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After that, we saw a very beautiful scenery. We also saw that there were many people who were relaxing with their families and spouses. I also find a suitable places to we put our stuff and rest together. The suitable place is under a tree. Then, we unpacked our things. Hanna felt impatient then she jumped and swimming in the river. We also took the picture and ate some food.

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After lunch I changed clothes and packed things in the van.I and my family members cleaned our place.My father drove us went home.

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Here is one of beautiful scenery.Many people find suitable place under a tree.Then I unpacked our things.I jumped onto river and swimming around two hours.Then I and my family members taking pictures and ate some food.

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Last month ,I and my family went to the Desaru waterfall. We went by car three hour for the to arrived to the Desaru waterfall.

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One day,my family and I went to desaru waterfall.we went by van .we arrived in three hours.

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Last school holiday,I and my family members went to Desaru Waterfall.We started our journey in the morning by van.We arrived at Desaru Waterfall after three hours.

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Last month , my family and I went to Desaru Waterfall. We went to there by van that my father booked. This trip had takes three hours . Soon, we arrived at that place.
As soon we arrived, my family and I looked that scenery was so beautiful. There also have many people at this destination. Then, we find some suitable place for spend it. We saw a suitable place under a tree. After that we unpacked our things .After a minute ,my  siblings and I jumped into the river as we excited. We enjoyed this moment by swimming, taking pictures and we are also ate some delicious food.
Lastly, we  changed our clothes and packed our things that we brought here. Before leaving we cleaned our place and we went home. This moment was so adorable to our family

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Last week, Hanna went to Desary Waterfall with her family members. They used a van to get there. They took 3 hours to reach the waterfall. After 3 hours, they arrived at their destination.

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One day, my sister and I went to Desaru Beach Resort. We went there by car. Soon, we arrived at our destination safely.

After that, we looked for a good spot to rest. Then, we unpacked our things and did some activities such as swimming, playing beach volleyball and taking pictures.

Later, we packed our things because the watch showed it was already 5 pm. We must arrive home before 7 pm because we promised our parents to be back home at 7 pm. In the end, we arrived home safely.

Class, this is an example of a fictional narrative. You can use it as a reference to make your own essay. BEST OF LUCK!

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One day,I and my family went to the beach by car.one hour for us to arrived to the beach.

After one hour,I and my family arrived at the beach.i and my family saw lot of people on the beach.Than,my father unpacked our things at car.After unpacked our things,I and my brother swimming at the beach and build sandcastle together.

Finally,I and my family changed clothes.After than,I and my family packed our things. Im so happy and tired because swimming at the beach. I hope I can go to the beach again.

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Last Year, my family and I went to Paradigm shopping Mall by car
This place suitable for family with children to spend their time. At there, we could see dining places and a modern supermarket. Other than that, in this shopping Mall we also have a fun activities that we could enjoyed like Blue Ice Skating Rink, Kidzoona, Cinema teater for watching movie and many more .There are also two big stores where we could  get many item  in our home. The cinema teater is the best and the seats are comfortable.
I think it was a fantastic places that we can enjoyed with our family.

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Last year,I and my family went to Sunway lagoon by car.l and my family want to play water park.before play my father buy ticket for enter the water park.after buy the tickets l and my family play together and take pictures for memories.My favourite theme park is wild life.I and my family can feel the experience of living In the stone age.after than,I and my family very satisfied and tired we back home tomorrow.

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Adam Harris

Last year, I and my family went to the Legoland by car.
I and my family want to play roller coaster.Before play roller coaster my father buy tickets.After buy tickets,I and my family play roller coaster.After play roller coaster,I and my family could also take pictures with Lego character.After take pictures,I and my family play other game at Legoland.

My favorite game at Legoland is Ninjago rider.I and my family be ninja and fight enemy together.im so happy with my family.After than,I see someone throw rubbish at legoland.i not like him.After than,I and my family went to the home tired play at Legoland.

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General Information about the place (place, time, with who)

Paragraph 2
Tell about what you can do there ( At there, we could see; we could play; we could buy; we could swim; we could feel;)

Paragraph 3
What you like and don't like about the place.

No. of words ( 60 - 80 words)
Must have :
- also and too
- Past tense
- could/couldn't