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I can't really hear you that much

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you could have added a transition between you and nora

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You could have made the credits a bit slower. Good job

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Your credits went to fast that I couldn't see them

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when Carissa read she was way to fast

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I like the music.

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The water in the transition was kind of random, but I liked the curtain

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you read a little to fast

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it was great

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To Sophie
I liked your transitions and your background music was awesome.

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The credits were going too fast for me to read them

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It was hard to understand you.

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i loved the bloopers  yours was really good

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There could've been more transitions

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i think you could of been louder and talk a little slower yo talked really fast and only looked down, so also eye contact and noise in background but other wise it was good

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There could have been more transitions

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You should try to goto a quiter place

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i think the music should of been a little quieter but it was good!

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I LOVED the bloopers and there were really good transitions

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I couldn't hear you talk

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Carissa was reading way to fast I couldn't understand her.

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To Carissa
I liked the sound quality but I think that you should have put a more noticeable transitions.

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You should try adding a transition

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To Sofia R I like your video You can hear the sound very good

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The sound quality isn't the greatest but it was pretty good otherwise

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To KAYLA
I like the bloopers in your video

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I liked it but make the cuts sound smooth. :)

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it was really good but i think you could be better at cutting clips

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Good job!

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The music should be short. Also the noise is to loud.

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You cut out some of the last words but otherwise it was good!

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There was screaming and yelling in the video. You could of been a little bit louder.

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Work on going to a quiet place.
everything else was good

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there was a kind of scary sound that caught me off guard and I noticed the other people cut out when you helped Cynthia with the word but otherwise was a descent video

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Good but back round noise needs to be fixed

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Good job I liked the music.

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I  Couldn't really hear Bobby or Jackson in this a lot.

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It was good but you could have made the back ground noise better

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Work on going to a place or area that is quiet .

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i would work on transitions it was really just scene to scene nothing really in between like the credits or anything  besides that

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I suggest you add a transition.

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You cut out the end of Cynthia's bye but otherwise it was pretty good.

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Good but cut back round noise

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This was good but work on going to a place that is quiet with less back round noises.

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it was really good ! just work on cutting the clips a little, like at the end the credits were long

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When you put in Sophie reads...., I know this is really specific but maybe you could have put the transition before Sophie took a breath. Otherwise there was nothing I would change

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Hard to hear cut back round noise

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it was good but i think you can improve on  back ground noise

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It was hard to hear Bobby and Jackson.

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Cut back round noise but it was good

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Cut out the back round noises

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It was really good but the back round noise made it hard for us to hear.

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Cut down on the backround noise? Otherwise the video was really good!

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I suggest you cut out the part when someone steps in front of the camera (at the end)

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i think she did very good!! but could improve on  transitions but it was really goOD!

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IMPROVMENT
Cut back round noise