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Nevaeh lopez- frist draft-The time almost drowned 

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Nevaeh lopez- frist draft-The time almost drowned 

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One time i was at my uncle house i was  with my mom and dad and grandpa and grandma. We were in the pool it was a hot day my uncle and grandpa were making hot dogs we were all in the pool. I was like 5 years old when we were swimming we go out. Because we were going to eat hot dogs everbody was eating i was down.So i got out of the chair i went by the pool my mom ask my dad were was i he side i don't know so my got out of her chair and saw me by the pool. I fell in the pool my mom yelled. My uncle jumped in the pool and got me. the the time drowned.

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One day when I was 4 I was playing with my LEGO'S and I wanted build a vehicle out of them, So I tried building a car but I was placing the LEGO'S everywhere and I didn't know where exactly put them so I placed the black LEGO'S as the wheels then they all fell as if they were loose. So then I tried to build them one last time, and they stuck. Then I built the back lights, then I tried the windows but I didn't have the right parts so then I was using grey LEGO'S. Once I was done with the windows I going to build the rest of the car, but the shape was hard to make so I couldn't build a car.

I tried building another car but smaller so the shape is easier. My

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Isabella Gutierrez-first draft-The time i almost drowned

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Isabella Gutierrez-first draft-The time i almost drowned

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One time I went to the pool with my family Iwas suppost to stay on the short sid i would not drown(this was yearrrrrss ago.)I tried jumping in the pool and i was at the deep end and i was drowning i was holding my hand up so someone could help me at least luckly my tio's girlfriend caught me.

That was one of the most terrifiing moments of my life.I am so lucky that she caught me. If she have not caught me i would be in danger.Till this day i am so greatfull😄😃.

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Lya Smith the day I almost drowned/ WORST DAY OF MY LIFE! :(

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Lya Smith the day I almost drowned/ WORST DAY OF MY LIFE! :(

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It was a normal day at my Tia's house as usual having a party. we were having so much fun my family made super yummy food. I think my Tio was making carne asada. And it was just super fun than a bit after that my sisters got in the pool. And were having a lot of fun. I wasn't in the pool because I didn't know how to swim and they didn't have a floaty for me. Plus I was very little So I could not get in but I was still having fun I was playing with my little cousin.

I was wearing one of my favorite dresses it was a Minnie Mouse one I adored it. I didn't have any extra clothes we just had my sister's towels. I didn't think I would ever fall in the pool we would always go over there and I would always run around.
after a little bit, my sisters got out of the pool. And we all started to eat because we were hungry. then after we ate my sisters were waiting a little bit before getting back in the pool. Cause they just ate then I went inside to play with my little cousin. We were playing with all the toys we were having lots of fun playing.

When we went outside to play we were running and then all of a sudden I remember I slipped and I fell into the pool and I remember that a lot of water got in my nose and it burned. And I did not know how to swim so I couldn't get to the top or anything I was sinking to the bottom! I thought I was going to die. But then my sisters went to go get me out of the pool I think even my mom and dad got in the pool to come to save me. After that, I don't remember any of the rest of what happened.

To this day I am scared to run around the pool, but at least I know how to swim but I am still scared. I never want that to happen again in my whole life!

Not that long ago it was my cousin's birthday we went to my Tia's house to celebrate. After she blew out the candles we were eating cake. And we were outside eating the cake and my little nephew got super close to the pool. and he was right next to me he was about to fall in he had one foot over the pool and one foot on the ground. And was nearly about to fall when I saw him I quickly grabbed him by the arm. And I saved him from drowning because he doesn't know how to swim either he was just 3. years old after that he hugged me and said thank you.

I am still scared of swimming I am always being very careful. I was just three and I was so scared that I was going to die. And I now there's baby's that now how to swim at like 1 years old, but my mom was to scared to let me swim at that age.

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one time I was lost in the store and I was so scared that I was going to get kidnap and someone came behind me I got so scared an ran as fast as I could I ran the worker and asked  if he could help me find my mom he did and after that I made sure I look behind me after putting a chart back.

