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Finally, to this piece I added some curlers, an instant loc tool, and a “cruddi brush”

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I added a comb and an edge brush to this piece. Since the piece represents the internal battle of texturism, I incorporated things that would be left behind while conforming to what society wants her to be.

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I added a thought bubble in the shape of Africa to this piece symboling the submission to european beauty standards .

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I added a “pick” to this piece (a comb used for tighter curls like 4c kinky hair).

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Added detail to the fabric and some purple shadows for the picture. Tried to add extra texture and shadows for a better contrast like suggested

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I added more shadows and depth and made the hair less cluster-y line suggested. Also tried to fix perspective a bit and add some more in depth shadows as well as fix the mirror reflection. Also added more background detail and shadows

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Added lots more shadows and depth including some blue shadows to help them stand out and add value. I worked on more dynamic lighting as well like comments suggested

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I added some deeper shadows and texture. I chose not to fill in the white spaces out of choice to bring attention to the harmful advertisement, but added texture and depth like other suggestions suggested

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I moved the positioning of the person to make it seem more with emotions of the haunting with schizophrenia. I also made the words more bold and colored in the hallucinations.

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I did a new sketch for OCD and focused more on the thinking that goes with the obsessive hand washing .

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I did a new sketch of this drawing and fixed the hand position holding the mask. As well as changed the positioning of the text.

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I added more swirls to negative space and widen the torso of the person.

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I added more color in some spots because some recommendations were preferring more color to be displayed. I also added slight detail to the figure to give it more purpose while also keeping it subtly transparent.

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I added more detail to the crown to better display its meaning as well as give it better dimension. I made the ears bigger and the shoulders wider to make the head more proportional, and I also added slight detail to the shirt to remove how big the blank space was.

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I added more color to give a stronger impression in the hands, as well as darken the lining around the "NO" hand. I also added slight detail to the "please" hand to express that it is a left hand.

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I added detail to the center piece because there was some confusion as to what it represents.

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I didn't want to change anything in my drawings so I drew a new piece to compliment the others. I wanted it to capture the joy and beauty of life.

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Added something to the left side background to even out the sky as well as added white to the middle of the flames. Also darkened the iris of the eye with more shading

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I worked on the devils body proportion in his chest area. Added white to the middle of flames as well as fixed the proportion of the angels eye.

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I tried to widen the hips of the devil side since I was able to do that with the color. Also added white to the middle of the flames.

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I added value to both the left and right side background. Also widened her jaw as well as lifted her nose up a little since it appeared too long

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added a shade to one side to this drawing to describe its two sides to everyone sometime a dark one.

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I add eyebrows in this one. I think now it’s look perfect.

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Description: My Topic for my Final is mental heath. this drawing present that in Day or Night depression is hard to carry around 24/7 and you can be upset anytime of the day. 

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Description: My Topic for my Final is mental health. this drawing present that mental health is everywhere. its sad when you are alone and that you can feel the sadness around from the within and the sky.  

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Description: My Topic for my Final is mental heath. this drawing present that its two sides to everyone. Just because I'm happy does not mean I'm not upset.  

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Description: My Topic for my Final is mental heath. this drawing present that a person can look like everything is alright but its always that thought in their mind that can over take your loves ones.

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This drawing represents that our actions affect the animals and wildlife around us which is why we need to stop pollution

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This drawing shows the amount of airpollution that can come from just ine building.. which as an incredible affect on our environment

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I believe that a lot of exhaust and gas is released into the air which causes air pollution. This is really bad for the air that we breathe and it is also not good for the animals that breathe it as well.

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I did my final project on enviornmental issues.. one of which is pollution. I believe that people take advantage of the earth we live on and we as a whole need to take better care of it. I used pencils and charcoal for my drawing

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I did my project on abortion and how beautiful life is. The heart starts beating as soon as 21 days after conception. I think life is amazing and precious and should be protected. I used graphite, charcoal, and marker to create my drawings. I got inspiration from real photos and used my imagination to create my pieces.

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Description: This was my first drawing related to the pollution. In this drawing I tried to demonstrate how industries overtook earth

And how it destroys our environment. Due to which the rate of warming increases day by day and glaciers are melting. Overall, pollution kills us and our planet.

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Description: This was my second drawing related to the pollution. In this drawing, I draw the earth and how it is crying to the increasing rate of pollution. And I also try to illustrate some precautions and solutions of that . I used wax colours and sketch colours for that.

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Description: In this drawing, I try to explain and differentiate between four kind of pollutions. There are four kinds of it; water pollution, land pollution, air pollution, noise pollution. For this drawing, I used pencil colours and caryon colours or wax colours.

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Description: In this piece of art or drawing, I try to demonstrate how pollution affects us and our environment. Earlier our earth was so pretty and green , water was clear , trees were green. Everything seems very happy and cheerful but now due to the pollution everything destroys. Now, air is polluted, water is polluted and we can’t have it without filter. Overall, it’s just degrade the quality of life and our nature. And for that I used pencil colours along with the sketches to highlight and for outer covering.

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Description: I choose this piece for my final project as it explains what a person wants to say when they are going through mental health but are too afraid to say anything so they just hide it and say they are fine. Many people feel ashamed of their mental health and don’t want people to know. For this drawing I just used my graphite pencils.

