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-While the two works may be different in some aspects, there are ways in which they are comparable
- It gives us background on both stories and tells of similarities between both.
- Thesis: By analyzing the complete opposite behaviors of those closest to the selected victims in "The Lottery" and The Hunger Games, it is evident that Collins recognizes familial and communal affection in a way that Jackson does not. These ties provide an opportunity for transformation in a society that would seem more constricting and dangerous by presenting the idea that communal attachments encourage unity and promote rebellion against injustice.
-The works can be compared through their uses of familial and communal relationships to unify an entire group for a common goal.

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-Even though they differ in some ways, they are comparable because they share certain dark elements of fiction.
-The intro gives when each story was written and a small summary of an annual ritual in each story.
-The thesis argues that Suzanne Collins recognizes affection in the community, offering hope for a society full of injustice and violence, while the behavior in "The Lottery" is the complete opposite.

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- while the two works may seem different they are very similar
- it gives the background and plot of each
- By analyzing the complete opposite behaviors of those closest to the selected victims in "The Lottery" and The Hunger Games, it is evident that Collins recognizes familial and community affection in. a way Jackson does not.
- This means that the stories are the same in having to kill someone each year but The Hunger Games holds family in higher respect then "The Lottery" does.

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-The opening sentence shows that the rest of the paper will be comparing the two stories even though they are set in different time periods and places.
-It shows the background of both of the stories and gives the reader knowledge about the stories.
-" By analyzing the complete opposite behaviors of those closest to the selected victims in "The Lottery" and The Hunger Games, it is evident that Collins recognizes familial and communal affection in a way that Jackson does not. These ties provide an opportunity for transformation in a society that would seem more constricting and dangerous by presenting the idea that communal attachments encourage unity and promote rebellion against injustice". The stories can be compared by both stories showing a society that unifies and works towards the same goal.

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- The opening sentence tells us that the essay will be on the comparison of Shirley Jackson's "The Lottery" and Suzanne Collins' "The Hunger Games".
- It gives a brief statement on what each of the stories are about.
- "These ties provide an opportunity for transformation in a society that would seem more constricting and dangerous by presenting the idea that communal attachments encourage unity and promote rebellion against injustice"
- In our words: Family ties and strong relationships help support unity and seek freedom and justice within a corrupt society.

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-The opening sentence tells the reader the two stories that will be compared within the essay.
-The information given in the intro is a background on both stories and how they relate to each other.
-"By analyzing the complete opposite behaviors of those closest to selected victims in "The Lottery" and "The Hunger Games," it is evident that Collins recognizes familial and community affection in a way that Jackson does not. These ties provide an opportunity for transformation in a society that would seem more constricting and dangerous by presenting the idea that communal attachments encourage unity and promote rebellion against injustice." The thesis is arguing that the two stories are showing different aspects of the same ideas of rebelling against injustice and working together through strong relationship ties.

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-The topic sentence for the first body paragraph states that Collin's novel and Jackson's short story are connected through the use of similar elements, which allows them to be compared.
-The main point of the paragraph is connected through events in "public". In "The Lottery" the winner is executed in public and in the "Hunger Games" the reaping takes place in public.
-The paper uses quotes as textual evidence to explain how both events are just traditions.

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- Collins' novel and Jackson's short story contain many similar structural elements that allow for comparison.
- The main point of the paragraph is that the main problem in both stories align together. Both problems have similar characteristics and that is what the paragraph discusses.
- A quote from the lottery and the hunger games are both used in this paragraph. The Hunger Games quote talks about the drawing as a reminder of the dark days long ago. The lottery quote says that there has always been a lottery. The two are compared together.

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The topic sentence gives a short overall statement that both The Reaping and the Lottery and also The Hunger Games share many factors of comparison. "Collin's novel and Jackson's short story contain many similar elements that allow for comparison." The main point of this paragraph was to provide factual evidence on the ways in which the two novels are similar. Both the novels are about people who are chosen to enter a cruel public ceremonial situation. They are faced with life or death decisions. The paragraph provides quotes from both novels that compare the similarities on the plot. These quotes draw together how these novels are so alike. The textual evidence also ties together with the thesis because both the novels present the same ideas of how communal attachments encourage unity and promote rebellion.

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- Collins' novel and Jackson's short story contain many similar elements that allow for comparison.
- In our words: this paragraph compares the two works and shows that there is a chance of hope to survive in some ways.
- It gives quotes that say how it is a tradition and they say how there is a chance to survive both.

