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Eric said my essay plan is shaping up to be a very interesting first draft. He thought my thesis is very concise and draft plan is very well-structured. Meanwhile, he reminded me don't forget to reference both of the core texis.

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Eric checked the whole essay for me, and he was very satisfied with my first paragraph and praised my thesis, but he said that my essay was a bit obscure and that I should use some simple sentences and words. At the end, I asked him if my last reference was formatted accurately, and he took it down and said he would look it up for me. (kind teacher!)

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Eric double-checked the problem he had pointed out last time in the second tutorial, and I realized that I had forgotten the changes quoted in the article, and he helped me make the changes again. In the second revision, I used as simple sentences and words as possible, and expanded the paragraphs of the company examples. At the end, we looked up the Havard citations together, and Eric personally helped me revise the reference I asked him for the last time.