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Description: I choose this piece for my final collection project as it shows what a person should feel on the inside but doesn’t always feel. People are surrounds and pressured by many bad feelings that eventually explode the good feels. The words on the outside express those bad feelings. For this drawing I choose to use graphite pencils and colored pencil.

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Description: I choose this drawing as one of my final pieces because it shows the positive growth the mind can have and positive affirmations a person show have to help them grow and stay strong. For the drawing I used my graphite pencils and colored pencils to add some color!

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Description: My topic for my final project is mental health. This drawing shows how the brain feels inside as well as the body language a person might give off when struggling with mental health. For this drawing I choose to use just graphite pencils as they are my favorite materials to use.

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Just want to say I really like how this turned out! I can see you did a great job on shading and showing highlight on the face! I also love how the person is not looking directly at you, but instead looking away. Good job on this Marlee.

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I chose to do good vs evil, and the struggle we have with coping mechanisms and our faith as we battle through life. I used graphite as well as water color colored pencils. I kept the human like portion of all my images in black and white with graphite intentionally to be the "grey area" we sometimes feel we are in.

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This drawing relates to the issue of mental health because any day could be a bad day depending on what happens in your life, but I feel like pets and animals help with the stress and can help put your mind on the right track. I used graphite pencil, and charcoal on the tree, I used crayons to add some color into the drawing.

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This drawing relates to the issue of mental health because I have times where I let a test get to me, and I end up failing the test, and it sucks to see a score that low, but there's always the opportunity of redemption to get a better score on the next test. I used graphite, and crayons to add texture and color into the drawing.

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This drawing relates to my issue of mental health because all of the people I drew in this drawing including me are always meeting up for runs in the morning and always having a good time. I used graphite pencil, and I used crayons to add some color into the drawing.

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This drawing relates to my topic of mental health because I used to run track and field at Harford tech during high school, and it really helped me get past obstacles that were in my way. I used my graphite pencils, and used some crayons to add some color into the drawing.

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My topic was the social concept that misunderstanding is the root cause of pain and indifference. Many people are quick to see only a good or bad side, forgetting everyone is capable of being a little bit of both. I wanted to capture the way that confusion and the incapability to understand another is a major cause of division. Each piece contains graphite with colored pencils to highlight key aspects.

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For my topic I chose to show how habitats are changed for human use. For all of my drawings I chose to show how natural landscapes are destroyed for human benefit. All of my drawings use a combination of regular graphite pencils and colored pencils.

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This final piece deals with colorism. The swirl is the same swirl used in persuasive media. There are no benefits in this piece because there are no benefits to lightening your skin except being more socially relatable. Many colorism arguments stem from internalized racism and unhappiness usually beginning in one’s childhood. The piece is on the simpler side because colorism is a simple minded ideology with no benefits!

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This piece features a little black girl seeing an ad on tv encouraging her to succumb to european beauty standards and get rid of the afro. It also features some thought going through her head and you can see how the ad affects her.

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This piece involves a machine that will change these black women with beautiful textured hair into society’s dream. They also start off with sad faces because they bear the weight of society wanting them to be something else and ultimately succumb to the pressure.

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I tried to personify the hair while incorporating texturism in this piece!

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This drawing and my topic are about pollution and the fact that we are killing species in our waters and land by being selfish I used 2 and 4 b pencils Aswell as pieces of a bag to show the pollution in our waters.

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This artwork shares how pollution kills species in our environment like tress and the right side shows the benefits of taking care of our world and the other is killing it i used 2b and 4b pencils to shade and draw.

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the pollution topic was focused on by showing that we only have one world and us killing it with pollution of our environment is foolish and this drawing expresses the fact that there is only one world, and we need to keep it healthy and stop killing it I used again 2 and 4 b pencils for shading and drawing.

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my topic was focused on pollution and this art shows how humans killing tress are hurting the environment and the picture shows a lone tree in the midst of many chopped down from our selfishness i used my 2 and 4 b pencils for shading and drawing

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My topic is mental health. This drawing portrays schizophrenia and the inner thoughts someone might have. People with this disorder may have symptoms that affect them mentally and physiological like hallucinations as seen in the drawing. I used graphite to complete this drawing.

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My topic is mental health. This drawing fits my topic because it portrays Anxiety. It shows a girl having a normal conversation with someone but she is zoning out letting her anxious thoughts get the best of her. People with anxiety can experience fast heart beat, feeling nervous or like something bad is going to happen. While also having trouble concentrating. That is just some of the symptoms of anxiety. I used graphite and colored pencils for this drawing.

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My topic is mental health. This drawing is portraying depression. It is showing how someone can look happy on the outside but on the inside, they are the complete opposite. I used graphite for this drawing .

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My topic is mental health. This drawing is showing OCD and how it can take a toll on someone mentally. People with OCD can fight this with having a strict routine for example. As seen in the drawing, the man has a routine of locking door and washing hands. If he doesn’t, someone he loves will die. Which people with ocd can think like this, as if breaking the routine can cause bad luck. For this drawing, I used colored pencils .

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