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one time I was lost in the store and I was so scared that I was going to get kidnap and someone came behind me I got so scared an ran as fast as I could I ran the worker and asked  if he could help me find my mom he did and after that I made sure I look behind me after putting a chart back.

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One time I was at the pool with my cousins and we always throw each other in the pool. My older cousins had threw me into the deeper part of the pool and I thought I cold swim back up but it was hard to. But my 

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Everyday when I go in my sisters room we start too fight. Its either me starting it or the her sta

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the time i got stuck out  of my home  me and my brother and  cusin were walking home after  school and i did not a key so we got home and i told my brother to open the door but he said he did not have is key so live by a park so we went to the park and waited for my other brother to come home and we did not want to play at the park no more so we went home and whited for my brother to come home it fill 2 hours and we saw his bus coming to are home so we excited because we thought he has going to come but the was going away so happiness went away because it was not he stayed after school for basket ball and we all said wow but in a mad way so a 1 hours and we saw a bus so we got excited and it has him OMG we got super excited we got all of are stuff and watched as he off the the bus and we hope he had his key and he so now we know not to leave my key at home. 

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the time i got stuck out  of my home  me and my brother and  cusin were walking home after  school and i did not a key so we got home and i told my brother to open the door but he said he did not have is key so live by a park so we went to the park and waited for my other brother to come home and we did not want to play at the park no more so we went home and whited for my brother to come home it fill 2 hours and we saw his bus coming to are home so we excited because we thought he has going to come but the was going away so happiness went away because it was not he stayed after school for basket ball and we all said wow but in a mad way so a 1 hours and we saw a bus so we got excited and it has him OMG we got super excited we got all of are stuff and watched as he off the the bus and we hope he had his key and he so now we know not to leave my key at home. 

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he never ever puts his hands on me or my sisters or my mom. We just let him have his moment. I had to fin

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Daniel:When i was 3 i got lost at sea world.

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Daniel:When i was 3 i got lost at sea world.

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Be for the day i went to go eat at dennys and then i took a shower                        I was 3 when this happened . I was at Sea World onalessa took me to go see the fish. but i let go of her hand i was happy that i saw the fish. Untill i let go of her hand.                                                                                                                                           I was scared .i saw ona but people got in my way.
When i was scared i thout i had anas phone. I stead of calling somone i played games. A stranger came up to me. My heart was skipping a heart beat. I was going to pea on my self.
My mom was there. My Dad, cousin, Ashley, and Ona my brother Donovin to they are a part of my family. so i wen't to go see the sharks. I was crying for help. Until finally they found me.
I wanted to beat my Ona up so i pulled her hair.My feelings.
When i was in sea world be for i got lost we wen't to go to feed the stingrays.Then we went to the bank because they only took cash.And then we went to go get my moms nails done.We went

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When I got stuck in the mud

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DamarrionHayes The time i got locked out the house.

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DamarrionHayes The time i got locked out the house.

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When i got locked out the house.The front door wasnt open so we went to the back door and it wasnt open either. Then we went to the front office to get a key but we were to young to get one.It was to hot outside so we to the gaming room but we could not play no games. when they got there we went to the beach and alot of fun.

- Where were you coming from?
- WHo were you with?
- WHat were your families reaction?
- How were you feeling? - showing
- Describe your house
- How did that day feel?
- How did you get back inside the house?
- Who came up with that soution?
- What were you doing inside gaming room?
- WHat did you learn from this?

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It all started one day in the morning,when my cousins came over to my house and we were talking about kid stuff.Then i had an idea to start a mini business called "DIGGERS INC."then my little sister came upstairs from eating breakfast and asked us what we were doing.I responded "NOTHING"i said very stubbornly,and told that to her in a stubborn way because we were in the middle of a meeting!

She asked my cousins if she could join the company after they told her all about it(the usual info).We all said yes and then we went to work in our backyard.We saw some pretty cool rocks and we put them  on the floor of the porch.After about 30 minutes or so we went inside to cool off -because we live in ARIZONA,IT WILL ALWAYS BE HOT HERE-.Next,we all marched up the stairs to our bedroom.We had to write about what type of rocks we saw and what they looked like.Well we didn't have to but i insisted we should've,and we did!

