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(1) Review the lesson

(2) Complete Homework Unit 2.1 (LMS)

(3) Complete Pre-task Unit 2.2 (LMS)

(4) Write a paragraph ( Padlet) (120 - 150 words) about difficulties students face at school and offer two solutions. Follow:

+ Include the three features of a well-written paragraph: It has a topic sentence.

+ Every sentence relates to the topic. It has a concluding sentence.

+ Indent the first sentence of your paragraph.

+ Focus on clarity, unity, and coherence.

Use transitional words and phrases to add coherence.

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BÀI VỀ NHÀ:

(1) Write, learn and report D,V, F: https://yourhomework.net/vocabulary/lesson/000001229004

(2) Complete Homework ( LMS)

(3) Complete Pre-Tasks Lesson 4 ( LMS)

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- Act 18; Act 19, Act 27 (Great Writing Book 3)

- Answer questions page 12 ( Reading Comprehension - Reading Explorer 3)

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page 12) a)1b 2d 3a 4a 5 d b: 1-c, 2-b, 3-a, 4-d

act 27: Friend ship is the most important thing in life. Friends help us when we need or share happiness with us. Best friends are people that we can belive and and talk when there are problems. Friends ships make us happier and more active when we are boring. We can also make good memories with our friends. In conclusion, if we don't have good friends, our life will be boring and sadness.

PEEL structure ->

Friendship is the most important thing in life. Friends help us when we need or share happiness with us. Best friends are people that we can belive (1) and and (2) talk when (3) there are problems. Friends ships (4) make us happier and more active when we are boring (5). We can also make good memories with our friends. In conclusion, if we don't have good friends, our life will be boring and sadness (6).

1. belive → believe: Sai chính tả.

2. and and → and: Lặp từ thừa.

3. talk when → talk to when: Thiếu giới từ "to".

4. Friends ships → Friendships: Sai chính tả/số nhiều (ghép từ sai).

5. boring → bored: Người thì dùng "bored", còn "boring" dùng cho vật/sự việc (gây chán).

6. sadness → sad: Ở đây cần tính từ (sad), không phải danh từ (sadness).

Bài của con cần liên kết các câu sử dụng các từ chuyển tiếp " Firstly", " In addition"....

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There are many difficulties students face at school .First , students might have a hard time doing class activities ,for example ,a hard math question at school can trouble the brain. Second ,they will also have a hard time looking for friends , a kid without friend will not likely to be brave.Third , some kid studies more than they need .Some overworked and died .Fourth ,some kid are not perfect when born , some have missing body part or poor families .My solution in these things are to pay more attention to the lessons teachers teach ,be more open to the world , plan out a shedule too find time to rest ,and study and to never give up. These are some difficulties students face at school and how to fix them.

Feedback:

There are many difficulties students face at school (1) .First , students might have a hard time doing class activities (2) ,for example (1) ,a hard math question at school can trouble the brain. Second (1) ,they will also have a hard time looking for friends (3) , a kid without friend (4) will not likely to be brave.Third (1) , some kid (5) studies more than they need .Some overworked (6) and died (7) .Fourth (1) ,some kid (4) are not perfect when born (8) , some have missing body part (9) or poor families .My solution in these things (10) are (11) to pay more attention to the lessons teachers teach ,be more open to the world , plan out a shedule too find time to rest ,and study and to never give up. These are some difficulties students face at school and how to fix them.

Detailed Corrections

1. Extra space before the full stop → school. Missing space after full stop → school. First, " .First ,-> . First, | . For example, | . Second, | . Third, | . Fourth,

2. Needs correct punctuation . For example,

3. look for friends -> make friends ( more natural)

4. Singular/plural error → a kid without friends

5. Wrong singular/plural → some kids ( Some + plural countable nouns); Wrong pronoun agreement → Some kids study more than they need

6. Incomplete subject → Some kids are overworked

7. unclear → and become very tired (not died)

8. → are not born perfect or are born with difficulties

9. plural → missing body parts

10. Awkward phrasing → My solutions to these problems

11. Spelling error → schedule

12. Wrong word → to not too

13. Awkward phrasing → plan out a schedule to find time to rest, study, and never give up.

Estimated CEFR Writing level: A2+

The essay has a clear structure (First, Second, Third, Fourth). Solutions are relevant but could be explained in more detail. Some ideas are unclear (e.g., “overworked and died” is too extreme). Linking words are used, but punctuation mistakes make them confusing.

Sample:

Students face many difficulties at school. First, they may struggle with academic subjects such as math or science, which can cause stress and pressure. In addition, a child may find it hard to make friends because they do not have a chance to talk and work with others. To address these problems, students should pay attention in class and ask questions when they do not understand. Another effective measure is that schools can provide group activities to build friendships. In conclusion, although school life can be challenging, effective solutions can help students succeed and enjoy learning.

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Stressful ( exams can be stressful)

Stressed ( feelings - I feel stressed)

exciting ( sth causing the feeling - the trip is exciting)

excited ( feelings - I feel/ am excited)

Students have many difficulties at school, and this makes (Stheir study harder. One problem is that there is too much homework. Many students feel tired and stressed because they don’t have enough time to finish it. Another difficulty is that some subjects are very difficult, like mathematics and foreign languages. For instance , students sometimes cannot understand the lessons, so they lose confidence and don’t -> do not want to study more. However, there are some solutions for these problems. First, teachers should give less homework and make lessons more interesting, so students can feel more happy and exiting when learning in class. Second, schools can create extra classes are to help weak students improve their knowledge. In conclusion, learning at school is not easy for student at all.