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Area of strength: strong hook, organization, and vocabulary

Area of improvement: incorporating imagery & dialogue

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area of strength: imagery,dialogue

area of improvement: hook and vocabulary

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Area fo strength: a strong hook, captilization.

Area of improvement: imagry, diolage, orginazation.

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Area of strength , organization , grammar , imagery and strong hook .

Area of improvement , dialogue

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Area of strength: I had good sequence and vocabulary I also used a strong hook.

Area of weakness: Imagery,dialogue

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Area of strength: strong hook, organization, spelling.

Area of improvement: dialogue, imagery, figures of speech, grammar.

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Area of strength: strong dialogue, and vocabulary.

Area of improvement: Imagery

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Area of strength: Imagery and capitalization

Area of improvement: Dialogue and strong hook

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Area of strength:  a strong hook and spelling

Area of strength: figures of speech, grammar.

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Area of strength:
i had a good hook
A little organized only because i didn't get to finish and spelling

Area of Improvement: Imagery & dialogue

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Areas of strength: good hook, Imagery,
Capitalization

Area of Improvement: Grammar, dialogue

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Area of strength: vocabulary,organization

Area of improvement: imagery, strong hook .

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Area of strength; capitalization, strong hook.

Area of improvement; spelling, organization, imagery.

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Areas of strength:Spelling ,Capitalization ,

Area of improvement: Strong hook , Organization ,

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Area of strength description, hook, capitalization

Area of improvement orginazation, imagery, puncutation.

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Area of strength;  good vocabulary,plot,theme and setting

Area of improvement; imagery,dialogue, and a strong hook

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Area of strength;  good vocabulary,plot,theme and setting

Area of improvement; imagery,dialogue, and a strong hook

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Area of strength; talk and figures of speech
Area of improvement:organization and compression

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area of strength strong hook

area of improvement imagery

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area of strength:Organization

Area of Improvement:Hook,Capitalization

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Area of strength: Vocabulary, dialogue, and organization

Area of improvement: Imagery and strong hook

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Area of strength: imagery, spelling, organization

Area of improvement: dialogue, hook

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Area of Strength: spelling, organization

Area of improvement: imagery, hook, punctuation

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area of strength: giving details and showing imagery
improvement: hooks

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Area of strength: Strong Imagery , Capitalization, dialogue

Area of improvement: Organization, Strong hook.

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Arwa of strength: imagery, grammar, details.

Area of improvement: a strong hook, dialogue, organization.

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Area of strength: Giving good details , and a strong hook Area of improvement: Dialogue

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Area of strength: Details

Area of improvement: Spelling

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area of strength : capitalization, imagery
area of improvement : dialogue, strong hook

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Area of strength: a strong hook and dialogue

Area of improvement:Capitalization and punctuation

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Area of strength: Spelling, detail

Area of improvement: staring it off

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Area of strength: A strong hook, capitalization and periods.

Area of improvement: Punctuation.

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Area of strength: spelling

Area of improvement: strong hook,capitalization, dialogue

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Area of strength : Capitalization , &  Spelling

Area of improvement : Dialogue and Imagery

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Area of strength: strong hook , capitalization

Area of improvement: imagery

# data[].attributes.body
Area of strength: details,imagery,spelling

Area of improvement: hook, dialogue

# data[].attributes.body
Area of strength: spelling, dialogue

Area of improvement: capitalization, strong hook

# data[].attributes.body
Area of strength:Capitalization and punctuation

Area of improvement:Organization

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Area of strength: capitalization, spelling

Area of improvement: strong hook, organization, dialogue

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Area of strength: strong imagery

Area of improvement: Capitalization, Vocabulary, Grammar

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imagery, dialogue

Area of improvement: strong hook and organization.

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area of strength: hook,imagery

area of improvement:capitalization,spelling

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Area of Strength : Organization

Area of Improvement : I could've added more details

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Area of strength:The Introduction

Area of improvement:periods,strong hook

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spelling , organization , capitalization

area of strength : The introduction

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Area of strength: strong hook and organization

Area of improvement: imagery and dialogue

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Area of strength: Organization
Hook
Dialogue
Spelling
Area Of Improvement: Imagery

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Area of strength: I have a strong hook.

Area of improvement: Dialogue and imagery

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stronger hook,dialogue,and imagery

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strength: imagery. hook, spelling, dialogue

area of improvment: knowing where to start off and to say on track.

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area of strength: word choice,hook,imagery.

Area of improvement: Dialogue,Organization

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Area of strength: Organization, spelling, strong hook, vocabulary, imagery

Area of improvement: Dialogue

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Area of strength: using correct pov, using imagery, capitalization
Area of improvement: strong hook

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Area of strength: spelling and imagery

Area of improvement: strong hook, dialogue

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Area of strength: hook, dialogue, imagery

Area of improvement: figures, vocabulary

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Area of Strength:
Imagery
Clear POV
Pacing and Action

Area of Improvement:
Hook

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Areas of strength: spelling, imagery, and details

Areas of improvement: hook, organizing, capitalization

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area of strength: hook

area of improvement: conclusion

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strengths: spelling, imagery, punctuation, capitalization

weakness: conclusions

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Area of strength:capitalization,strong hook,vocab.

Area of improvement: Plot

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Area of strength: Capitalization, Spelling, Strong hook

Area of improvement: Concluding lesson, Organization, Imagery, Dialogue

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Area of strength: imagery

Area of improvement: Concluding lesson strong hook

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Strength: Capitalization, organization, hook.

Improvement: Imagery and Dialogue