45 MINUTES LATER.....
We had nothing to do after our writing experience,and then we started to argue about having nothing to do.We threw pillows at each other,stomped our feet, tried to jump on each other with anger.One of my cousins jumped onto me and took me down! 20 minutes pass by and we are still raging.We didn't even talk or look at each other for 10-15 minutes.Right then and there i decide that we put our differences aside and come to a friendly agreement!I asked them who wanted to be the boss,then very unexpectedly they said my name,so that meant they wanted the oldest to be the boss.

I put us into 3 very responsible teams

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So one day I went hiking with my family and being the dumb kid I was I ran ahead and soon started hiking on my own. By the time I noticed they were gone I was already super high up in the mountains so I was a little scared being a kid. By the time they got close to the top i started to notice them trying to find me i tried yelling but not too loud because i was afraid of an avalanche happening.
But still i yelled too loud and rocks started falling from the corners and cracks it was also later in the afternoon so it was getting dark, I stared at my family trying to find me and told my self they probably didn't hear me yell
. My breath started shaking because of how high I was and the lack of oxygen it was about 5:49 when someone finally noticed me and screamed to everyone else, but it was too loud and the mountain started making noises and more rocks stated falling. But the rocks were bigger and banged against the mountain making more of them fall. Soon enough gigantic boulders were rushing down the mountain like cars on a highway.
I was scared for my family so I slowly climbed down and started walking to them when suddenly,I heard a voice "WATCH OUT" I looked over to my side to see a small but still kinda big boulder coming right at me and I didn't have sharp reflexes back then so it hit most of my upper body including my face.
I wasn't knocked out but i was still dizzy from the impact and another one came pushing my legs off of the mountain and i fell but my hand somehow caught the edge of the mountain.I was scared but not really because of the giant rock that hit me earlier and I started to slip because the rocks and boulder banging on the mountain making it shake.
Then the boulders stopped and I saw a blurry figure reaching their hand out to  me and I didn't have any other choice because i was about to fall off a mountain that's 200+ feet in the air so I took their hand and they pulled me up suddenly i came to my senses and asked what happened because I couldn't remember.
They told me the whole story and how I "saved" them by moving them out the way That part I don't remember but the I looked back at the guy who pulled me up, he looked like someone i knew but I don't really know.
After that we got home and I flopped onto the couch exhausted of the event's that happened that day then I fell asleep and acted like that never even happened.

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When i lost my ps4 by my cousin and he took all of my stuff and sold it and i was so mad and my heart was beeing so hard and

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DamarrionHayes    The time i got locked out the house.

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DamarrionHayes    The time i got locked out the house.

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When i was like 3 i was lost at sea world

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Anahi - The time I stopped thinking bout myself and about my dad.

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Anahi - The time I stopped thinking bout myself and about my dad.

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It was a regular day and me and my sisters were riding our bike. We went around our house all around our house outside with my parents it was night, We were not paying attention to what was underneath us and what we didn't realize was there was a giant lump in front of us. Then something happened there was a big lump I went around it but, my sister April rode over it and she was going fast and slow. She fell on the street or road. My dad gets scared when we hurt ourselves, but his scared it makes him look like he is mad so we usually try to stay away from him when he is "scared". April scraped almost all of her left cheek. She started crying , she was so hurt she couldn't stop crying, but her crying sounds like she is laughing. I kinda thought it was funny so I started laughing, but after my mom helped her up i figured out she was really crying.

My dad got so mad that he threw her bike in the trash. My dad usually gets really mad, but I had never seen him this mad. He never ever puts his hands on me or my sisters or my mom. We just let him have his moment. My heart was racing, my body was shaking I was so scared I was afraid that he would take his anger out on someone else and he would go to jail all because my sister fell off her bike. I had to find a way to get away from my dad. I usually don't want to get involved in his drama. I looked around as I was looking my heart was still racing.

