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peer name : Yan Song
Your story was really nice and interesting.

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You story is good!!!!

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nice intro Xin yuan!

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PEER'S NAME GUAN LIANG very good

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Good Job,Louis Level 4 you wrote it really well. Lots of nice vocab.

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My peer's name:Sean Foo

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the story was interesting. i wonder what will happen next

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Valeska your story is good

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hello.peer name.valeska.quite good

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peer name : Kayden
The story has just started and already sounds interesting. It would be more innteresting at the summit.

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The story was nice .I wonder what would happen next to the characters? ?Would they fight?

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Peer name: FRASER
the story was very nice
story was interesting good job!

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Peer's name: Yan Yifan
I feel that the story is very detailed. The idea of the story is well planned and I understand the feelings of each character mentioned in the introduction.

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peer's-name: Yee Ting
The-content-is-good-with-nice-words-used-and-good-usage-of-the-words

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peer's name : Li Chen Jia
Good starting and the content of the story is wonderful.I like it!

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PEER NAME: roshan
COMMENT; nice starting! i wounder what will happen as the story progresses
peer name : lovina
comment; cant really catch is going to happen but i do like the words that you use:) i am wanting to read more....
peer; reyes
comment : the story flow seems really interesting cant wait to red more.....

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peer's name : Lim shin shyan
I like the way you described the sky.Good context ! I cannot wait to read the whole story

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Peer's name: Yu zhe
Comments: Very Interesting!
GOOD JOB!

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Peer's name: Samuel
Comments: Nice story, it makes me wonder what happens next.=)GOod JOb

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Good Job, Mikerson Level 3 you wrote it really well.

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Peer's name: Tian Xinyuan
The content of the text was simple and the story flows nicely in my opinion.
Relevance of Ideas: Level 3-4(#1) 3-4 (#2)
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Peer name: Cheng Kun
Good phrases and good sentences.I like the cliff hanger that is at the end.
GOOD JOB!!!

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Peer's name: Jun Hong
Comments: Great story! I wonder what trick that is up his sleeves.. i hope to read the rest of your story!

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l like it,a lot of good phrases and words, very good.

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Peer's name: Min
#1: Level 4/Level 3
#3: Level 3/Level 3
#4: Level 4

Comments: Well done, Min. I think your introduction is very captivating and it makes me want to read the rest of the story.