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Hello everyone, welcome back to our lovely news and feature class.

How are you doing? I hope you all are in good condition.
Today will be group presentation performances. Group alam terbuka, pecinta mancing, perubahan, and menantu idaman are required to submit the link of your video presentation in the column provided.

For the others, please watch every group presentation and write down important notes as you may need them for your reflection part. Each student is obligated to give comment, suggestion, or question to the presenters. The questions addressed to your group, must be answered by the presenters.

Once you join the Padlet, you must take short video (using padlet feature) stating that you are in the class already, greet everyone, and express your feeling (of course you may say more words). This will be recorded as your attendance.

your participation is being assessed here.

if you have any question, feel free to contact me.  Thank you :)

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Please write your reflection in the links provided below:

1. Reflection ( Basic news writing - Group  alam terbuka):  https://forms.gle/w3TLEsoxTshfxbZs6

2. Reflection ( Writing for print journalism- Group Pecinta Mancing): https://forms.gle/vYPwzbZbiZc9XS5y5

3. Reflection (Writing for the web - Group Perubahan): https://forms.gle/Z97juWvRUtuqcQ9S9

4. Reflection ( Writing for broadcast journalism- Group Menantu Idaman): https://forms.gle/NH4PxzaZxHrYNcf29

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Writing for Broadcast Journalism - Group Menantu Idaman

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https://youtu.be/m12aGnEu6bc?si=5chZhPsiHOhBbyrH

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I love this class

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Haykal Kaciepi Marcos

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I also love this class

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hehe😁👍

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I`m Ahmad Ikhsan Rifadil 21018045. Thank you to the Alam Terbuka Group for presenting its material on basic news writing. It's understandable that there are many points for this basic news writing. Thank You for group Alam Terbuka

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I`m Ahmad Ikhsan Rifadil 21018045. Thank you to the group of Pecinta Mancing who have presented their material about writing for print Journalistic. I'd like to ask the group of presenters, what if the news we want to make or write has an unintentional typo, while the news has been printed? Thanks in advance (in English)

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I`m Ahmad Ikhsan Rifadil 21018045. thank you for group Perubahan who have presented their material about writing for the Web. The material provided is quite easy to understand. There are a lot of easy-to-access news on some web sites that we often encounter. The delivery of material from this group is also good and clear. thank you group perubahan

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GROUP ALAM TERBUKA

I APPRECIATE THIS GROUP PERFORMANCE BECAUSE THE EXPLANATION IS EASY TO UNDERSTAND, MAYBE I HAVE COMMENTS, SOME VIDEO CAM CLOSURE SLIDES, AND SOME SLIDES HAS A LOT OF POINTS, I SUGGEST YOU TO MAKE IT SEPARATE INTO SEVERAL SLIDES, THANK YOU 🌷.

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GROUP PECINTA MANCING

I LIKE THE EXPLANATION DUE TO CLEAR AND EASY TO UNDERSTAND. MY COMMENTS ARE SOME SLIDES HAS PARAGRAPH NOT POINTS, AND UNFORTUNATELY ONE SLIDE WAS SKIPPED. I THINK THAT'S ALL, THANK YOU 🌷.

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GROUP PERUBAHAN

I LIKE YOUR EXPLANATION BUT MAYBE YOU NEED TO GIVE A PICTURE AS EXAMPLE TO MAKE THE SLIDES BETTER AND MAKE THE FONT SIZE BIGGER FOR SEVERAL SLIDES, THANK YOU 🌷

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GROUP MENANTU IDAMAN

I APPRECIATE YOUR EXPLANATION FOR ONE HOUR, SUCH A SUPER CLEAR EXPLANATION. MY COMMENT ARE MAKE THE SIZE OF THE FONT BIGGER AND MAKE SEVERAL SLIDES INTO POINTS NOT PARAGRAPH, THAT'S ALL THANK YOU 🌷

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I`m Ahmad Ikhsan Rifadil. Thank you to the Group Menantu Idaman. Their presentation is very impressive and easy to understand every one of his accomplishments. This journalistic material is very important in real life. Besides, today's conventional news is far behind and the survivors are choosing the simpler thing, broadcasting it mainly on the radio. I fully appreciate it group presentation.