I had to find things that can help me to get away. I  looked around and this time now that i'm looking for things to help me  I found a lot of things. I could hear my dads yelling from a long distance, I felt bad for my neighbors because they were trying to sleep and I bet all they could hear is my dads yelling. I was scared for what was going on over there. My dad does get really mad but he would never put his hands on me, my sisters. or my mom.

I had to find something creative so I can try too sneak away from the anger he had inside him. Once I saw how mad he was I forgot all about trying to get away and instead of using my creative idea for getting away, I thought maybe I can use my creative idea to find a way to calm my dad down. Right after I though that my body started to slow down the shaking, my heart was still racing but slow.  Then I started looking around and While I was looking around my body started to slow down everything. My heart rate went  back to it's regular heart rate.

Right that second I saw something that might calm my dad down. I went over to go grab it. When I went back and showed my dad he didn't calm down. He did but only a little bit. So I tried to get my mom to give my dad a hug and luckily it worked. My creative idea was "what if my dad can calm down if he is with someone he loves" and it turns out I was right. He was still a little mad but he got over. He even pulled Aprils bike out the trash. I was so happy to see him happy. So now every time he gets mad or scared I try to get my mom to try to calm him down. It still works, she calms her down.

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One day my mom took me and my best friends to this really nice hotel. It was pretty big too, I was really excited because it had a pool. Me and my friends were going to go to the pool because that's what we were planning on going at. We changed and then we had went to the pool. Soon as we stepped into the pool it felt warm, but it wasn't hot. My friends always joke around and just do random things that would make us get in trouble which was really annoying, but that is just how we are. After we got out of the pool we dried off and did all of the things we usually do when we get out of the pool.

As soon as we went back inside this random guy was following us. But I didn't think much of it, because I thought he was just going the same way as us. After a couple minutes pass by I turn and I still see him. I turned to my friends and told them that I think this random dude was following us. So we just started speed walking through the hallway and I picked up my phone and started texting my mom. I asked her where she was since I forgot where she told me where she was at. I slowed down from running because everybody was looking at us like we needed help.

My mom responded to my message a couple of minutes later and she told us where she was at. She had told me her room number, so me and my friends started looking for it. I was still a little bit scared because I didn't want the guy coming back. So we had wanted to hurry a bit before he came back. We finally had found her room number. Once I got up to her I started telling her everything that happened. She said to just stay here until he actually leaves, because she doesn't want anything happening to us.

My mom had went out searching for him to make sure he doesn't try grabbing us or something. She had found him, and told him what was his problem and why he kept following us. It turns out he actually was just going back to his room. His was also right next to us. I could tell he was scared because my mom started yelling. So basically me and my friends had ran for nothing thinking he was trying to hurt us.

Conclusion: That is the story of how I thought a guy was following us even though he was just looking for his room number, his room was right next to us anyway. This time I will remember to just go a different way and not to panic.

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One time I was at the pool with my cousins and we always throw each other in the pool.

My older cousins had threw me into the deeper part of the pool and I thought I could swim back up but it was hard to. But my cousins were thinking I was joking until I started to panic and try to swim up to the surface. I then got all the strength to swim to the corners. I was really upset to that my cousins didn't help me because I could have gotten really hurt. I had walked out of the pool and dried myself and waited for them to get out of the pool it looked liked  they were having so much fun because they knew how to swim in 5 feet and I didn't know how to.

So I asked them if they can help me and they said yes. My cousin Ryan had to

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Everyday when I go in my sisters room we start too fight. Its either me starting it or the her starting it.We usually start to fight but recently we shared our problems and we learned how to not argue and have the problem solved.

When we get yelled at we realize what is going on and try to solve the problem. We will fight over the littlest things and my sometimes when she just walks into my room i will get mad. Then the next day we are not speaking to each in trouble but i'm working on that. she usually get revenge on me and tell a secret about me to my friends or cousins or i do that. I solved my problem by telling her i am sorry or trying to make her laugh. So then everything's ok and the problem will be solved.

