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Money has always been a source of power, respect, and opportunity in life. Today, having money can open doors to better education, high-paying jobs, and traveling. In the past, men usually controlled money because they were the only ones allowed to work in certain professions, while women were often excluded from financial decisions and opportunities. This gave men a clear advantage in society because of their access to money.

Today, women have far more opportunities to earn money and take leadership roles than in the past. Women run successful businesses, hold top positions in companies, and make such important decisions in politics and society.

Money may rule the world, but it should not be a man's game. As women continue to break barriers and gain more financial power, society moves closer to real fairness and balance.

1. high paying → high-paying (compound adjective needs hyphen)

2. than the past → than in the past top position → top positions

3. such a important decision → such important decisions

4. .As → . As

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Money isn’t just about buying stuff, it gives humans the power to be able to make their own choices—for example, where they can live or what school they go to. It also gains them respect from others, as a lot of people see that as a sign of success. Most importantly, it allows you to get more chances in life, for better jobs and a lot of things.

In the past, men controlled their money and financial power through laws and paying off debt. Back then, more job offers were for men to conduct their family and their own life. This left women completely dependent on men for money.

Even today, women don’t have the same opportunities as men to earn money and become leaders. The way different genders are treated is a big part of this, as women are often paid less for the same work, and are more likely to work in lower positions, where fewer women are promoted to management roles from the beginning.

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Money has always been a source of power , respect , and opportunity in life . Today , having money can open doors to better education , high paying jobs , traveling . In the past , men usually controlled money because they were the only ones allowed to work in certain professions , while women were often excluded from financial decisions and opportunities . This gave men a clear advantage in society because of their access to money .

Today , women have far more opportunities to earn money and take leadership roles than the past , women run successful businesses , hold top position in companies , and make such a important decision in politics and society .

Money may rule the world , but it should not be a man's game .As women continue to break barriers and gain more financial power , society moves closer to real fairness and balance .

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Today, people get power, respect, and chances in life by having money. Alot of people would do anything just for money, for example: They would sell their organ for money etc. Once your money finishes, people around you won't care so much about you, you won't have power anymore.

In the past, men used to control money and financial power by owning property, earning wages, managing business and dominating legal rights, owning lands, and limited women's access to education or jobs, keeping financial power mostly men.

Women often do not have the same chances as men to earn money or become leaders. But today is differant, they can lead businesses, brands etc. So women do have a higher chance today to earn more and become leaders in some kinds.

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Alot → A lot (spelling correction).

for example: They → for example, they (punctuation + lowercase “they”).

money etc. → money, etc. (comma before “etc.”).

Once your money finishes → Once your money is finished (grammatical correction, natural phrasing).

you won't have power anymore. → and you won't have power anymore. (added “and” for sentence flow).

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managing business → managing businesses (plural form for subject agreement).

dominating legal rights, owning lands, and limited women's access → dominating legal rights, and owning land, while limiting women's access (parallel structure + grammar fix).

keeping financial power mostly men → keeping financial power mostly with men (added “with” for correct expression).

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differant → different (spelling correction).

differant, they → different; they (semicolon for correct punctuation).

brands etc. → brands, etc. (comma before “etc.”).

leaders in some kinds. → leaders in some ways. (idiomatic correction, “some kinds” is incorrect in this context).

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Money Rules the World but is it a main game?

Money plays a big role in everyone’s life. It gives people power, respect, and opportunities to have a better life. With money people can afford education, health care, and better life styles.

Back in the days, men were the ones who controlled anything financial. Men used to hold the highest  jobs and businesses, which gave them control over money.

Nowadays, things are much better for women. They go to school, work, and some owned famous companies. They started businesses and are becoming more independent with themselves.

Even with everything good that is happening, women still don’t have complete equal right. In many jobs women are  paid more than men even if they do the same work. Family responsibilities and our communities’ expectations make it harder for women to focus on their career.

In conclusion, money plays a powerful role in today’s society. Men have held control over money for most the past time, and women are continuing to make process towards equal financial right. The future will depend on making sure money is in equal rights between everyone.