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I'm Hanifah Amani from group menantu idaman, really appreciate the presentation from the group, but it will be better if you elaborate the material, not only read and translate the ppt. thank you and have a good day

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I'm Hanifah Amani from group menantu idaman, thanks for the presentation. I really enjoy the explanation that easy to understand. but my suggestion is, before you record the presentation, make sure your voice is clear and not delay. that's all thank youu.

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For group alam terbuka, i think the explanation is good and can be understood, but there is one point that I feel there is misunderstanding, such as explanation in the inverted pyramid section you said that the body is in paragraph 2, I mean how about if there are 4 more paragraphs in the news. thank you

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For group pecinta mancing thank you for the good explanation and easy to understand, but my suggestion for other presenters, make sure your team's voive is clear before recording the presentation.

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I'm Hanifah Amani, thank you for your presentation. the presentation is easy to understand because the group elaborating the material, not only read the ppt. thank you group perubahan <3

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for group perubahan,
i have a questions for the presenter, my questions is : Other than being quick and easy to publish, what are the other differences with writing in traditional media, and does writing for the web also use the inverted pyramid format in delivering its news? thankyou

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The PowerPoint was good because it explained things well and was easy to understand, and the explanations were clear.

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group pecinta mancing presentation was really good! they explain things in an easy way that everyone can understand. But, there was a problem with the microphone — it wasn't clear sometimes. Maybe next time, make sure the microphone works better.

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I'm Onlywan Saragih from the group "Alam Terbuka."

Thank you to the "Pecinta Mancing" group for presenting their material on Writing for Print journalistic. I like the explanation of the material, it is very easy to understand, especially with some additional example given, but there are a few shortcomings in the video presentation before recording, make sure the team's voice is clear, that's all I can say. Thank you.

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the presentation was impressive! The presenter delivered the material was confident and articulate, making it easy to follow along.

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Thankyou for the presentation group alam terbuka. I have a comment for the presentation. Sound quality should be improved , because of the presentation using video so the clarity of the sound is very important. And I have a question. When doing indirect quotations, do we have to write the name of the original author of the paraphrased words? Thankyou

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thank you for the amazing explanation from your group (menantu idaman), I think the presentation video from your group is the longest than the others, I don't know if this is a suggestion or question but can you explain it in simple sentences/ simple way?, maybe the topic and function of each topic! . thank you

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Other than being fast to publish, writing for the web differs from traditional media in its interactivity and global reach. also As for the format, writing for the web often uses the inverted pyramid style to deliver news efficiently

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Thank you grup alam terbuka for your presentation. Your explained the material very well and easy to understand, I really appreciate it.

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Thank you group pecinta mancing for the explanation. Your presentation is good because you add some example an easy to understand, but i have suggestion make sure your mic/speaker are capbale because your voice is not really clear

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Thankyou group Perubahan. The presentation was very good, I like how you explain the material very clear and understandable. But maybe you can simplify a bit about the slides.

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I am Onlywan Saragih from the "Alam Terbuka" group. Thank you to the "Perubahan" group. I really apresiasi the groups hard work in explain the material, and I really apresiasi the groups presentation of the material. The explanation is quite good and clear so it can be understood. Thanks

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Thank you to Alam Terbuka Group for the presentation. Some slides in the PowerPoint have too many points, but overall, the material is easy to understand.

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Assalamua'laikum wr.wb. i am Zurnisasi (21018042) from group alam terbuka. I want to give a suggestion. so before you record your presentation, make sure the voices is good and clear, then i think presenters' voices also delay. About your ppt, there are some part that i think is not on point. So, i hope my suggestion is useful for you guys. Thank you!

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For the Pecinta Mancing group, thank you for the clear and easy-to-understand explanation. Your presentation provided exceptionally clear and understandable explanations. My suggestion for future presenters is to ensure clarity in your team's voice before recording the presentation."

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Hallo guys! I am Zurnisasi (21018042) from group Alam Terbuka. I want to ask you a question, Which websites publish news that fits the characteristics or examples you described?

