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Ishanvi - Draft - TOK_Exhibition_Commentary

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This prompt examines the relationship between our personal experiences and the knowledge we possess.
Examine how Hosseini acquired his knowledge of Afghan life. Is your knowledge of the same different even after reading his book and other resources. Why so?

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The prompt suggests that we need to look for and assess  if some knowledge belongs exclusively to certain communities?

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#9 Are some types of knowledge less open to interpretation than others?

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#9 Are some types of knowledge less open to interpretation than others?

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Needs to cite references made in the written commentary.

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The commentary needs to address the prompt more directly and evaluate (compare) whether some knowledge is less possible to interpret them others.

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"I know something" Vs "Something belongs to me".
What is the difference?

What do you mean by, "It is safe to say that - the knowledge belongs to the logo designers"?

Include only that information about the object, as much as is relevant for prompt.

"Credibility of a source of knowledge" - a good point raised and a good idea to explore.

"We can connect the logo to the prompt and conclude that knowledge belongs to those who created it" - Does this extend to other situations and examples as well? What about scientists, researchers whose work becomes the basis for new research.

"Those who own the knowledge have power over everyone who gets to access the knowledge." Would no one outside the community notice the smile on their own? Would others also own the knowledge then? The concept of POWER - Does it apply in this case?

Do they have responsibility by virtue of being employees of [the company? Were the creators of the logo, company employees? Fact check needed.

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Check if this object is cited in the MLA format (in bibliography).

Your reference to object 1  during your explanation - is it in line with your commentary for object 1?

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Add photo credits in the bibliography

Would another knower with a similar (not exact) experience be able to connect with the picture just like you.
Does possessing this knowledge make you responsible for sharing it or guarding it from others?

TOUCH UPON THIS POINT - What is it about feelings and emotions that makes them personal and difficult to share

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No identification mark on the commentary - remove your name from the heading.

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No identification mark on the commentary - remove your name from the heading.

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Include the total word count at the beginning or end of the document

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Confirmation bias that emerges from a consistent and prolonged exposure to materials accessed on the internet can be elaborated upon.

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1st reference - It indicates that you have not read the book but have gathered information about it from this website?

Is this a credible source to cite?

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On what grounds to Authors share their papers on Sci-Hub?

Is ownership of knowledge restricted to the renumeration gained from it?

The prompt needs to be evaluated and conclude with by stating under what circumstances the knowledge is owned by the creator and by the one with the power to share it.

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The TOK concept seems to be 'value'. Ethical considerations between the right to health and safety  and the right to intellectual property.

The response seems to be a series of unanswered questions.

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The commentary loses focus. It needs to state to what extent the internet user  and the Google and Apple have has owner ship of the geographical location of the user.
In what ways can we say that Apple and Google are owners? Is ownership transferred or is it shared?
Need to describe the nature of the joint ownership.

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Document with comments from both teachers

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Document with comments from both teachers

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All 3 contexts involve animals - Think of other contexts

Climate change, carbon footprints, plastics, pursuits in science advancement, human science experiments etc

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TOK concepts - power and responsiblity?

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Submitted late - 1st June

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We can see only 1 object in the presentation - Infinity.

Once you explain its complex nature, you need to focus on answering the prompt. What about Infinity is unknowable and why?

Repeat the process for the other 2 objects you select.

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2nd draft with comments from both teachers

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2nd draft with comments from both teachers