Another reason she solve's the problem is by doing the same what i do or she hugs me and I start to laugh. my parents tell us to be nice or give us a talk. We are starting to like each other more as siblings and the problem is
being solved little by little. So the issue is solved and one of things that helped us solve it was saying sorry and forgiving each other.

I am always scared when i am with her and we get in a fight. My heart beats so hard. She gets mad at me for no reason but it's all good. We always fight over things that don't matter. We usually fight when we are both tired. When i was 5 and she was 8 we always got in fights.

Conclusion: Those are the reasons of how I solved the issue and what was my problem. Now I know I need to get along with my sister because she does a lot for me. Now we don't fight anymore and she is so nice.

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Jalon: When I got stuck in the middle of a lake

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Jalon: When I got stuck in the middle of a lake

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It started of by me and my family wanting to go to Lake Plesent. I invited some family members then it escalated into lots of people.Everyone brought some rafts and my Uncle Aaron decied to tie them together. When he tied them I went on a ride far out in the lake.So, I was pretty far then I told them to turn around but they didn't. They went far as the sweat dripped down my head I wanted to jump in the frezzing cold water.

As I kept asking them to turn they didn't and this is where people started freaking out because we were stuck. There was mabey like 18 people and 7 rafts. I leaped off the raft from sitting there for more than 1 hour. My cousins followed and all the kids started pushing the boats to the walking area. But people just pushed off the edge and there the boats went floating in the middle of the water.

I was so tired and my heart was pounding thinking we wouldn't come back intill a long time. I got back on the raft and almost fell asleep. Almost 45 min. passed by and I jumped of the raft once again and just swam back to my camping site. As I swam back I inhaled slowly and kept going. My arms got SO tired and I decied to take a break there for a little then kept going.

I was swimming and swimming I saw my brother and cousin right ahead and they waited for me. I caught up and then went behind again. I just moved my arms and legs and finally after 1 mile of swimming I made it back to my camp site. I took my Life Jacket of and sat on shore waiting for the rest of my family and told my family the story. They laughed and said they knew that would happen because it happened every time they went camping.

This is the story of When I Got Stuck In The Middle Of A Lake. Aleast when I came back the food was ready I was sooo hungry and thirsty. So we went to eat and gathered together. When I was done eating it was really hot so I went in the lake with my cousins. Talked about when we got stuck then we had so much fun!

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Matthew Moxley First Rough Draft - The Impossible Fort

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Matthew Moxley First Rough Draft - The Impossible Fort

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I was playing Fortnite one day and suddenly my sister burst into the room. And she made me lose. I was so mad but not just cause I lost it. It was an important tournament to get a skin. And that was the only way to get it! I was SUPER mad but it was her birthday. I asked what she wanted and tried to not sound angry. She said she wanted a giant fort.

I asked her to give me five reasons. But I should've just said yes. she ended up giving about thirty.So I said "Fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnne". But little did I know what was going to come. Now that I think about it I should have tricked her into wanting a small one. But I didn't think about that too much at that time. If I had a time machine I would stop my self.≡(▔﹏▔)≡

So she kept telling "NO this" and "NO that". It was horrible because my hands hurt so much they were red. She always uses either cardboard or these tubes from her fort set which has these annoying little connectors. She even got mad at me for pretending I was a builder. And I was still mad about me not having even a small chance of getting the skin.

When it was done she checked it out. I did also and it was pretty cool. But then she said the worst thing. "There is only enough room for me" even though there was enough room for three of each of us. Then she said "Its because i'm a "crazy sleeper". I'll explain what she means by a crazy sleeper. She always wakes up in the middle of the night an uses the restroom,goes back to bed and starts sleeping in a different direction and forgets what happened at night. Then she thinks she ended up there in her sleep. I wanted to tell on her but it was her birthday.
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But now I'm good with that. Because I got just enough points to get the skin on Fortnite. And I lied down in there but it wasn't that comfy any ways. But at first I thought I didn't get it cause there was actually like 4000 people that where supposed to get it (which is like 0.00000001% of people who play the game.)So it took a while.

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One day I went to the park with my dog it was a good day not to hot but not to cold. So I decided to go to the park no one was there so it was good. I went to the grass and played with my dog after we went for a walk. I wanted to play at the playground. So we went and I was just with my dog and having a good time. Then I saw that it was getting cloudy but I didn't think much of it. Then I saw a little rain coming I said " a little rain is nothing" so I went with my dog and played with her. This is when I saw a lot of rain just coming! There was a storm ! I didn't know what to do I had a hoodie so I put my dog in my hoodie stuck her head out I had on the cap that the hoodie had.

I saw what was in my back pack because I just got out of volleyball. I had a cap that I put on my head because I could feel the rain on my head.I saw two shirt I put my dog in one shirt because she was cold. With the other  shirt I put it on my dogs head for rain wont get on her head. It was very windy I had to go home but I couldn't see anything because of the rain. Everyone at home was taking a nap! At this point i didn't know what to do. I was scared so I just went and there was no cars because of the rain it was bad to drive when there is a rain storm.

Then I made it home the park was close to my house. I went to my room and dried my dog but how come she can be in my bed I had to shower her with warm water. After I dried her again she went right to sleep on my bed. It was only nine so I shower too. Put on some clothes and went to take a nap. When I was a the park my heart was racing I could feel  like if it was going to jump out of my chest but it didn't. Now I know to always take a umbrella. When its a fresh day because its most likely to rain.

Then my mom woke up and I told her the story of what happened. Then I saw if It was still raining . It was still raining as hard as it was before. Then I had remember that I had left something ! I left my phone ! I didn't know what to do I told my mom that I had to go back. My dog woke up and wouldn't let me go by myself so I had to take her with me. I got my rain coat and my mom had brought a rain coat for my dog too. So I got my sweater and a umbrella I got a blanket for me and my dog Luna that is her name. We went and we couldn't see anything it was hard to see. I was able to see a little so I jut went to what I can see and it took me to the park so that was good. I went to were I was and i couldn't see my phone.

I went to the play ground it was hard to get up there because was holding my dog with our blanket but I got up there. My phone was there but had water. I went home and went upstairs I was scared my phone was broke. I went to see if it still works and it did. I was so happy ! It was already ten pm so I was pretty sleepy and very hungry. So my mom made me food and I gave my dog food and then in the morning I would take her outside. I was very tired so I went to sleep.

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AZARIAH THE TIME WHEN I WAS IN LAS VEGAS HOTEL UNCOMFROTABLE.

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AZARIAH THE TIME WHEN I WAS IN LAS VEGAS HOTEL UNCOMFROTABLE.

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ONE day on online school i was doing class it was about to be our lunch break. AND my mom an dad were planing go to las vegas for a family trip. THEY don't no if we are going to las vegas  we were excited go there it took a 4 hour. BUT it change to 5 hour we had to pick my dad up from work.WE left around 5 or 6 i think i can;t remember.  it was kkinda getting late.
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WHEN i was saying go to las vegas after picking my dad up we had to stop some were so we can grab snacks for the road. then  my mom keep driving so we can get there on time but we keep stop because we need gas for our van and gab something to drink cause we were thristy. then it took to long it was hot in the car we forgot to tell  our mom and dad to turn on the air in the car we said why it so hot in the car then we fil the air. AND   we said the air wasn't on we got mad because we were in the back of the seat punching the chair the front people can fil the air  because there are closering. then we turn the air on we said finally the cool air  our parents lets us get out of the car cause we need to streach our body we get back in start driving again.

while went back driving  it was getting late then my sibilngs and our parent look in the back you will see a full moon.  it was beatuful  at night because we see how far we went i'm talking about far far then we kinda see the mountains the sky like a dark blue . if you cobine it all to gether makes one betiful picture i was gonna take a picture but it was too dark.SOME of us went to sleep moslty my little sister lailah she 4 but she is turning five on her birthday. THEN  we  to the gas station  because we had to use the restroom rest of my family i didn't we streach our hole body again cause we getting sore alot we got in the car. on the map it said 3 hours i think i cant remember  we ask are we almost there he said nope we are not there.