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Answering Zurnisasi's Question ( Sherly)

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Answering Zurnisasi's Question ( Sherly)

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thank you for the question, so there are several websites prioritize characteristics like immediacy, flexibility, and relevance in their news reporting. Here are some examples:

1. CNN.com: CNN's website is known for its immediate reporting of breaking news stories. They often update their articles in real-time as events unfold, providing readers with the latest information.

2. BBC News Online: Similar to CNN, BBC News Online focuses on delivering news promptly to its audience. They cover a wide range of topics and provide updates as stories develop

3. Twitter: While not a traditional news website, Twitter has become a crucial platform for immediate news updates. Many news organizations, journalists, and eyewitnesses use Twitter to report breaking news in real-time.

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Thank you group perubahan for the presentation. The material is interesting about writing for the web which is very helpful for beginner like us. Your explanation also clear, thank you.

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Assalamua'alaikum wr.wb. i am Zurnisasi (21018042) from group Alam Terbuka. I want to give you a suggestions guys. I suggest you to make a ppt is on point not paragraph. Because it makes you look like just read the paragraph, but your explanation is easy to understand. Thank you for your explanation guys!

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Thank you, Menantu Idaman, for your insightful presentation on writing for broadcast journalism. I have a question, so how to make sure broadcast news writing is clear and accurate while also keeping it engaging for viewers? And how to manage to fit all the important details into a short amount of time? thank you !!

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I want to answer the question from Muhammad Al Gufran, thanks for your question. So, your question is do we need to write the name of original source in write the indirect quotation? I think, yes. Because we have to appreciate the original source. Beside that its maybe help our reader, such when they want to know more complete information about the sentences in indirect quotation in our news, they can find it by read the original one. And if we write the name of original source, it makes our news more accurate for the readers. I think thats all from me.

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Thank you for asking sherly, it's a good question.

So there are tips to manage broadcast news writing is clear

1. Prioritize Clarity and Accuracy:

- Ensure that the information you're presenting is factual and comes from reliable sources.

- Use simple language and avoid jargon or overly complex terminology that may confuse viewers.

- Double-check names, dates, figures, and other important details for accuracy.

2. Structure for Engagement:

- Begin with a strong, attention-grabbing headline or lead that piques the viewer's interest.

- Use an inverted pyramid style, presenting the most important information first and then providing additional details.

- Incorporate human interest angles or relatable examples to make the story more engaging and connect with the audience.

3. Utilize Visual Elements:

- Complement your writing with compelling visuals, such as graphics, photographs, or video footage, to enhance the storytelling and maintain viewer interest.

- Ensure that the visuals are relevant and support the information you're presenting.

4. Write Concisely:

- Broadcast news scripts are typically brief, so make every word count.

- Avoid unnecessary repetition or redundant information.

- Use active voice and concise sentences to convey information efficiently.

5. Manage Time Effectively:

- Develop a system for prioritizing and organizing your tasks to ensure that you meet deadlines.

- Collaborate with editors, producers, and other team members to streamline the writing and approval processes.

- Practice writing under time constraints to improve your speed and efficiency.

6. Stay Up-to-Date:

- Monitor breaking news and developments related to your stories, and be prepared to make updates or revisions as needed.

- Maintain a strong understanding of current events and relevant background information to provide context for your stories.

7. Seek Feedback and Continuously Improve:

- Actively seek feedback from colleagues, editors, and viewers to identify areas for improvement.

- Analyze viewership data and audience engagement metrics to understand what resonates with your audience.

- Continuously refine your writing and storytelling techniques based on feedback and data.

Remember, effective broadcast news writing is a balance between delivering accurate and concise information while capturing the audience's attention and making the content engaging. With practice, efficient time management, and a commitment to excellence, you can master this craft.

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I am Onlywan Saragih, a member of the "Alam terbuka" . I am grateful to the organization "Menantu Idaman." I offered the group some advice: you must be able to summary the information in short, straight forward sentences and simply create a PowerPoint with the points. I truly values the out comes of the group presentation, even though the presenter carried the information with confidence and made it simple to understand. Thanks.

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Thanks to group pecinta mancing for a good presentation and made me get the points of presentation easily. My suggestion is before present your idea please make sure your voice is clear.

