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Post your consolidated feedback from speeches you have heard today. Please don't use any names.

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Post your consolidated feedback from speeches you have heard today. Please don't use any names.

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Minus:
What's next:

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Plus:Good speech (well written)
Minus:No expression
What's Next:Use some expression and body language

Plus:Descriptive & intriguing language.
Minus:Don't always look at speech.
What's Next:Look at paper for a few seconds and remember that line and keep doing that until the end.

Plus:Used QCAA a lot to criticize them.
Minus:Don't look at laptop all the time
What's Next:Use exppression

Plus:good starting sentence and used QCAA a lot
Minus:looked at laptop the whole time
What's Next:Have expression and memorize speech

Plus:Used QCAA and persuasive language used high modality words
Minus:Looked at laptop the whole time
What's Next: memorize speech

Plus:Descriptive language
Minus:going to fast
What's Next:Take your time, your riding Ferrari

Plus:Used expression and persuasive language, very intriguing
Minus:kept eyes in the laptop
What's Next:Memorize speech

Plus:Used intriguing, descriptive and captivating language
Minus:Looked at speech all the time
What's Next: Memorize speech

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FEEDBACK

Plus- You have shown amazing language in your speech and I really liked your how you stated the QCAA a lot in your speech.

Minus- I did not like the fact that you made it only a bit boring.

What’s Next- Put more descriptive writing in it.

Plus- It was awesome you did awesome I loved how it was to the QCAA.

Minus- I cant find any

What’s Next- Edit it a bit more, you are fine!

Plus- I really liked how you used so many detailed words that made me into your speech.

Minus- I didn't like that you didn't use to many great examples.

What’s Next- Improve on the examples.

Plus- I really like that you had great persuasive speech it was great timing, and it wanted me to buy the book, you gave it your best!

Minus- I did not like that you didn't really use an example.

What’s Next- Work on the Minus.

Plus- I liked how you said many great examples in your speech.

Minus- You said too many ANIMAL CRUELTY too much.

What’s Next- Work on the Minus!

Plus- I liked your speech because of how persuasive it is because of your language.

Minus- Don’t stop so suddenly, just go with the flow. Look up, don’t keep your head in your speech.

What’s Next- Make it more toned, not monotone, also work on your minus.

Plus- I like that you are giving us eye contact.
Minus- Make it more non-boring.
What’s Next- Work on Minus.
Plus- I liked your tone because its not mono tone, which makes it awesome.
Minus- EYE CONTACT DUDES AND DUDETTS.
What's Next- Work on Minus

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+Plus

o   Great Description

o   Persuasive Writing

o   She has great content and she is very persuasive

o   Variation in voice tone

o   He/she has got to the point

o   QCAA as mentioned enough

o   Looked at the audience often

o   Great language and words

o   Big powerful words

o   Great Explicit Words

o   Great, because he does not need to hold his laptop

What’s Next?

o   Speak with your head up

o   Better Voice Projection

o   Need a variation of tone in your voice

o   Don’t change the subject strait away, try and blend it in

o   Start with a greeting

o   Read to fast

o   Read to fast again you can’t understand what they’re saying

o   Make sure it makes sense

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I couldn't copy it I'm soo click the document.

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Plus:

Ø Good voice projection

Ø Great eye contact and use of different tone

Ø Good that you used different tones

Ø Eye contact

Ø Good posture and voice projection

Ø Voice projection

Ø Good range in tone

What’s Next:

Ø Eye contact and flow of speech

Ø Actions to make emphasis

Ø Eye contact with audience and flow of speech

Ø Flow of speech

Ø Slow down!

Ø Have a change in the tone of your voice

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Lily B

PLUS: Great persuasion and stayed on topic

WHATS NEXTS:  adding more captivating words

Jack J

The plus is that jack used great captivating words and educational.

The Whats next is that you should look more at the audience then your computer.

Eric

Plus GREAT CONTENT

MONO TONE eyecontact

Sam L

Plus GREAT CAPTIVATING STORY LINE and amazing vocabulary

Whats next EYE Contact and mono tone

Liliana L

Plus Great Contenct Language and great voice protection

Whats next Eye Contact

Finn R

Whats next Mono tone

Plus GREAT CONTENT LOTS OF EYECONTACT

Whats next eyeContact

Plus Amazing voice projection

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FEEDBACK
PLUS:

Ø I think that you had a really good conclusion

Ø I think you got your point across really well

Ø I liked your descriptions about your character

Ø You got your point across really well in your introduction

Ø I like your quote at the start

Ø You have some good evidence

Ø You had a great introduction

Ø You have a really persuasive speech

Ø Great rhetorical question

Ø Nice example

WHAT’S NEXT:

Ø Maybe you could make your tone a bit brighter

Ø Maybe you could have a better hook sentence

Ø Try to get your point across better at the start

Ø Wasn’t the point to persuade the QCAA to add the book to the Year 7 Curriculum

Ø Watch out for talking to fast

Ø Your points were really good, if I could hear them!

Ø What was your point?

Ø Maybe you could have better tone when you speak

Ø Don’t drive the Bugatti Chiron

Ø What were your points?

Ø Try to look up from your work

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Plus:

Good points of discussion

Nice, Brief Summary of the book

Very persuasive

Good Research

Good evaluation

Excellent persuasive language

Liked the context of the points

Good Voice Projection

Emotion aspect

Decent Tone variation

Good expression

Very good evidence

High Modality

I like your opinion

Nice Flow

Good variation of words

Made me think

Good rhetorical question

What’s Next:

Less of a summary

Use formal language

Use High Modality (Must not should or might)

Better flow

Use Palm cards

Voice projection

Eye Contact

Overuse of words (incredible, great, amazing)

Evidence?

Pace of speech

Not Persuasive

Monotonous speech

Learn speech more

I want to learn more

Slow Down

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Good job today guys