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Very graphic and heart breaking, had me having second thoughts on certain things

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it was funny

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This narrative was really emotional. I could feel what the person felt by the way it was described.

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It was emotional made me want to cry.

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it was funny

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The title really caught my eye, and as I was reading it I felt like I could really relate to it.

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The theme of the story trapped my attention and made me want to finish the story even beyond.

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This essay really caught my eye,  the way the author described the setting and the actions that had happened. It gave us great detail and information about the topic. You can actually see the image and visualize it in your mind, the way the emotions and words came together

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This essay had very good monologue and I could feel what the writer was explaining

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This narrative was really realistic and full of details. It was a funny and interesting story.

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It caught my attention in the beginning. It made me want to read more.

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11,12, and 24 are written so good. They all end with a big emotional hit at the end. Pretty good development and structure.

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it was cool

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It was a very good essay. It caught my attention. They way how it expresses that the person isn't going to give up

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I liked the way it was written, caught my attention.

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it really caught my attention and i wanted to keep reading

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Its very realistic. It sounds just like me. Oh wait it is me :|

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It was emotional. It really caught my attention

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The essay was very descriptive and emotional. I liked it because it's a topic you can relate to.

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it really caught my attention how he really expressed his emotion.

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#13 caught my attention because it seems realistic

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it's captivating and descriptive

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Its title caught my attention immediately and I liked the way he described how they handled it

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I liked the story because in the beginning it caught my attention and was very entertaining

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Grabs my attention a lot

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The story was good. The dialogue was good and very realistic. It caught my attention

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It really got me thinking and it described how they felt

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I really enjoyed it, It had great descriptions

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19 was honestly the most interesting. It grabbed my attention drawled me in and kept me reading for more. The word choice and they way it tells the story is great. One of the best!

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Very descriptive and grabs my attention

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Could not stop reading. Kept getting more interesting

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12. It was very personal and descriptive. Also grabbed my attention.

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flows very smoothly almost like a soft blanket but there's rough part ....other than that its good

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22. I liked the introduction

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I enjoyed the conflict within the story

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i love the hook it really hooked me and kept up with my intrest level

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It has good detail and dialogue

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sounds realistic
makes you feel what the writer felt

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The intro started off good and made me wanting to know more

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Unique
Grabs your attention and you understand what this person is going through

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9

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7. Seven had good introduction. Each paragraph made me want to keep on reading

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Very descriptive
gets my attention

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Number nine was the essay that interested me the most because I liked the language used

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Very interesting

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kept me wanting to know more

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this story was very interesting to me, caught my intention

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The story kept me on wanted to keep on reading. The story felt very realistic.

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It kept me interested

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well done
grabbed my attention the most

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The introduction was good it caught my attention the story was very inspirational and motivational.

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i enjoy the fact that it started with a sentence it made you think like right in the beginning that helps the feel of the sentence

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very captivating
good details

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The intro was very good and the story was sad

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27
It had a good hook good dialogue and it got my attention right away.

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The introduction grabs attention of the readers this story has many vivid details.

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i like the fact that it includes feelings while this is occurring.