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Alek,
The descriptive writing here is spot on. You have definitely added to the journal feel. However, you are missing a citation, and this journal could use a bit more editing and use of variety. Every entry is a descipritive one, the assignment asked for more. Where is your citation?
3/4

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I have just got to Tokyo  and it’s very flashy like it has the most recent technology. But I first need to get an uber or a taxi whatever they call it I need one and fast because I’m going to be late for the concert. Luckily I have got to the concert on time and It is very loud and a bunch of japanese people are surrounding and I think I’m the Only american In this place. But Now that It’s done now I can get on a long plane flight back home.

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I left Akita about 5 hours ago and  for the next week I’m going to explore around and get some souvenirs but that isn't going to be the easiest thing to do but I eventually got one and it is a fat guy ha . But it is funny because it is a dude that is a black belt but anyway I will need to get ready to leave to go to Tokyo for a Japanese concert.

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I have just drove from Akita to Sendai and it is a little more flashy than Akita but it is surprisingly more clean on the streets compared to all the roads coming to this city. But first I needed a place to stay since it was already sunset but luckily I already called someone to spend the night with.

So I have just got up from the best night of sleep in this city so far and I feel like I have a bunch more power and that good .  And I have learned how to spell my name in Japanese アレック.

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Week two

I have been in akita for two weeks and I have learned some new recipes and I’m going to try them out for dinner. So I just tried it out and it was really good and I was proud of doing even though my kitchen is very messy. But after going to shop for all the ingredients there were some really weird vegetables but they were the best part of the whole dinner.  And I have learned some new words like dinner and food they ere hard to

pronounce but I know them now.

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I have just  arrived in the city of Akita. But the plane ride here was very expensive at 2,000 dollars . I’m not sure if it was the best investment of my money but it is the coolest place I've been in long time with my life bing in a cubicle.  But when you think about it it is a good investment of money for being in japan with all these cool electronics but I’m in Akita and it very  natural and peaceful calm place to relax.