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The educational success of Arthur and William at their respective schools was influenced by several external factors. These include the role of coaches, the level of school funding, and the attitudes of the students themselves.

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The educational success of Arthur and William at their respective schools was influenced by several external factors. These include the role of coaches, the level of school funding, and the attitudes of the students themselves.

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Coaches, school’s funding, and students are all external factors with the individual schools of Arthur and William that affected their educational success.

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Coaches, school’s funding, and students are all external factors with the individual schools of Arthur and William that affected their educational success.

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Poverty and violence impacts students' educational experiences. It highlights the sociocultural issues within the Chicago area, how issues in the system can negatively impact students trying to achieve a better future.

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Poverty and violence impacts students' educational experiences. It highlights the sociocultural issues within the Chicago area, how issues in the system can negatively impact students trying to achieve a better future.

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Despite living in a rough area of Chicago ridden with crime and bad influences as well as facing plenty of personal issues regarding their families and themselves, Arthur and William still worked hard and put most of their energy towards chasing their dream of becoming professional basketball players, achieving success at the end in one way or another.

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Despite living in a rough area of Chicago ridden with crime and bad influences as well as facing plenty of personal issues regarding their families and themselves, Arthur and William still worked hard and put most of their energy towards chasing their dream of becoming professional basketball players, achieving success at the end in one way or another.

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Due to the turbulent family situations, injuries, and different school lives that Arthur and William experienced, their attitudes towards education were changed for the worse.

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Due to the turbulent family situations, injuries, and different school lives that Arthur and William experienced, their attitudes towards education were changed for the worse.

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The impacts on education need to be specified. Their attitudes were changed for the worse, but we don’t know how those problems manifested themselves. A possible solution to the problem should also be added to this thesis statement.

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It needs a solution added in the end. I feel like it needs to be a little more specified

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Possibly a solution would be nice

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How exactly were the attitudes changed in a negative way? Be more specific

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The effect of the external factors would need to be more specific and it needs a solution statement at the end

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Needs an alternative impact and an impact and a solution sentence

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Say how they impact education and add a solution statement

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One thing that is missing is the solution that goes with this statement, something that shows how they could overcome those external factors.

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The specific effects of poverty and violence would need to be specified as well as a solution statement at theend

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Don’t include the wording “external factors” in your statement. Include how attitude is impacted and give a solution.

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It needs a solution

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Say how they impact education

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No solution statement at the end

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Needs a solution statement to the external factors affecting their education and personal lives.

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I believe a solution to a problem would be great

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Thesis 2 is a shorter version of thesis 1

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Needs a solution

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According to my calculations, this one needs a solution.

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3 michelin stars