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Feedback project 1;
As conducting project #1 I will try to better to make clearer connections in the authors arguments for this project so the person conducting my interview gets a better understanding of the arguments I am trying to make through my analysis. The connections I will make towards the readings.

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Feed Back Project 1:
For my next mini precis I will need to review the reading that was most influential to my classmate in order to be more precise. Going back to review what made my classmate chose a specific reading could help me write a better precis especially now that it will be condensed.

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Desarey's Readings:
Lab Interview Tracy Johnson
Saini’s Inferior, Chapter 4, “The Missing Five Ounces of the Female Brain”

My Feedback
I am going to work on trying to be more clear in incorporating these readings into the larger scope of the project, which is how they affected Desarey's understanding of gender in science.

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done: 1/5
Need to do: 4/5
interview, cover letter, teamwork sheet.
Cover letter will be done on a doc all together. Interviews will be done in email format this week. teamwork sheet will be completed next Thursday.

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Done: Outline
Need to do: cover letter, 5/5 interviews will be done by the weekend, latest monday night.

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Done:
4/5 Interview, 3/5 cover letter

Need To Do:
Last Paragraph of cover letter, Team Work Sheet.

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Done: outline
Need to do: 4/4 interviews we will do by sunday night. Our cover letter will be due for our group on monday night as well as the teamwork sheet.

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Done: 1/5 interviews
Need To Do: 4/5 interviews, Cover letter, Teamwork Sheet
Rest of the interviews will be conducted by today and Friday. Cover letter and teamwork sheet will be worked on Friday to Monday Evening with group.

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Readings from my interviewee: Saini Chapter 2, "Females Get Sicker But Men Die Quicker" and Kaplan and Rogers "Essentialisms, Determinisms"

Feedback from Project 1: I needed to have more precise information about the text's main argument and not include quotes.  But I also did well at providing specific details from the text which I want to do for this assignment too.

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DONE:  3/5 interviews, first part of Cover Letter
NEED TO DO: 2/5 interviews, last paragraph of Cover Letter, Teamwork Sheet

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Instructions: Outlines for Individual Essays

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Instructions: Outlines for Individual Essays

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Out work here today will focus our attention on Paragraphs 2 and 3 of your individual essay, in which you provide a précis of each of the two readings your interviewee mentioned in Question E.  You should have these identified on your outline we worked on in class this Tuesday 10/18.

Each individual student should add a tile to this padlet that identifies the two readings your interviewee provided in Question E, if you have gotten that far in the interview process!  In that same tile, identify what feedback you received on your Project 1 précis that you want to incorporate into your précis for Project 2.

If you have not yet completed interviews and don't yet have readings identified, then just create a tile that identifies what feedback you received on your Project 1 précis that you want to incorporate into your précis for Project 2.  All good!

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Each group should add a tile to this padlet noting down which of these three group tasks are done and which need to be completed.  Make sure to include your Group number at the top of the padlet.  *This is a no-judgment zone -- don't worry if there's still a lot to complete.  Making sure there is a plan is the point.

Interviews
Group Cover Letter
Teamwork Sheet