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Girl I totally agree with you because I usually don't get to be with my mom because she has a lot of field trips and she has a lot of grading to do at school.And like you said I eat at 7:30 and I sometimes eat at 9:00 or 8:00 or 7:00 and that I still have to do ether things and that I sometimes get to bed at 10:00
From your friend Mrs.Martin

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I like your essay, and we don't get to bond with our family's, but not all kids hate school. For example, I really love school. And if you didn't have school, you could not make new friends. And it is also the law that kids have some sort of schooling.

Your friend, Kloey

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I agree because we all do not get to spend much time with our familys and I love your story

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I loved your story but there were a lot of errors and that made it hard to under stand and I think that you could have added a little more but I do agree that  we should pick to go to school  because we could have some thing going to during school hours we could not go but if we could we would not have to worry at all and we could come back to school the next day I think this the best reason!!!!!!!!!!

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I agree with the part that you said you needed to bond with your parents more because I think a lot of kids need to. When you said that you wanted to spend more time with friend I agree because in school you because in school you can barley hang out with friends you only can hang out with them at lunch, recess and that is not a lot of time and I always need more sleep because I have dinner late too Tuesday we didn't go to bed tell past 9:00

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you kinda messed up on something but overall I think it was pretty good!

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This was a very good story. What kind of candy did your mom and dad get

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I love how you wanted candy how old were you?I love how you descrive it well.

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I like a lot how you used a story from when you were a kid it was funny that you grabbed every thing off the shelf and kept on saying that you wanted candy and you woke up yelling for no reason I really like how you expressed your story good job.

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you were mad because you did not get any candy.

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great story i bet you were adorable when you were a baby.

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This story is great I think you did great in sensory details like when you ate the banana baby food

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Great story!!!! I like how you grabbed everything of the self.I have never had banana baby food but I guess to you it was good.I hope you keep writing funny storys. Bye Bey.