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The two things that I would have liked to improve were the argument in my counterclaim and using words that best portrayed what I was trying to say. I can improve this by considering the argument opposite of mine more and looking for words in a thesaurus.

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I had a hard time connecting textual evidence from the articles to OFMAM. Probably because I didn't understand it that well. I also could improve on not working on my paper for so long. I would like to not work on papers for 2 hours a night.

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I personally felt that I struggled with the topic of the essay and the counterargument. We started writhing about George and Lennie, and then talked about John Brown and the S.C. Case. Also the counterarguement was difficult

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Two things I would have liked to improve upon are word choice and grammar. I think that I could look up better synonyms for words in the future. I could improve with grammar by reading over my paper more.

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one of my weaknesses was the introduction, where the background info was confusing at some points and i could have improved on my second claim

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I feel like my intro and conclusion were not the best. I feel like if I had a bit more time or if I had worked on it at home they would have both been better.

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I could have improved on my introduction and conclusion. I feel I struggled with understanding he format on how to set up the conclusion. I feel I could improve these by getting help from a teacher to better understand what I have to write

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i can't get to the main point of the topic, i would need to connect all the paragraphs togetherto make it run smoother

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Understanding how the counterclaim had worked. I had a it a certain way that it sounded like it was supposed to be formatted, but it turns out it was another way, so I had to rework my WHOLE counterclaim the night before we needed the essay printed out.

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I would like to improve on my word choice and use some bigger "fancier" words that aren't that common. I would also like to improve on my conclusion since I always seem to struggle with that and it always seems to be a little on the short side.

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I think I definitely could've improved upon my conclusion and counter claim. I've always struggled with wrapping up essays. My counter claim was weak, and with very little textual support and analysis.

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Most of my textual evidence was weak. It may not have stated the point that I wanted to state. More time going through the articles would have helped. My analyzing was also poor. More time on that would have helped as well.

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things i could improve on are punctuation and understanding how the counter claim was suppose to be

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My two weaknesses were the counterclaim and analysis

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My two weakness were the counter claim and how to find citations for the other side. I found this hard because I couldnt see why other people would sees it as any other way. Also i felt like my conclusion wasn't as strong as i hoped it could be .

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I would've liked to have a broader vocabulary when writing this essay. I feel like the word choice could've been better.

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One struggle i had with the essay was time management, I was able to work in class but at home i struggled to get the essay done. I think i can improve upon this struggle by just getting it done and working on it when i get home

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The things that I could have improved on are my in-text citations and having one that links with my claims. Also with transition words.

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Most definitely work on the counter-claim a lot more. It was just awful.

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My punctuation and word choice could have been better.

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I could have improved on word choice because I didn't use any "fancy" words because I did not know where they would fit in. I could have also improved on my timing and I could have took more time on my essay because it was a little confusing for me. I could have asked for more help with my essay and figured out what I thought was confusing. I also could have asked more people to proof read my essay.

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I personally felt that this essay topic was something that none of us would have chosen and no one felt passionate enough to be able to give a good essay, and that the rubric is totally ridiculous, we aren't being graded on how persuasive or analytical that we are, it's how we can piece together a puzzle and follow guidelines.

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The two things I want to improve upon while writing essays is text analysis and wording certain sentences throughout my essay. I could've read more in depth with my quotes and I also could've reworded sentences. I also feel as if I overused some words too much but then I went through and fixed them.

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I would like to improve upon having good word choice  from the start of the essay and not having to go back and look up synonyms.  I could do this by expanding my vocab but I feel like that won't ever really matter in the real world.  Also I could improve on giving myself more time but that's not possible due to the sports I play so I guess i should get used to staying up late
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I really struggled with vague word choice in my paper. I think that using a thesaurus and looking up synonyms for words would help me find more specific words that match my meaning when writing.
Also, in-text citation formatting is difficult for me! I could improve upon this by looking at the Purdue Owl site and familiarizing myself with MLA 8 or asking a classmate to help explain to me how they are formatted. I suppose I could also do both. (: