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yo le doy un 2 , porque no es especifico .

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i would give it a 3 because it does not explain

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Nasir
Nasir 
I would give this Argument a 7/8 because the claim isnt clearly stated and the end buut the 
Jamiya
Jamiya
i would give her a 8/8 because she gave logical details about the  question she ain´t just state 
Daquan(▀̿̿Ĺ̯̿̿▀̿ ̿)
Daquan(▀̿̿Ĺ̯̿̿▀̿ ̿)
i would give this a 3 because it does not explain

Alexandra
Alexandra
I would give this response a 
ill give the respond
 ill give the respond a 4 because it explains the evidence and it gives details and it gives facts 
JEREMIAH
JEREMIAH
i would give this response a 4 because it gives great evidence and he or she anlaysis the quote 
i would give a 8/8 because a have sum good staff and all the is corret
i would give a 8/8 because a have sum good staff and all the is corret 
iyanna
iyanna
i gave the person a 6 because they gave specific details and also they did a good job but didnt explain if it was a what when or where or why

I would give this response a 3 because
I would give this response a 3 because
Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others.
Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others.
Jovanni
Jovanni
I would give this response a 3 or 4 because is telling us  allot of info and 
Aniya
Aniya
I would give this response a 8/8 because they explain how their evidence supports their ideas and they go back to quotes to get their point across. and they develop their thoughts and claim on Lyddie signing the petition .
 
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Guadalupe
Guadalupe
I would give this respond a 4 because it does explain the evidence that supports the text evidence and I think this looks specific to me 
Ivan
Ivan
I would give this response a 3 because it explains relevant facts and has quotation marks.
Iyanna
Iyanna
Isidro
Isidro
I would give this response  a 3 because its really good and gives good evidence but not that skillful.
Edwin
Edwin
I would give this response a 2 because it 
I would give this re
 I would give this response a 3 because it supports her claim and it ex
i would give his response an a
i would give his response an a
Carlos
Carlos
I would give this response a 8 because 
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I would give this response a 4 because it supports her claim and it explains her evidence.
I would give this response a 4 because it supports her claim and it explains her evidence.
Brandon l would give this response a 4 because it does explain good and good
Brandon l would give this response a 4 because it does explain good and good 
i would give this re
 i would give this response a 2 because it dose not explain some stuff.
what
what
Jacob
Jacob
I Would give this evidence a 3 because it does not explain why she should or should not sign the petition.

lord
 lord

Vanessa
Vanessa
I would give this response a 3 because even though the evidence is relevant and everything is explained, it doesn't show that Lyddie is considering to sign the petition to improve the mill conditions, she is wanting to do it for her friends but not to change the conditions of the factory.
Moreno
Moreno
I would give this response a ___ because....
Directions: Read my Evidence and my analysis. Provide specific feedback using the rubric AND provide a final score.
Directions: Read my Evidence and my analysis. Provide specific feedback using the rubric AND provide a final score. 
My Evidence: "She’ll never be strong enough again to work in a mill thirteen, fourteen hours a day. When I’m ready to go myself, she thought, maybe I could sign that cussed petition. Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others. It ain’t right for this place to suck the strength of their youth, then cast them off like dry husks to the wind.” (113)
My Evidence: "She’ll never be strong enough again to work in a mill thirteen, fourteen hours a day. When I’m ready to go myself, she thought, maybe I could sign that cussed petition. Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others. It ain’t right for this place to suck the strength of their youth, then cast them off like dry husks to the wind.” (113)
 My Analysis: The above quote shows Lyddie's willingness to sign the petition that would hopefully lead to an improvement in the working conditions at the mill factory. When she stated that "it ain't right for this place to suck the strength of their youth," she is suggesting that the Mill is depleting women's energy. That is a caused by the unsafe working conditions due to the polluted air. Also, Lyddie continues to state that the mill "cast them off like dry husks to the wind," and she is referring to the fact that women are preceived as replaceable at the mill. This shows that women's job at the factory is not secured and that can they be released or fired at anytime. For this reason and others, Lyddie is beginning to consider signing the petition as a way to aid in improving the mill conditions for other workers, like Betsy. 
Ignacio
Ignacio
I would give this evidence a 
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Nasir
Nasir 
I would give this Argument a 7/8 because the claim isnt clearly stated and the end buut the 
Jamiya
Jamiya
i would give her a 8/8 because she gave logical details about the  question she ain´t just state the question she g
Daquan(▀̿̿Ĺ̯̿̿▀̿ ̿)
Daquan(▀̿̿Ĺ̯̿̿▀̿ ̿)
i would give this a 3 because it does not explain

Alexandra
Alexandra
I would give this response a 3
ill give the respond
 ill give the respond a 4 because it explains the evidence and it gives details and it gives facts 
JEREMIAH
JEREMIAH
i would give this response a 4 because it gives great evidence and he or she anlaysis the quote 
i would give a 8/8 because a have sum good staff and all the is correct
i would give a 8/8 because a have sum good staff and all the is correct 
iyanna
iyanna
i gave the person a 6 because they gave specific details and also they did a good job but didnt explain if it was a what when or where or why

I would give this response a 3 because
I would give this response a 3 because
Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others.
Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others.
Jovanni
Jovanni
I would give this response a 3 or 4 because is telling us  allot of info and 
Aniya
Aniya
I would give this response a 8/8 because they explain how their evidence supports their ideas and they go back to quotes to get their point across. they develop their thoughts and claim on Lyddie signing the petition .
 
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Guadalupe
Guadalupe
I would give this respond a 4 because it does explain the evidence that supports the text evidence and I think this looks specific to me 
Ivan
Ivan
I would give this response a 3 because it explains relevant facts and has quotation marks.
Iyanna
Iyanna
Isidro
Isidro
I would give this response  a 3 because its really good and gives good evidence but not that skillful.
Edwin
Edwin
I would give this response a 2 because it 
I would give this re
 I would give this response a 3 because it supports her claim and it expla
i would give his response an a
i would give his response an a
Carlos
Carlos
I would give this response a 8 because 
i would give this re
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I would give this response a 4 because it supports her claim and it explains her evidence.
I would give this response a 4 because it supports her claim and it explains her evidence.
Brandon l would give this response a 4 because it does explain good and good
Brandon l would give this response a 4 because it does explain good and good 
i would give this re
 i would give this response a 2 because it dose not explain some stuff.
what
what
Jacob
Jacob
I Would give this evidence a 3 because it does not explain why she should or should not sign the petition.

lord
 lord

Vanessa
Vanessa
I would give this response a 3 because even though the evidence is relevant and everything is explained, it doesn't show that Lyddie is considering to sign the petition to improve the mill conditions, she is wanting to do it for her friends but not to change the conditions of the factory.
Moreno
Moreno
I would give this response a ___ because....
Directions: Read my Evidence and my analysis. Provide specific feedback using the rubric AND provide a final score.
Directions: Read my Evidence and my analysis. Provide specific feedback using the rubric AND provide a final score. 
My Evidence: "She’ll never be strong enough again to work in a mill thirteen, fourteen hours a day. When I’m ready to go myself, she thought, maybe I could sign that cussed petition. Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others. It ain’t right for this place to suck the strength of their youth, then cast them off like dry husks to the wind.” (113)
My Evidence: "She’ll never be strong enough again to work in a mill thirteen, fourteen hours a day. When I’m ready to go myself, she thought, maybe I could sign that cussed petition. Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others. It ain’t right for this place to suck the strength of their youth, then cast them off like dry husks to the wind.” (113)
 My Analysis: The above quote shows Lyddie's willingness to sign the petition that would hopefully lead to an improvement in the working conditions at the mill factory. When she stated that "it ain't right for this place to suck the strength of their youth," she is suggesting that the Mill is depleting women's energy. That is a caused by the unsafe working conditions due to the polluted air. Also, Lyddie continues to state that the mill "cast them off like dry husks to the wind," and she is referring to the fact that women are preceived as replaceable at the mill. This shows that women's job at the factory is not secured and that can they be released or fired at anytime. For this reason and others, Lyddie is beginning to consider signing the petition as a way to aid in improving the mill conditions for other workers, like Betsy. 
Ignacio
Ignacio
I would give this evidence a 
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Nasir
Nasir 
I would give this Argument a 7/8 because the claim isnt clearly stated and the end buut the 
Jamiya
Jamiya
i would give her a 8/8 because she gave logical details about the  question she ain´t just state 
Daquan(▀̿̿Ĺ̯̿̿▀̿ ̿)
Daquan(▀̿̿Ĺ̯̿̿▀̿ ̿)
i would give this a 3 because it does not explain

Alexandra
Alexandra
I would give this response a 
ill give the respond
 ill give the respond a 4 because it explains the evidence and it gives details and it gives facts 
JEREMIAH
JEREMIAH
i would give this response a 4 because it gives great evidence and he or she anlaysis the quote 
i would give a 8/8 because a have sum good staff and all the is corret
i would give a 8/8 because a have sum good staff and all the is corret 
iyanna
iyanna
i gave the person a 6 because they gave specific details and also they did a good job but didnt explain if it was a what when or where or why

I would give this response a 3 because
I would give this response a 3 because
Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others.
Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others.
Jovanni
Jovanni
I would give this response a 3 or 4 because is telling us  allot of info and 
Aniya
Aniya
I would give this response a 8/8 because they explain how their evidence supports their ideas and they go back to quotes to get their point across. and they develop their thoughts and claim on Lyddie signing the petition .
 
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Guadalupe
Guadalupe
I would give this respond a 4 because it does explain the evidence that supports the text evidence and I think this looks specific to me 
Ivan
Ivan
I would give this response a 3 because it explains relevant facts and has quotation marks.
Iyanna
Iyanna
Isidro
Isidro
I would give this response  a 3 because its really good and gives good evidence but not that skillful.
Edwin
Edwin
I would give this response a 2 because it 
I would give this re
 I would give this response a 3 because it supports her claim and it ex
i would give his response an a
i would give his response an a
Carlos
Carlos
I would give this response a 8 because 
i would give this re
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I would give this response a 4 because it supports her claim and it explains her evidence.
I would give this response a 4 because it supports her claim and it explains her evidence.
Brandon l would give this response a 4 because it does explain good and good
Brandon l would give this response a 4 because it does explain good and good 
i would give this re
 i would give this response a 2 because it dose not explain some stuff.
what
what
Jacob
Jacob
I Would give this evidence a 3 because it does not explain why she should or should not sign the petition.

lord
 lord

Vanessa
Vanessa
I would give this response a 3 because even though the evidence is relevant and everything is explained, it doesn't show that Lyddie is considering to sign the petition to improve the mill conditions, she is wanting to do it for her friends but not to change the conditions of the factory.
Moreno
Moreno
I would give this response a ___ because....
Directions: Read my Evidence and my analysis. Provide specific feedback using the rubric AND provide a final score.
Directions: Read my Evidence and my analysis. Provide specific feedback using the rubric AND provide a final score. 
My Evidence: "She’ll never be strong enough again to work in a mill thirteen, fourteen hours a day. When I’m ready to go myself, she thought, maybe I could sign that cussed petition. Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others. It ain’t right for this place to suck the strength of their youth, then cast them off like dry husks to the wind.” (113)
My Evidence: "She’ll never be strong enough again to work in a mill thirteen, fourteen hours a day. When I’m ready to go myself, she thought, maybe I could sign that cussed petition. Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others. It ain’t right for this place to suck the strength of their youth, then cast them off like dry husks to the wind.” (113)
 My Analysis: The above quote shows Lyddie's willingness to sign the petition that would hopefully lead to an improvement in the working conditions at the mill factory. When she stated that "it ain't right for this place to suck the strength of their youth," she is suggesting that the Mill is depleting women's energy. That is a caused by the unsafe working conditions due to the polluted air. Also, Lyddie continues to state that the mill "cast them off like dry husks to the wind," and she is referring to the fact that women are preceived as replaceable at the mill. This shows that women's job at the factory is not secured and that can they be released or fired at anytime. For this reason and others, Lyddie is beginning to consider signing the petition as a way to aid in improving the mill conditions for other workers, like Betsy. 
Ignacio
Ignacio
I would give this evidence a 
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i would give his response an 4 because he supports his evidence ideas well chosen facts

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i would give his response an 4 because he supports his evidence ideas well chosen facts

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I would give this Argument a 7/8 because the claim isn't clearly stated and the end but the evidence is cited right from the text and is clearly explained.Also the examples are clear

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i would give her a 8/8 because she gave logical details about the question she ain´t just state the question she gave more than details she gave the caused and what happened and how it happened.