so we were all tired i was kinda falling a sleep like i fall sleep bam wake up again i just keep do that all the time. then i figrue it out to keep me up its my phone it was to bright it was hurting my eyes i turn brightnes down it was still hurting i was kinda falling a sleep tho. we look at the map it was 2 hours left we sadi oh yeah oh yeah we in car we listeng to and kinda muics and this song came on it was from tik tok was the savage every time. MY little sister just start dance out of no where she can to any music in the store any were once my little sister was sleep then my mom put the savage. SHE just wake up start to dance we laugh so hard just keep see her do it because she loves tiktok  any we stop at gas station one more time because we needed  gas and to grab some drinks. AND my dad said we will get at 11:30 or 12:00  we got some  burger king on the way  back of the seet was sleep aclude my sister to then our parent throw the burgers  so we can catch it . but iwas asleep my dad throw at me i woke up i was so tried hungry to but i wasn't trying to save it went back sleep.

any ways it was 1 more hour left we said okay

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my wendsday at my dads house: i was 6 years old at day time at 7:00 AM As i finished drinking a bottle of gatorrade i look for my  remote around me As i found it i was watching teen titans for 2 hours as i went to go get my backpack then i put it on my back when i went out side with my step brothers xave and my other brother who is one year older than me Aaron when i walked up and down the           street and came back in the house as i pull out my blankit when i went to sleep at 8:00am when i woke up it was 1:30pm i heard noise my step brothers were playing a game my dad was at work what i heard came from the kitchen it got louder and louder when i checked it was nothing it came from the laundry room i had a flashlight and my phone with a recording of a bear roring when i got closer and closer i turned n the recording it was my tennage step brother shaving with loud music on i was scared but lukily i was able to face my my fear.I was happy it was not a robber as soon as it was 8:00 pm after eating pizza i wanted to relax when i thought i was good all of a sudden i hear something breaking so my phone died i was scared so i asked my dad if he can turn on his flash light.                                                                                                  I soon just wait for the day to be over AS I'M FALLING TO SLEEP MY BROTHERS DECIDED TO PLAY SOME MUSIC FROM A GAME CALLED FREEDY FAZBERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.I was furios but happy that i was soon gonna leave back home i was happy hopeing that i would never see this scary stuff again i was relived to be out i am happy that i faced my fear.

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Kaniyah Dunn First rough draft about when she got lost in Disney land

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Kaniyah Dunn First rough draft about when she got lost in Disney land

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I was in the truck that my grandma had rented for when we were driving to Disney land In the truck. I was there next to my auntie and her son because he was sitting on my lap and he was trying to go to sleep. We had stopped at the store and not all of us when in because there were like 13 of us in the truck and 13 in the other truck.I had went in and got some juice and gum candy, chips because that is what I needed for the ride because I was not super hungry but I was hungry.I had also sat in a In the spot were I was sitting In the first place I was just there and then I fell asleep while I was eating my snacks and drinking my juice I gave my little cousin some because he had wanted some and he looked like he was super hot so I gave him some.

When we had stopped at the gas station we had put on our jackets that said our name and 2020 on It they were gray and for girls pink and boys black or red and girls had red I had a red one with glitter. when we were done with that we went to the hotel we were staying at and then we went to the fun park were to people were and then we had all split up my grandma took the  little kids and me and we went to go see mickey mouse when we were done with that we went to go see some other person I forgot the other persons name. Then my grandma's phone died and I left my phone In the car because I did not want take any pictures then we were just there and walking around.I was not happy because I was just so sad for what have happen I just wish that I would have brought my phone but I didn't so we just had to try to find a charger for my grandma. I also had to carry me little cousin because he was getting sleepy so I just had to carry him and my grandma was carrying my other baby cousin she was just crying then we had to go find my mom and brothers and other cousins and aunties but  my uncle didn't come so we just had  to find my other family members.

