fun!  this is why Jabari is brave

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In jabari jumps

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From this draft...remember to keep the Literary Essay format...
name of book and  author

In the beginning...
(example from the story)

in the middle
in the end

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In Jabari Jumps   By Gaia Cronwall the problum is Jabbari is   scared to jump off the diving bored. He stalls and comes down and said I for got to do my  streches. His dad said "when I am scared I take a deep breth and   it mit be a spris". So he  went up and he jumped and he was not scared anymore. In conclusion jabari's dad helped him jump off the diveing bored.   that is why he was scared and is not scared anymore!!!!!!!!!

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Session 9

Essayists use their notebooks to try out different ideas for essays.

We have been thinking about

Character Trait Work

Character Change Work

Lessons Learned

Writer's also think about relationships between the characters....as we were noticing last week when we thought about the secondary character's in the books we read with our partners.

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Choose a text from the text set.

Read the text.

Write at least 3 different big ideas/claims here with your partner.

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So today, reread a book you read last week and on the PADLET, write about the character relationships you are noticing between the characters.

Start with two characters:

__________ and __________
have a _________________
relationship.

And find places in the story that support that idea/claim/opinion you have about those two characters.

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Dear Literary Essay Writers,

Go back into each essay you've written and revise to have clear transition sentences. Use the RESOURCES column (scroll over to the right) to help you with sample transitions.

Happy Writing!!!
Warm regards,
Julie

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In Those Shoes, the main character, Jeremy, is very kind and caring because in the book, Jeremy really wants the shoes that everyone has. Everyone except Antonio. When Jeremy finally gets those shoes, he was so happy. The book said, "My heart was pounding hard as I take off my shoes and hitch up my baggy socks." But then, he realized they were too tight! After that, he noticed Antonio needed new shoes, because they were taped up, so he gave the shoes to Antonio. This goes to show that Jeremy is very kind and caring.

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What Do We Need to Include

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In Those shoes by  Maribeth Boelts Jeremy is genourus  Shoes Antonio want to have the shoes that Jeremy has Jeremy ends up giving the shoes to Antonio when they do not
fit. this is why Jeremy is genours.

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In Williams Doll by Charlotte Zolotow, the Grandmother is very Kind and understanding to William because when she comes over, William shows her how he can shoot the basket ball and he shows her the electric train he has, then he says to his Grand Mother "but you know what I really want is a doll", so Williams Grand Mother gets him a doll. a doll with blue eyes, curly eyelashes, a white dress and a bonnet. William was very happy but his father wasn't "he's a boy he should not have a doll" says Williams father, but the Grandma says that it's ok if William has a doll "because he needs it to hug, to cradle and to take to the park because then when he's older and he's a father he will know how to care for his son/daughter.

that is why Williams Grand Mother is kind and understanding.

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Emily and Leon decided to write about Those Shoes. Brandon T. is a showoff. So is Nate. They kept on showing off their shoes. Soon, everyone else has them! Everyone except Jeremy and Antonio. In the book, Jeremy, the main character, is really kind, because when he saw everyone else wearing the shoes, so Jeremy really wants the shoes. When he finally gets them, they are too tight! After, he notices Antonio needed new shoes, because they were taped up, so Jeremy gave the shoes to Antonio, which was a really kind thing to do. This book is important because it has an important message, which is to be kind.

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Emily and Leon decided to write about Those Shoes. Brandon T. is a showoff. So is Nate. They kept on showing off their shoes. Soon, everyone else has them! Everyone except Jeremy and Antonio. In the book, Jeremy, the main character, is really kind, because when he saw everyone else wearing the shoes, so Jeremy really wants the shoes. When he finally gets them, they are too tight! After, he notices Antonio needed new shoes, because they were taped up, so Jeremy gave the shoes to Antonio, which was a really kind thing to do. This book is important because it has an important message, which is to be kind.

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DEAR WRITER'S MAKE SURE YOU FOLLOW THESE STEPS: when writing a literary essay

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DEAR WRITER'S MAKE SURE YOU FOLLOW THESE STEPS: when writing a literary essay

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Character Traits

Character Change

Character Relationships

(main characters/secondary -minor)

Lessons Learned

Problem/Solution

Themes

(finding courage to be yourself)

(friendship)

(fitting in)

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In Those Shoes By Maribeth Boelts, the main character, Jeremy is very, very kind and caring because in the story, first Brandon T. has those shoes. Soon, everyone else has them too! Everyone except Antonio and Jeremy. Jeremy really wants the shoes, but when he finally gets them, they are too tight! He notices Antonio needs new shoes, because they are taped up, so Jeremy gives them to him. This shows that he is a very kind and caring person.

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In Jabari Jumps by Gaia Cornwall, the probl

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In Jabari Jumps by Gaia Cornwall, the probl

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Selfish
Rude
Showoff p.g. 5-6
Lazy at start
hungry
destructor

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In The Paper Bag Princess By Robert Munsch the problem is that Princess Elizabeth was going to marry Prince Ronald but a Dragon burns the castle, takes Prince Ronald & burns all of Elizabeths clothes. Elizabeth got mad at the dragon & went to chase him, but first she wanted to wear something & all she found to wear was a paper bag. the dragon left a trail of horse bones & burnt forest to follow. Elizabeth followed the trail & found the dragons cave. she knocked at the door twice & she asked the dragon some questions

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By Robert Munsch. In The Beginning, There Was A Prince, Named Prince Ronald. And A Queen Named Queen Elisabeth. They Loved Each Other. But One Day, A Dragon Came Near There Castle, Took A Deep Breath, And The WHOLE Castle Was Destroyed! The Dragon Burned All Of The Cloths They Had. The Dragon Took Prince Ronald And Not Princess Elisabeth.  But She Had No Cloths To Wear! The Only Thing She Can Wear Is  A Paper Bag. The Dragon Was EASY to Follow The Dragon Because He Left Horse Bones And Forest Fires To Make Something Sort Of A Path So She Can Follow. When she Followed, Followed, She Found A BIG Door With A BIG Knock On It. It Was Dark Because She Was In A Cave Next To The Door. She Knocked; And The Dragon Opened The Door.

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audio by charlotte

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In Those Shoes by Maribeth Boelts, the main character, Jeremy, is very kind and caring. This is shown toward the end of the book, where we already know Jeremy really wants the shoes everyone else has, and soon, he finally gets them! But, not long after, he realizes they are too tight! He notices Antonio needed new shoes, because they were taped up, so Jeremy gives them to Antonio. This is important because it shows that Jeremy is very kind and caring.