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I would give this response a 3 because it explains why

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ill give the respond a 4 because it explains the evidence and it gives details and it gives facts

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i would give this response a 4 because it gives great evidence and he or she anlaysis the quote

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i would give a 8/8 because a have sum good staff and all the is correct 

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i would give a 8/8 because a have sum good staff and all the is correct 

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i gave the person a 6 because they gave specific details and also they did a good job but didnt explain if it was a what when or where or why

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it kind off explains the evidence amd dosen't really support the details. BRENDA

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Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others.

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Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others.

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I would give this response a 3 or 4 because is telling us allot of info and

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I would give this response a 8/8 because they explain how their evidence supports their ideas and they go back to quotes to get their point across. They also develop their thoughts and claim on Lyddie signing the petition .

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I would give this respond a 4 because it does explain the evidence that supports the text evidence and I think this looks specific to me and it does explains why Lyddie should or should not sign the petition.

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I would give this response a 3 because it explains relevant facts and has quotation marks.

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I would give this response a 3 because its really good and gives good evidence but not that skillful.

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I would give this response a 2 because it

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I would give this response a 3 because it supports her claim and it explains her evidence but it could be better.

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I would give this response a 8 because

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i would give this respond

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I would give this response a 3 because forgot who the quote belonged to 

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I would give this response a 3 because forgot who the quote belonged to 

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Brandon l would give this response a 4 because it does explain good and good evidence and why she should sigh the contract like what happens in the factory not being able to 

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Brandon l would give this response a 4 because it does explain good and good evidence and why she should sigh the contract like what happens in the factory not being able to 

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i would give this response a 2 because it dose not explain some stuff.

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I Would give this evidence a 3 because it does not explain why she should or should not sign the petition.

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I would give this response a 3 because even though the evidence is relevant and everything is explained, it doesn't show that Lyddie is considering to sign the petition to improve the mill conditions, she is wanting to do it for her friends but not to change the conditions of the factory.

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I would give this response a ___ because....

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Directions: Read my Evidence and my analysis. Provide specific feedback using the rubric AND provide a final score. 

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Directions: Read my Evidence and my analysis. Provide specific feedback using the rubric AND provide a final score. 

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My Evidence: "She’ll never be strong enough again to work in a mill thirteen, fourteen hours a day. When I’m ready to go myself, she thought, maybe I could sign that cussed petition. Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others. It ain’t right for this place to suck the strength of their youth, then cast them off like dry husks to the wind.” (113)

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My Evidence: "She’ll never be strong enough again to work in a mill thirteen, fourteen hours a day. When I’m ready to go myself, she thought, maybe I could sign that cussed petition. Not for me. I don’t need it, but for Betsy and the others. It ain’t right for this place to suck the strength of their youth, then cast them off like dry husks to the wind.” (113)

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My Analysis: The above quote shows Lyddie's willingness to sign the petition that would hopefully lead to an improvement in the working conditions at the mill factory. When she stated that "it ain't right for this place to suck the strength of their youth," she is suggesting that the Mill is depleting women's energy. That is a caused by the unsafe working conditions due to the polluted air. Also, Lyddie continues to state that the mill "cast them off like dry husks to the wind," and she is referring to the fact that women are preceived as replaceable at the mill. This shows that women's job at the factory is not secured and that can they be released or fired at anytime. For this reason and others, Lyddie is beginning to consider signing the petition as a way to aid in improving the mill conditions for other workers, like Betsy.

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I would give this evidence a 3/4 because it really doesn't explain alot