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don't be wordy

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summarize better, have a good lead on

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NO FIRST PERSON!!!

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Do not be redundant.

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Need tags

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Tag needed and not to be redundant

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Work on a better tag.

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no run-on sentences and no periods in the quotations.

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Run-on. Did not follow RACES.

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To use a better tag, don't be redundant, and to avoid restating things.

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Capitalizing the title

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Use tag, don't assume

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Be specific to the story

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Make a tag and know how to put the title down

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A tag could shorten the quote

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"Don't make assumptions"

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No Long closings

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Don't forget to add comma after lead-in and before quote

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don't ever use the word quote

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Not to say "this quote" and just start with what you are going to say.

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Don't say un-needed phrases.

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Charlie Griffin

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always tag an author and tag the quote

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Don't be too wordy

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Avoid 1st person

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Run On

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Need a better tag

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Need to use MLA

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CANNOT USE A SECOUND PRONOUN "YOU"

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combine sentence, put a period after MLA

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no run on sentences

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Don't forget races, needs lead in

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capatilization rules

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Re-read before turning it in

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use tags, MLA

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need to work on run-on's

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use tags, check your work

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site the authors name in quotation marks with the page number.

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Make sure to include a lead for the quote

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Have a strong text.

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Restate the question

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Cite evidence and use a tag

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The lead in was confusing and the C was to wordy.

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Always put the title and the author.

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Do not do run on sentences.

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Be specific, no repeating

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use a lead in

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Do not be too wordy.

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The lead in is confusing and the C is too wordy.

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Summarry was all over the place.....

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Don't forget to use tags.

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Period after MLA even if there is punctuation at the end of the quote

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The C and the E of RACES was unclear.

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Do not use the word 'there'.

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Tag needed

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Always have the title and author in the R section

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Include title of passage and author.

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Don't forget a tag.

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Don't do run on sentences.

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Don't preach and a tag is needed.

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Try turning multiple sentences into one complex sentence.

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Unclear/Run on

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Don't use second person

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use a leadin

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Summary only gets 1st person.

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dont be repetitive

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don't assume

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Have a strong evidence for your citing evidence.

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Put a quote in the body