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the author says " I was in a bad mood all the time . snapped at my girlfriend . didn't have time to see my friends " . it means that chasing money affected his relationships in a bad way "in a bad mood " and he doesn't have time to hangout with his friends " didn't have time to see my friends " .

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We can infer that the author felt greedy and money focused.

Evidence: "I even lost the opportunity to work for a very successful entrepreneur because I asked for too much money. But that didn’t stop me from earning more."

"The verb earning means that he never wanted to stop making money at the time. That shows how greedy he was."

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The author thinks that money isn’t as important as your emotions and that family and friends are more important. As he said “ Don’t chase money. Even if you think it gives you financial freedom. If it comes at the price of emotional freedom, it’s not worth it” he says its “not worth it” which indicates he doesn’t care for money.

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"I even lost the opportunity to work for a very successful entrepreneur because i asked for too much money." The text shows that: All what the author cared about is earning more and more money.

He didn't care about his role and success

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He believes that emotional freedom is more important the financial freedom, "Don't chase money. Even if you think it gives you financial freedom. If it comes at the price of emotional freedom, its not worth it"

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The author thinks money is necessary for food, rent, and daily life, but money alone cannot give real happiness. The phrase “we need it to live” shows that money is important for survival, but not for true happiness. When the author uses the verb 'live', he means experiencing the real world which is why he is saying money serves an importance greater than survival.

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The author believes that equality, hard work, and independence are more valuable than money, because even though money gives respect and power, achieving fairness and personal growth requires effort and persistence

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It effected his mental health and relationships, he snapped at his girlfriend, and didn't have much time to meet his friends. "I woke up at 6 AM and worked until I went to bed. I was in a bad mood all the time. Snapped at my girlfriend. Didn't have time to see my friends"

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1. The author thinks that money is important for surviving and taking care of your needs.

Evidence: "Money doesn’t make you happy. And yet, we need it to live."

As you can see, the author states that we need money to "live".

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Inference : it made him overwork, ignoring his family and friends due to being so money focused.

justification : According to the text " I woke up at 6 AM and worked until I went to bed. I was in a bad mood all the time. Snapped at my girlfriend. Didn’t have time to see my friends. In fact, I didn’t have time to enjoy anything. " he says that he is always in a bad mood and he don't have time to see his friend .

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Money likely affected the author’s personal relationships by giving him respect and influence, which may have shaped how others treated him and how he interacted with them.

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1-Money is important for necessities

justification: the author stated that even though money doesn't buy happiness it is essential for necessities

2- Because he demanded more money. But that didn't stop him from earning more.

justification: the author stated that he demanded a higher salary because he was money-focused.

3- The author Snapped at his girlfriend . Didn’t have time to see his friends and family.

justification:

The author stated that he had slowly lost perspective of his personal relationships including his family, friends, and girlfriend.

4- He believes emotional freedom is more important than money.

justification: the author stated having emotional freedom is more important as it cultivates mental and physical strength, which helped him reorient himself.

5-discipline and values carve the path to true freedom

justification: The author stated that without resilience, self-discipline, and a clear sense of values, wealth becomes another chain holding you back.

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the author said "snapped at my girlfriend "

this means that chasing money affects your relationships in a bad way

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We can say that money had a negative impact on his social relationships. "I woke up at 6 AM and worked until I went to bed. I was in a bad mood all the time. Snapped at my girlfriend. Didn’t have time to see my friends. In fact, I didn’t have time to enjoy anything."

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"I became very money-focused. I even lost the opportunity to work for a very successful entrepreneur because I asked for too much money. But that didn’t stop me from earning more". Justifying that he became very money focused and lost the opportunity because he asked for so much money . but he didn't stop, he kept earned more.

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The author says, "I wanted emotional freedom" and "Don’t chase money if it costs your happiness." This shows he believes feeling free and happy is better than having a lot of money.

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independence, respect, and opportunities for success, so losing a chance to work for a successful entrepreneur shows that these goals are very important to him and motivate him to keep striving

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The author says, "I was in a bad mood all the time. Snapped at my girlfriend. Didn’t have time to see my friends." This shows that chasing money made him unhappy and affected how he treated people close to him.

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he cared about money more than his experience and career "I even lost the opportunity to work for a very successful entrepreneur because I asked for too much money ".

