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I’ve done my intro my summary and my intro to my rhetorical analysis. I need to work on my first and second body paragraphs and start on my third

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I’ve done my rough draft of 6 paragraphs. I just need to edit it and add a bit more .

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1. I drafted my introduction, summary, intro of rhetorical analysis and two body paragraphs.

2. I still need to finish my third body paragraph

3. My writing goal is to finish my third body paragraph during this class

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I have written my six paragraphs, but I want to edit a portion of my summary and rhetorical analysis paragraphs.

Done today: With Julian, we workshopped our essays, I explained and wrote down some of the critiques I had with his writing. I almost read through his draft twice, and gave possible ways to rewrite some of his paragraphs. Also gave feedback on how to redo his intro, to perform more. He gave me some critiques on how to fix my choppy writing.

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Ive done my summary, intro to rhetorical analysis and my first body paragraph. I still need to finish my last two body paragraphs and my intro. My writing goal today is to finish my last to body paragraph in one class period to leave more time to focus on my intro

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I've done my rough draft of the 6 paragraphs. I just need to edit it.

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I've done my intro and my 1st body paragraph I'm working on my other body paragraphs now. I plan to at least finish my second body paragraph and hopefully get started on my third one.

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I have drafted all of my introduction, summary and beginning of my rhetorical analysis. My goal this class is to finish the rest of my essay today.

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I have done my Intro and my summary of my film, also my intro to my rhetorical analysis. I still need to finish my body paragraphs. My goal is to finish at least the main ideas of my body paragraphs.

At the end class I have finished with getting my main ideas for each paragraphs to finish faster when working on it at home for the Rhetorical Analysis part of the rough draft also finished 1 more paragraph.

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I'm done with the rough draft, just going to look over it as I haven't yet

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1. i completed my introduction, summary of the text, and the introduction to my rhetorical analysis.

2. i need to finish my body paragraphs.

3. today i will jot down all of the info i want to include in my body paragraphs and then add in more emotion to make it sound better.

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I have completed all of my 6 paragraphs. I just need to edit both my introductions. my goal for this class period is to finish editing my introductions.

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I have my basic rough draft done with minimal edits in an outline. I need to transfer my work into an essay template and I hope to complete more edits and finalize my rough draft throughout this period.

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I have finished my Rhetorical Analysis intro and summary, and i want to start on my body paragraphs

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I have done my introduction. I need to finish my intro of rhetorical analysis and start my body paragraphs.

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I came to class with my draft finished, but I knew I had to make a lot of edits for it to make sense. So I did a workshop with Brenda and she gave me a new perspective on my essay and where I need improvement. As well as the parts that don't make sense coming from somebody that didn't watch the same movie as me.

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So far I've completed my introduction, summary, intro of rhetorical analysis, 1st body paragraph and 2nd body paragraph. I am currently working on my 3rd body paragraph. My goal is to finish the last paragraph, read over what I have so far and make some changes.