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- The mundane and commonplace nature of these brutal ceremonies is one reason why the villagers and District members continue to participate in these customs year after year.
- The main point of this paragraph is to show that in both stories, the members of the town are too scared to try and change the traditions of picking.
- The paragraph gives two quotes that express the fear of the consequences of trying to change the tradition. In the hunger games, it says they fear the government killing all of them if they try to resist. In the lottery, they say they fear sunning out of food and starving.

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-The joining of the communities accomplishes two different objectives.
-The main point is to highlight the differences between the purposes of the communal unity between the two works.
-Historical evidence of Holocaust used to explain the thought processes of those in "The Lottery." This is used to highlight why the characters in the story act the way that they do with no remorse.

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Topic Sentence: Collins' novel and Jackson's short story contain many similar elements that allow for comparisons.
Main Point: This paragraph talks about the comparison of the two works, especially focusing on the selection process.
Textual Evidence: They pull quotes about how there has always been a lottery system and how the annual selection of people to fight has been going on for years. It supports the idea that the two works are very similar.

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- "Collin's novel and Jackson's short story contain many similar elements that allow for comparison."
- Both texts rely on chance alone to determine who lives and who dies
- They use quotes from each text and paraphrasing to support their thesis

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- However, another contribution to the societies' members acceptance of them, despite their grimness, is that they are afraid of what will happen if they abandon these traditions.
-In our words: everyone is afraid if they stop doing the Hunger Games that bad things will happen.
- It gives you reasons why you would be scared, famine, lottery, government power. The government threatens to take away their children and sacrifice them.

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- "The mundane and commonplace nature of these brutal ceremonies is one reason why the villagers and district members continue to precipitate in these customs"
- Even though the ceremonies are brutal, society sees them as a tradition. They are worried if the ceremonies are taken away, all hell will break loose.
- Textual evidence is used to show what would happen if these ceremonies were taken away.

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-"However, the most critical difference lies in the reactions of the families and communities at each of the drawing ceremonies."
-The community in The Hunger Games is much more loyal and supportive of each other while the people in The Lottery are selfish and act relieved when they find out they have not been chosen.
-"Be a good sport Tessie... all of us took the same chance." This shows how her "friends" are encouraging her to "take one for the team" instead of supporting her and having her back. Also the writer talks about how Katniss volunteers as tribute in place of her sister, proving that the community in The Hunger Games is a much more supportive and selfless society.

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-"As illustrated in these circumstances, the communities and families work together in the scenes from both pieces; however, this joining together accomplishes two very different objectives."
-The main point of this paragraph is to show how the communities unite and come together in each story. In "The Lottery" they use historical  background information to describe why the communities came together and was used as a wakeup call for the American people. In the "Hunger Games" it stated that the community came together to support Katinss and rally against those that protested against the idea (the townspeople). The "Hunger Games" also used historical evidence to explain why it was written during that time period and it's affects on people.
-There is no direct textual evidence used, however there is historical evidence. "The Lottery" is closely related and written in the same time period as the Holocaust. Whereas, the "Hunger Games" was written during the time of Occupy Wall Street. These help to support and back up the  arguments because it presents real life examples.

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-“The actions of katniss and her neighbors show that Collins brings in an element of personal afftection amongstg families and community members that is not portrayed in Jackson’s short story at all."
-The main point is to show how the hunger games has become personal and a way to show a bond between family members and district
-The text used supports the main point by saying holding hands stands for an unspoken love. This adds evidence that everything becomes more meaningful during the ceremony

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-"The differences in the nature of who controls and enforces the lotteries in the short story and the novel as well as in communal sentiment contribute to the possibility of rebellion in both stories."
-It is easier for the community in the hunger games to rebel because there is a higher power enforcing the reaping whereas in The Lottery, the community itself runs their stoning.

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-"The mundane and commonplace nature of these brutal ceremonies is one reason why the villagers and district members continue to participate in these customs year after year."
-Villagers continue to participate in the ceremony because they are afraid of the government and what life will be like without it.
- The quotes provide examples where the government is threatening.

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Topic Sentence: The mundane and commonplace nature of these brutal ceremonies is one reason why the villagers and District members continue to participate in these customs year after year.
Main point: It hard to do away with the tradition because they are fearful of a life without it the structure.
Textual Evidence: In both stories, there are threats of destruction if there are no participants in the system. The Hunger Games threatens with death and the Lottery threatens them with a lack of civilization.