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The auther cared a lot about getting more money, which leads him to lose his chance of getting work for a succesful entrepreneur.

"I even lost the opportunity to work for a very successful entrepreneur because I asked for too much money"

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True freedom comes from discipline, not just money "I mentally and physical strong due to years of consciously stressing my mind and body...I have zero debt, have savings, and work for my self"

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It’s a plan that takes hard work and thinking. I’ll do it too and I hope you do the same. Nothing here is sure, so be ready to start again.

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The author says, "I lost the chance to work for a very successful entrepreneur because I asked for too much money." This means he cared about money more than the job opportunity.

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The author says, "Money doesn’t make you happy. And yet, we need it to live." This means money is not for happiness, but we need money to live. Also, the author says, "Almost everything in this world needs money. Without the power of money, you can’t get opportunities in today’s world." This means we need money to do many things and get chances in life.

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Hoor Ibrahim / Aisha Obaid / Maryam Taher

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Hoor Ibrahim / Aisha Obaid / Maryam Taher

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"I’m mentally and physically strong due to years of consciously stressing my mind and body. That’s how you build strength."

"I have 0 debt, have savings, and work for myself. Plus, I don’t care about my reputation. Hence, I don’t have to answer to anybody else, other than my own morals."

True freedom comes from discipline and living by our values, not from piling up money. By staying strong, avoiding debt, and focusing on what really matters, the author found real freedom.

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The author believes freedom and strong relationships are more valuable than money "Don't chase money. Even if you think it gives you financial freedom. If it comes at the price of emotional freedom, its not worth it"

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it gives people respect , it gives people power

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At the beginning , the author thought that money is everything , and it buys freedom.

But later on he realized that money limits his emotional freedom.

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The author thinks money is important for living and freedom but not for happiness

"money doesn't make you happy and yet we need to live"

money is necessary for living

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Hoor Ibrahim / Aisha Obaid / Maryam Taher

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Hoor Ibrahim / Aisha Obaid / Maryam Taher

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"I wanted emotional freedom." and "I thought that more money was the answer to everything. “If I would only make more…Then these problems all disappear.” He believes emotional freedom, happiness, health, and time with family is more valuable than money after thinking that money would solve all his problems he found out that money isn't as valuable as family.

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We can tell that him focusing on getting money hurt his relationship "I woke up at 6 AM and worked until I went to bed. I was in a bad mood all the time. Snapped at my girlfriend. Didn't have time to see my friends"

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Hoor Ibrahim / Aisha Obaid / Maryam Taher

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Hoor Ibrahim / Aisha Obaid / Maryam Taher

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"I woke up at 6 AM and worked until I went to bed. I was in a bad mood all the time. Snapped at my girlfriend. Didn’t have time to see my friends. In fact, I didn’t have time to enjoy anything."

It shows that chasing money hurt his relationships, he was always in a bad mood, he snapped as his girlfriend, and he didn't have time for family and friends.

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inference : what dose the author think money is important for ?

the author thinks money is important to be able to live in this world

justification :

the text shows us that author although thinks money doesn't make us happy we need it to live “Money doesn’t make you happy. And yet, we need it to live.”

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Money is important for the financial needs, but it does not always support the emotional feelings.

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The author cared more about getting paid a lot right away over experience "I even lost the opportunity to work for a very successful entrepreneur because I asked for too much money"

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Hoor Ibrahim / Aisha Obaid / Maryam Taher

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Hoor Ibrahim / Aisha Obaid / Maryam Taher

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"I even lost the opportunity to work for a very successful entrepreneur because I asked for too much money."

He cared about getting paid more than learning and gaining experiences, which shows that money was his top priority.

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Hoor Ibrahim / Aisha Obaid / Maryam Taher

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Hoor Ibrahim / Aisha Obaid / Maryam Taher

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"Money doesn’t make you happy. And yet, we need it to live." Money is important for meeting basic needs and living, but it doesn’t guarantee happiness.

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The author thinks money is important, because it buys a basic level of freedom and security, but it doesn't always buy happiness " Yes, money buys freedom, but you don't need a lot of it to achieve that.

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Respond to each inference question using evidence from the text to support your answer.