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Thank you for the brief presentation. The presentaion is easy to understand because the presenters explain the material nicely not just reading.

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Actually the presentation was very good because the presenters explain it very detail. But i thing the time of presentaion is too long maybe cause you include every single material not just the points.

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Thanks to group alam terbuka for a good presentation. I just wanna say maybe it’s better if you explain the points more and not just translate it.

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Thanks to group alam terbuka for a good presentation. I just wanna say it’s better if you explain the points more than just translate it.

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Thank you for the explanation, Group Alam Terbuka. I really appreciate how you explained the material. For the PowerPoint presentation, maybe the points that seem a bit too crowded could be moved to another slide to avoid overcrowding on one slide. Thank you.

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thanks to the grup alam terbuka, the explanation is quite clear but maybe there are some parts that are closed so it's not clear to read.

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Thank you so much to the presenter for the explanation. That was a well-done performance but you need to make sure the ppt is in a "point". You need to avoid using long paragraph in your performance and don't just read the text on the ppt but explain it with your own sentences

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Group perubahan don't have to changes anything but maybe you just need to improve the PPT and the intonation.

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I will answer fadhil's question, usually before the printing process, there will be a checking process. so to minimize the possibility of errors.

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Well... Group menantu idaman has lot of things to explain so I really appreciate it. The I love the way of the third speaker explain the material. Maybe one thing that disturbed me was the point is too much in one slide

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thank you for the explanation, I think the delivery of the material is quite clear and easy to understand.

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Thank you for the explanation on "Writing for Print Journalism", Group Pecinta Mancing. You explained it well, making the audience understand the material clearly. For the suggestion, before recording make sure that the voice or the network are in good condition. And last, let's remind all members to inform if any friend encounters issues with their voice or network. Thank you.

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Thank you for the longest explanation, Group Menantu Idaman. The presentation was delivered clearly, making it easy for the audience to understand. However, what made it little uncomfortable was that certain slides had too many points/paragraphs. Too crowd. It would be better to share them to another slides. Thank you.

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thank you for group presentation, I want to ask the member : in ur opinion, is there any news that doesn't use an interved pyramid structure? if there is, why does this happen?

thank you

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thank you for the presentation of the pecinta mancing group, the explanation delivered is clear and can be understood. besides that the ppt presented is interesting, concise and clear.

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thank u for the presentation, I want to ask about What happens if one of the six characteristics of the web is forgotten by journalists, can the news still be published on the web? And is there an impact on readers?

thank you

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thank you for the presentation of the Menantu Idaman group. this is a very clear and very detailed explanation that makes the reader feel understood with the language used is also clear. and maybe for 1 hour for some people it is too long.

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This presentation is nice, but I have some gripe with this presentation. The first one is the PPT design. some of the text got covered up by the Zoom. You can just avoid that by moving the text into left-hand side so the Zoom won't cover up the text. Thank you for the materials, Alam Terbuka Group.

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Answering Rija Anggelia Putri's Question - Rika Sri Yulianda Putri

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Answering Rija Anggelia Putri's Question - Rika Sri Yulianda Putri

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If a journalist forgets about one of the six characteristics of the web, they can still publish news online, but it may have consequences. For instance, news might not be well-received if it doesn't prioritize speed in delivering information or if it doesn't optimize the user experience on mobile devices. So, it's crucial for journalists to consider all these characteristics to provide the best reader experience and meet audience expectations in the digital news landscape.

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Thank you for explaining it well, Alam terbuka group. But I have a suggestion for you as the presenters, you can use a larger font in the next time, so it can be read clearly for us as a viewer. thankyou!!

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Thank to Group Alam Terbuka for your presentation! I really appreciate your effort to make this good video. But I found some lack of the presentation that is lack of audio, this can be your reflection to check your good connection or good condition of the device so that we all can hear the presentation clearly.

(Risma Pertiwi, 21018143)

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Thankyou pencinta mancing for ur great presentation. But I've a question to you, my question is "what are some strategies for effective fact-checking and attribution in print journalism?" Thankyou!

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Hi Group Pecinta Mancing! Thank you for your explanation. First, I really like the template of the power point and your explanation that is easy to follow.