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-However, the most critical difference lies in the reactions of the families and communities at each of the drawing ceremonies.
- The differences that the drawings bring out in community and family.
- Tells how in "The Lottery" the families are the people who kill their own and in The Hunger games Katniess volunteers to take her sisters spot.

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Topic Sentence: However, the most critical deference lies in the reactions of the families and communities at each of the drawing ceremonies.
Main Point: In the Lottery, they are artificially friendly and they are not serious about the events, making jokes and laughing. In the Hunger Games, it is a very serious matter and no one speaks or laughs.
Textual Evidence: Mrs. Hutchinson laughed with her neighbors when she was late, but when she was stoned by the same people she was joking with, they had no remorse. In the Hunger Games, when Katniss volunteered for her sister, the entire crowd of people were completely silent in disapproval.

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-The mundane and commonplace nature of these brutal ceremonies is one reason why the villagers and District members continue to participate in these customs year after year.
-The main point of the stories that connects them is that the common people in the stories do not have the courage to stand up for what they believe in and to try to stop these events, regardless if they are traditions.
-The writer uses quotes to show textual evidence. The quote he uses from the "Hunger Games" explains the fear of the districts because they feel that if they stand up to the government that they will all be killed by the government. The quote from "The Lottery" says that the food will run out and they will eventually starve if they oppose the government.

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-Top sentence: "However, the most critical difference lies in the reactions of the families and communities at each of the drawing ceremonies."
-Main point- To state the differences between the drawing ceremonies.
- In this paragraph quotes were used to support the main point. This supported the thesis by stating the difference in families and communities.

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- However, the most critical difference lies in the in the reactions of the families and communities at each of the drawing ceremonies.
- The main point of this paragraph is to talk about the differences between how the townspeople and district members see the lottery or drawing.
- A quote from the lottery is given that tells that the townspeople are almost jovial and happy about the lottery and completely agree with it. In the hunger games, the quote talks about the whole district standing in defiance and are completely against the drawing.

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-"There are also obvious differences that exist between the two pieces of literature"
-This paragraph shows that the two stories have very different reactions after the ceremonies.
-They use 2 quotes from "The Lottery" and 1 quote from "The Hunger Games". These quotes are used to shows the different reaction from the crowds at the ceremonies in the two stories.

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- As illustrated in these circumstances, the communities and families work together in the sense from both pieces; however, this joining together accomplishes two very different objectives
- How the 2 stories come together as a community
- "The Lottery" bands together as a community to support the killing each year. The Hunger Games band together behind Katniss' selfless loving act

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Topic Sentence: As illustrated in these circumstances, the communities and families work together in scenes from both pieces; however, this joining together accomplishes two very different objectives.
Main Point: The Lottery, the families come together in order to complete the stoning and murder of their neighbors. While in the Hunger Games, the families come together to mourn the loss of their children and protest against the system.
Textual Evidence: The time period when the Lottery was written was during World War 2, and the Holocaust was still fresh in the minds of Americans. The time period when the Hunger Games was written was during a time when protests were very common such as Occupy Wall Street.

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-The two stories differ in the ways that the specific "events" are carried out and by whom they are carried out by.
-In "The Lottery" the event is held by the people of the village not a government or ruling power, whereas in The Hunger Games, the power is in the hands of The Capitol.
-The writer uses quotes by Katniss to explain how the people of Panem viewed the Capitol. The quotes from "The Lottery" serve to suggest that the people were in power and in charge and could destroy or keep the lottery as they would like.

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-"As illustrated in these circumstances, the communities and families work together in the scenes from both pieces; however, this joining together accomplishes two very different objectives."
- The two communities come together to fight back against an oppressive government.
- They use quotes and references from the text to support their thesis.

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-The actions of the main character, Katniss Everdeen, serves to demonstrate the type of familial affection that is not present in "The Lottery."
-The main point of the paragraph is to demonstrate the communal and familial affections between the characters in The Hunger Games.
-The textual evidence used to explain the point is by explaining moments in the story where characters unite through either hand-holding, signals, or personal sacrifice.

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-Topic sentence- "The action of Katniss and her neighbors show that Collins brings in an element of personal affection amongst families and community members that is not portrayed in Jackson's short story."
Main point- To bring up another point on how "The Hunger Games" has personal affection between families and community members and that Jackson's short story does not have this.
- Quotes were used to show the personal affection between families and community members. This related to the thesis by stating the different between families and communities in both stories.

