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Slides wordy a

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Maybe have more titles / discussion points with less text and then the delivery covers the details

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We need to challenge the icc slide, way too wordy and you’ve covered it already

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Explanation of interprofessional learning at the right level of info and what it means for the course - doesn't need the boiler plate text

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Great to highlight the 100% employability

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The slides just list things about the course.......
They don't link with each other. Try and take an applicant on a journey.
Random link to employability website how is this used.

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What is “the region” for placements

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Make placements more of. A positive spin rathera  than. Anegatives
I.e. Gives opportunities to experience varieties of areas rthEr than negative of travelling

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Definition of region needed

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Good to talk through what a person needs to be to be a midwife there is a feeling of you must be this and must be that. Perhaps explore with the audience what qualities they feel make a great midwife?

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Role of midwife explained clearly very early on

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Considering never seen presentation or delivered it

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Does a17 yeR old understand the value of autonomy?

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Perhaps make. Ajoke  about it

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Reference re travelling and students being based where they live/locates is not accurate
Too much text On the slides

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Nice having text and the image

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Quite a wordy slide.
Great to see you enjoy being a midwife. Develop this further. Tell your story! Inspire them.
Sell the 24/7 working. Why it's important. Tell a story about working Christmas Day. How it links with tea working.
Maybe use the students to talk about their experiences of working within health.

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Stop - check info re travel to placement and allocation to placement
Continue - emphasis on professional integra

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More pictures less words on slides
Good job if you’d not done the presentation before

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Demonstrated passion for career from beginning of presentation

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Consider the use of 'shiftwork'  as my eye was drawn straight to it.

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All the nursing & midwifery slide formats are the same- would be rather dull if guests go to more than one

Slides are too wordy & lack imagery. Your narrative is strong & the text isn't needed.

Leave out the negative regarding placement travelling

Use imagery of skills suite

Would you have a student midwife in the room to share their experience

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Clear explanation of the role of a midwife