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i will try to make the work i do better and clearer so i will understand.

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I need to improve on some of my grammer and check my work .

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I need to improved I need to always give evidence and fine information

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I need to improve everything because its hard like the grammar and my 2nd G and E .

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I need to improve some of my grammer,
spelling, and turning in work on time I have to go to after school turtoring and stop being scared to ask for help and start doing the work and making changes with turning in work on time asking for help being at better writing and pushing myself to do better then the last grades I've had so far even on the esssay
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ill go to after school tutoring and ask for help so it will make my essay better

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Go to tutoring and ask for help and make sure my work is good enough.

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to improve my essay i still did to do the last slide in the organizer. i also need to look over my work again to see if it needs any improvements.

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In order to improve my essay I need to make sure I get credible evidence and give the author credit.

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by reading my paragraphs i got my evidence on.

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i need to finnish my organizer so i am i able to finish the essay i need to add to each slide because they are not completed.

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In order to improve my essay I need to proofread and to double check my grammar and spelling and erase any unnecessary words that is taking up space in my essay/draft and that's how I would/will improve my essay draft before the final submission.

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to improve my essay I still need to find the evidence for my essay
to do my G,E

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I need to improve my E because I havent explanied the G very well

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To improve my essay I need to finish the concluding statement and than i will be done with it.

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To improve my essay I will check my 2nd G and E of my first body paragraph because I didn't explain it very well and I will redo my hook.

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I will improve my essay by checking my G and E and my correction.

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I need to improve my essay by working on it more finishing it up, check if I missed anything on all my slides to make sure.

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I should double check my work mostly my E's because i had a couple of hard times on my E. Also all my spellings, grammer, and capitalization.

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To improve my essay I need to finish my conclusion and check if my body paragraph 1,2, and 3 is good and proof-read

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I will double check my work such as my evidence and sentences and make sure my spelling and wording is correct and check to see if i should add more or less evidence for my body paragraph 3 and 1 even when im done in case i did something wrong/poorly so i can get a good grade on the essay.

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To improve my essay draft before the final submission is by double-checking my grammar and checking my body 1, body 2, and body 3 if it's accurate.

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I need to work on my body paragraph 3 and m conclusion paragraph. I would recheck my G's and E's see if i could make it better in anyway