I have one questions, do you have any tips to avoid the error when we writing the news? Especially the typos.

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Thank you Group Perubahan for your presentation. I have one question, based on group's understanding, what is the biggest characteristics that makes Web News different with previous material that is Print News? Because both of them are written.

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Thankyou for ur great presentation, group perubahan!!

Here, i've a question for ur group. "How can a writer effectively use headings, subheadings, and bullet points to improve readability on a webpage?"

that's all..

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Answering Risma's Question- Lidya Fransisca

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Answering Risma's Question- Lidya Fransisca

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Web news is faster and easy to access. It can be shared worldwide right after published, so breaking news reaches so many people instantly. Web news includes things like videos, interactive pictures, and links to other articles, making it more interesting for readers. These multimedia features are hard to do in printed media.

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Thank you for the explanation Menantu Idaman Group. That is one long presentation. I have a question for this presentation. What do you guys think about paid documentary? What are the pros and cons of paid documentary compared to the free one?

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Haloo guys, thank you for your explanation for this material. I really appreciate your work and maybe just a small improvement in ppt like long paragraph in ppt. In other hand, I love your ppt template, so cute...

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Great presentation Perubahan group. The presentation even includes the example of the web journalism. I have a question for you guys. What do you think about paid subscription in web journalism? Is it a good thing or a bad thing? Thank you.

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Haloo, thanks for the explanation about the material. All of you are trying to explain the material and did a great job. Although in some parts, I was a bit bothered by technical issues that made problem for presenter's voice.

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Hallo, elzi! Thank you and sorry if our presentation video is too long, it's not because it's long-winded, but this material is quite long and we are trying to explain in detail the contents of the book hehehe. But, thank you very much for the comment. Maybe I can explain the essence of this material again....

In short or the essence of our explanation, when writing for broadcast journalism, remember that you are telling a story by ear. Keep it clear and concise: short sentences, active voice, and strong verbs. Write conversationally, like you're talking to a friend. Make sure it flows naturally by reading it out loud. Adjust the length to the duration of the broadcast because we are bound by time. If there are visuals such as videos or images, the script we use must complement these things, not repeat them. Grab attention from the start and use transitions to guide the listener. and what is no less important is reporting the facts objectively and quickly. That's the point, hope u can understanding it well.. thank you!!

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Answering Athif's question- Lidya Fransisca Br Gultom

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Answering Athif's question- Lidya Fransisca Br Gultom

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In my opinion paid subscriptions can be a really good point for news websites because it helps to keep quality of journalism. when regular ads are not making much money. This allows news sites to spend time and resources on important stories, like investigative reports and deeper analysis. It also can be a way for us as reader to appreciate journalist and media hardwork.

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Great job presentation, Pecinta Mancing group! Aside from the several sound issues, I like this presentation. The presenter are clear and concise at explaining the presentation. Thank you for the presentation.

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Thank you for the group alam terbuka. All of you did a great job for explaining the material. I have a question about this topic. I want to know in what ways does news writing differ from other forms of writing, like creative or academic writing?

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I'm Sania Puspita Sari (21018031) from group ilmu padi . Thank you to group menantu idaman for providing a very interesting and also easy to understand presentation on Basic News Writing. the points are explained concisely and clearly. Thank you.......

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I'm Sania Puspita Sari (21018031) from the group ilmu padi. First of all, I would like to thank the group pecinta mancing. Here I want to give advice, before starting an online presentation, check first whether the network is good or not, because what I heard from the presentation group was a little intermittent and unclear. Thanks you

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Hallo bang Athif, thank you for the question. I want to try to explain.

Paid documentaries and free documentaries each have their advantages and disadvantages. Paid documentaries, often found on streaming services, tend to have higher production value, with better filming and editing. They may also cover more niche topics or have exclusive interviews. However, the cost can be a barrier for some viewers. Free documentaries, on the other hand, are widely available through libraries, public television, or even YouTube. They can be a great way to explore new interests without spending money. However, free documentaries may have lower production quality or be funded by organizations with an agenda, potentially influencing the content.

That's all, thank you!

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thank you for the presentation, but in my opinion your video is quiet long, i think it is better to make it shorter