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Li Na:
- general topic for the whole essay
- specific focus for this paragraph

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should include general topics ( question) and specific keywords ( your own perspectives)

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[[tuan] introduce the general subject/topic as well as specific points that will be analyzed

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[[tuan] introduce the general subject/topic as well as specific points that will be analyzed

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Li Na:
- detail information

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Straight to the point, focus on 1 main idea

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Straight to the point, focus on 1 main idea

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including general topic and specific keyword

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too much information

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be vague or unclear

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- be lengthy
- give too much detail

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Li Na
- specific cases/ detail numbers recorded in the real life

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cohesive devices:firstly, secondly, what is more, on top of that=> cohesion

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number details, the examples most people know.

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Li Na:
- Linking words
- Paraphrase

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explain ( who, when, why,what for, where)