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- The conclusion recaps all the main points in each of the body paragraphs and shows how they fit together. It gives an example of how both stories tell of community members killing the ones their closest to.
- The conclusion does not just repeat but it does restate the main points included in the paper. It offers an interpretation for all the information included.

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- The actions of Katniss and her neighbors show that Collins brings in an element of personal affection amongst families and community members that is not portrayed in Jackson's short story at all.
- Show the communal and family connection in The Hunger Games
-Shows the gestures the family and community takes towards Katniss

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Topic Sentence: The actions of Katniss and her neighbors show that Collins rings in an element of personal affection amongst families and community members that is not portrayed in Jackson's short story at all
Main Point: The Hunger Games had a very strong importance in family relationships and affectionate behavior that was missing in the Lottery
Textual Evidence: The quote in the Hunger Games that states "Family member line up around the perimeter, holding tightly to one another's hands"

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-"As illustrated in these circumstances, the  communities and families work together in the scenes from both pieces;however, this joining together accomplishes two very different objectives.
-The two stories both communities are banding together for a common goal but in "The Lottery" they are working to continue a violent tradition and in "The Hunger Games" the community unifies to try and start a rebellion.
-A quote from Yarmove who wrote about "The Lottery" is used to show that the society in this story has been moved to the brink of paganism and it is the work of their goverment

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-"the differences in the nature of who controls and enforces the lotteries in the short story and the novel as well as in communal sentiment contribute to the possibility of rebellion in both stories."
- there are rebellions against the ceremony.
-the evidence supports that the government is powerful but the there are rebellions.

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- The differences in the nature of who controls and enforces the lotteries in the short story and the novel as well as in communal sentiment contribute to the possibility of rebellion in both stories.
- Why the keep doing their versions of the lottery and how they rebel
- Shows how some people in "The Lottery" quit and in The Hunger Games how they stood up against the District.

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Topic Sentence: The differences in the nature of who controls and enforces the lotteries in the short story and the novel as well as in communal sentiment contribute to the possibility of rebellion in both stories.
Main Point: In the lottery the murders are carried out by the other members of the village, and some community had abandoned the practice all together. However in the Hunger Games, the institution was enforced by the dictatorship like government and if you tried to rebel your district was extinguished and you were no longer citizens.
Textual Evidence: In Jackson work the individuals are not controlled by any factor, just following the traditions of the old-fashioned, rural American town, which is why it is so hard to break. While in the Hunger Games, "It is the Capitol's advantage to have us divided among ourselves" and this causes the rebellious behavior that is lacking in the Lottery.

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-The actions of Katniss and her neighbors show that Collins brings in an element of personal affection amongst families and community members that is not portrayed in Jackson's short story at all.
-The main point of this paragraph is to show the relationships of the characters and their families and the communities of the districts.
-The quotes used explain how the people showed respect to Katniss after she was was chosen. It also includes the actions of the community to show unity during this time, such as hand-holding and saying "good-byes to someone you love'.

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-The differences in the nature of who controls and enforces the lotteries in the short story and the novel as well as in communal sentiment contribute to the possibility of rebellion in both stories.
-The difference in the stories is that the village in "The Lottery" enforces this tradition of an execution while in the "Hunger Games" the government is all powerful force.
-The quotes from this paragraph explain how the leaders of the village and the government of the districts could make all the decisions with little to no consequences.

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-The conclusion restates the thesis and emphasizes the strong bonds in the community in "The Hunger Games" but not in "The Lottery," making it possible for hope in a damaged society.
-The conclusion repeats but adds a new element. In both stories, the one who is often chosen in their respective lottery is usually killed at the hands of people closest to her. The difference is that those in the Hunger Games understand and recognize what is wrong with this way of living and it "provides hope for breaking the cycle" of this injustice.

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- The conclusion summarizes what has been told in the essay.
- Some new textual evidence is used but the argument the evidence supports is presented throughout the essay and is not a new idea.

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- That the two stories can be compared but also how they are different. Then goes into community and family.
- It gives new information about how both communities fall apart

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-The conclusion shows a summary of their paper and idea but also shows how the hunger games series is very similar to "The Lottery".
-It is a repeat at first then they show how the hunger games series is like "The Lottery" because in the final book Gale kills Prim just as in the other story the person who is called on is killed in the end by the people who are closest to her

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-The information presented in the conclusion is how the two works are both similar and vastly different. The conclusion lays out how the two are different and similar in the underlying meaning of each story.
-The conclusion doesn't really repeat it starts off explaining how the two are different and then it states how they are similar as well.