I had spotted goofy and I had ran to him In a splash and then we had just gave him a hug because we could not take a picture because my phone was In the car and my grandma phone was died. I was so sad because I love to take pictures they are the best. I just wish that my mom was there because we could have used her phone but she was with my brothers the whole time. My legs were also hurting and so was my hip because I had my cousin so my little other cousin was in a stroller and my other cousin was on top of in and I was just walking on the side of my grandma. Then we went to go get food and sat down so we can eat. I don't remember were It was because It was In march when we have when.

I was walking then I had saw my auntie and I told my grandma so we can catch up with they called my mom and we found all of our family. We had found my mom I ran to her and gave her a hug she had got me some popcorn and I was some happy. I was just right next to my mom and then I ran with y grandma . But we did not get lost again. I had asked when my cousins mom came to pick here up and hold here can I get In the stroller and then I sat on top on It not  In it. I sat on It for like 10-15 minutes.

I had just waited and took of my jacket because It was hot but I had to jacket on my head and I just kept going around in circles and then I got It off. I had also went to go with my auntie on a ride that went fast I am so glad I was a good age. Just so I can ride It it was also dark and It had fire and a big rock I was also the driver of the under ground thing.I had got to see the castle and stuff It was so cute. The most pretty thing I ever seen and I loved It my mom took and picture of me I looked like a fairy princess.

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Ms.Lamadrid's First Rough Draft - The Time That I Beat the Rain 

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Ms.Lamadrid's First Rough Draft - The Time That I Beat the Rain 

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Introduction: Introduce Problem/ Get  Readers Interested. 1 paragraph. 6-7 sentences.

"PLOP" I sigh and just look up above. It had been a struggle to get that tent up all on my own. My fingers hurt from pulling the strings on the tent. I was thirsty. My dad and my sister usually came with me to go camping but this time, I wanted to do it alone. Finally, I was going to get the relaxation that I wanted. The leaves swayed in the air, the sun shined down on me, and when I closed my eyes, all I could hear was peacefulness along with a few birds singing. Nothing could ruin this weekend I had thought. But then in the distance, I heard something that made me jump. In the distance, I heard a jolt of lighting. But that didn't scare me. That was perfect, I had thought. Nothing makes a camping trip better than rain trickling down. But that night, nothing turned out as expected. That night, I was in a race against time to save my stuff.
First Body Paragraph: Introduce how I used creativity to solve my problem. 4-5 sentences.
For a while, I had enjoyed the sound of the rain. But, then it hit me- the first raindrop. I tried to shrug it off, after all I was inside the tent. But then I felt more drops on my face and I realized that water was getting in. "How could this be?" I asked myself. I was inside my cozy tent and I had a roof! I look up, scared on what I would find. At first, I didn't see it, but then my eye caught it and I realized, this was my problem. On top of my little tent, there was a hole, and that hole was about to ruin everything.
Second Body Paragraph: Introduce how I used creativity to solve my problem. 4-5 sentences.
My mind started racing. What are my solutions? I can't go back to town because driving in the rain scared me. I can't sleep in my car because it's too small. It's dark out and I am about to start panicking. Correction- I am already panicking. I do put a bucket underneath? Do I fill the hole with clothes? I started thinking about all the possible solutions, and I knew that this problem required a creative one. Hmm, what about an umbrella? I asked myself. After all, people use that to protect themselves from the rain and it can surely protect me now.
Third Body Paragraph: Introduce how I used creativity to solve my problem. 6-7 sentences.
The race started. I scrambled to find my car keys. I quickly opened up my tent and I made a dash for my car. I needed to move quickly. The rain was getting stronger and I knew that I needed to move fast if I wanted to get any sleep. In my car, I quickly looked for my umbrella and when I saw it, I didn't hesitate, I pulled it out. With the umbrella in my hand, I rushed back to the tent. This was the moment of truth.
Conclusion: Does your creative solution work?

I was determined to make this work. I open up the umbrella and I jam the handle into the hole. I was a bit nervous, I have never seen anyone do this. I go back into my tent to assess the damage. Everything is wet but I can dry it. But, I smile because even though the rain just got harder, there is no more water coming through that hole. I wipe my forehead from the rain and sweat. I am just ready to go back to sleep.