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Hook, C. 'Water Worlds, The Antarctic' Australian Museum 2002 pages 4 - 10
Cheryl Hook discribes Antarctica, 5.5 million sq miles.
frozen oceans - constantly changing
-tall mountains, active volcano
many ice caps - large domes of solid ice, Plains of ice sheets
four different places. antarctica, antarctic coast, southern ocean, and subantarctic islands.
2% of antarctica is not covered by ice and snow. a huge tundra
This tells us what the terrain is like in Antarctica

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Hook, C. 'Water Worlds, The Antarctic' Australian Museum 2002 page 8
windiest, driest and coldest continent.
light half the year dark the rest
never gets above freezing temp.
blizzards with 93 mph winds are common.

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Hook, C. 'Water Worlds, The Antarctic' Australian Museum 2002 page 6
southern end of the earth

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Hook, C. 'Water Worlds, The Antarctic' Australian Museum 2002 pages 12 - 24
very few plants and animals
seals, algae can grow in ice
animals on antartica have blubber to stay warm-insulation. only invertabras less than 12 mm in size live in the middle of antarctica.

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hooks for a sled, bars to hang

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design a versatile backpack for a variety of antarctic scientists.

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design a versatile backpack for a variety of antarctic scientists.

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Antarctic scientists need a new backpack to help them carry their equipment. The EXTM4 is designed to carry any type of antarctic scientists. -above- not part of the main
Staggering across the ice sheet, the group of varying scientists slowly hike their way up the ice cap. Each scientist, uses the same back pack but with different add-ons. The EXTM4 is a versatile backpack that has many attachments that can change how any scientists carry their equipment to research sites. This airtight backpack is designed to keep everything in it's pouches insulated and too be ergonamicaly fit for any body. The backpack has an internal frame with a foam back to fit to any body. The bag also has heat retaining water storage system. The EXTM4 comes with a foldable bar with hooks shooting out the sides. This bar is to hang samples and objects that don't need to be insulated or heated.

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Backpack basics
Anders, M. 'Backpack basics' Get Geared Up Backpacking. Link

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​ Your design team has one goal: to improve the utility, comfort and aesthetic of backpacks currently on the market. After collecting research, you will take some time to complete the ideation...

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climatologists
Glaciology
terrestrial and marine biology, medical research, meteorology, the earth sciences, the ocean sciences, atmospheric physics, and astronomy.

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Interdependence

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5´8¨

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65 cm - height
40 cm - width
25 cm - depth

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Revise your paragraph in the following ways:

First sentence is missing something.

Don't say the name of the backpack so often--it's repetitive--just say the backpack, the bag, etc.
Clearer explanation on how your design improves or solves a specific problem.

More transitions, overall flow, and clarity