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Ella thought that the ending needed to be faster

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Cydney thought that the visual effects and colour were really well done.

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Mrs Coultish thought that the lip syncing was well timed and worked well.

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Tom thought that the lips sync was good by the video could show more of it.

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Yoli thought that the lip syncing could be timed better as it was out of sync in some parts.

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Cailin thought that the colours used within the video made it more interesting.

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Kristy thought that we could improve our video by varying our transitions .

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We changed our ending before due to feedback but feel as if we could still make it better, this comment proves that point. To improve our video further, we used some faster cutting near the end of our video to make the video much faster and more tense at the end.

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Cydney's feedback meant that we didn't have to change anything regarding our visual effects and smoke scenes, although we did end up adding more smoke scenes due to other feedback as we needed more lip syncing in our video.

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Mrs Coultish's feedback meant that our lip syncing worked well within the context of our video, which meant we wouldn't have to re film any scenes regarding this.

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As mentioned in Cydney's feedback section we wanted to add more smoke scenes as people liked the colours in them, these scenes also featured our main artist lip syncing so we could use this footage to suit both needs.

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Yoli's feedback was useful as we knew that parts of our lip syncing was out of sync with the music but didn't think anyone would be able to notice such as small detail. But as it was noticed we decided to put a decent amount of time into adjusting our video to make the lyrics match up with our footage better.

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Caillin's feedback linked back to what Cydney said, which was that the coloured smoke made the video more visually interesting, as this linked into adding more lip sync we decided to add more scenes like this.

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Kirsty's feedback made us think about how we used transitions throughout our video, as we agreed that we had a lack of varied transitions. To fix this we added a larger variety of transitions to make the video more visually interesting.