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I am dedicated to studying medicine  because I strongly believe that it is the most meaningful industry. In the medical system, doctors play an important role to cure and have the front-line communication with patients. I have always wanted to work in this noble profession because I have the right concern and skill sets to address human health problems with utmost gravity;  I possess a unique combination of high emotional quotient . Becoming a doctor has always been a dream of mine and I worked hard to make it happen.Therefore, I am sincerely looking for an opportunity to further my study in the field to become a professionally-recognized doctor.

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My determination to pursue a career in Journalism field was first inspired by a sentence I saw on a book: 不看新聞使你和時代脫節 看了新聞使你和真相脫節. I felt heart-wrenching seeing this sad-but-true saying but it also drives me to study Journalism as I wish to demonstrate the most realistic and accurate news to the public, using a balanced communication of precise facts, diverse views and creative works.
I urge to defend truth as it should be our city’s virtue and by all means should be approached through free, responsible and effective mechanisms. I desire to utilise my limited power to make the slightest difference to our news system nowadays.

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I sincerely believe that the beginning of University life indicates the start of a chapter in my life, undoubtedly at the same time, it’s my dream. Self-studying of clinical pharmacy, microbiology and anatomy not only does helped me to acquire more knowledge related to medicine and microorganism, but also, to realize the boomed demands for new medicines around the globe. Dicloxacillin, chloramphenicol, vancomycin, doxycycline, these medicines would become less efficacious in terms of combating bacteria-causing diseases by time, hence, I am dedicated and enthusiastic to participate in the invention and synthesis of new organic medicines with regards to the urge for new medication, since then, Biomedical Science would doubtlessly be the ideal subject for me to select.

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Everyone has their own dream to be their aim. For me, I would like to talk about my dream——civil engineering. I show my great curiosity in how infrastructure like bridges,houses,railway stations are built. I know that seeking a fine, suitable land for building is not easy. That is why we need to plan for our buidlings. I am interested in everything in my life. For example , I would like to know more about how to develop our modern lives. Besides know about house building palnning, I like playing guitars and I am always willing to acquire knowledge about computer literacy. I could make myself a well-rounded person, which would be helpful and beneficial to my life and career.

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I have been studying Information and Communication Technology in secondary school for 3 years, I find that I have cultivated a fond interest in programming and internet technologies. I noctice that Internet and Multimedia Technologies Programme is a good programme for me to learn more about internet technologies since it just learn basis of it in the ICT lessons. Also, this programme includes Computer Game Development Project for students that I am interested in it. Therefore I hope to study Internet and Multimedia Technologies in your esteemed university.

BP1:Problem-solving skills
R:many problems will appear when developing a game and need to solve them
E:ICT SBA making a mini game. Many problems faced. I find the cause              of problems quickly and solve them
BP2:Strong IT Skill
R:need to learn lots of need things about IT, this help me more easy to follow
E:Join IT competition, let robot walk follow black lines, know how to let the robot move quickly

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Since I was born, the commercial always sounds cool to me because the merchants always keep a look like wearing sun glasses, tidy suits, that is someone I really want to be in the future. When I grew up, I tried top know what is 'business' actually like. And , I found that it is not as a piece of cake as I imagine. I got many new knowledge first in my mind ---for example--the strategy of marketing, skills to treat customers, division of labour between companies. Looking at these, I am sure what I want to be for the remaining years. I want to meet a myriad of customers to sell them my plans, telling the others about my innoative ideas; I want to coorperate and compete with other companies so as to creat a fair and peace environment for business; I also want to have my own market, serving the ones who support me. Therefore, I am very interested in  BBAXX??/

PT1: Having good personality(Leadership, communication skills)
R1:  Would be useful for me to catch on  the study
E1: Have been the chairperson of Student Association, Venture Scout, Debate Club

PT2: Having a great interest on business (always pay attention to the commercail news)
R1:  Treat as self-study in order to prepare for this programme
E1:  Reading SCMP (commercial part) every day

PT3: Well cognition to the programme
R1:  Already pay attention to this programme since F4
E1:  Already read the course content and it is perfect for me

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After studying a range of subjects, especially BAFS and Economics, in my senior secondary school, I find that I gradually develop an interest in further exploring business-related subjects. How can a department meet the organizational goals within a limited time in reality? How can an accountant adjust the incorrect entry in some special cases in reality without violating the accounting principles? How can a company manage the subordinates effectively, and at the same time, maintain a good relationship with them?  Seemingly, I am fond of studying business, such as management, accountancy and finance. With my great dedication and determination, I am confident that I am more than willing to explore this field in the future and strive for excellence all the time.

1st:      fond of business and experienced in basic accounting and management

took LCCI Book-keeping and Accounting level 2 exam ( in 11/2017)
the secretary of HKAYP club
study BAFS(Account) in senior secondary school

experienced in basic accounting and business concept

2nd:      collaborative problem solving
one of the 96th Silver Award Recipients in THE HONG KONG AWARD FOR YOUNG PEOPLE(香港青年獎勵計劃)
when assessing for the was Silver Award ,I was nominated by a hiking tutor to be the leader of my team when evaluating the Expeditions Section

teamwork,establish and maintain shared understanding and team organisation,make timely decision and take appropriate action
3rd:        communication skills
chairman of Movie Club
organised and led  the inter-house movie songs karaoke competition before
held in covered playground,cooperate with a number of groups,such as the participants,judges,sound control panel, committee members etc.
joined Hong Kong Creative PR Competition before
active listening,assertive and non-verbal communication

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Learning in classroom is not the only way for learning; I believe learning through extra-curricular activities makes me learn much more. I joined the school Robotics Team since I was Form 2. In Form 1, I was already fascinated by the robots built by higher form students. I studied the mechanisms in the robot when I had time. I also read different programming books in order to understand the programs written by higher form students. Therefore, when the team coach invited me to join the team when I was in form 2, I accept the invitation immediately.

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I am dedicated to studying medicine  because I strongly believe that it is the most meaningful industry. In the medical system, doctors play an important role to cure and have the front-line communication with patients. Therefore, I am sincerely looking for an opportunity to further my study in the field to become a professionally-recognized doctor.

B1:  the work gives me huge sense of satisfaction
I understand that being a nurse would not lead to enormous wealth but I am still willing to take that challenge. Helping in medical tasks, which many may feel boring or even disgusting, would bring me huge sense of satisfaction because these duties are important to ensure the smooth operation in the system

B2: I am suitable for this subject as i am confident to handle enormous workload

B3: excellent communication skill

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I love raising questions.How can we make use of the knowledge in physics as well as mathmatics that we have learned in real life?What is essential for a engineer to consider when building a safe buliding?What is the principle behind the machines that we use every day?Virtually,I am literally have a deep interest in finding the answers for above question.Therefore,I am interested in Engineering .I convinced that my passion on studing engineering will be benefical for me to become a professional engineer in furture..

(2) point:i have good analysis and mathmatics ability.
E.g.:Representing the school to join SSMSC physics competition.Always be one of the top 5 students in school maths exam.
(3) point:i am a creative person that always give special ideas on things.
E.g.As a chairman of maths club,always holding different interesting activities.(sudoku competition,maths competition,matching games)
(4)point:i have good practice ability and adept in generalizing the regular pattern of things from practice.
Eg.:phy,chem SBA experiment,doing experiment in phy and chem lesson

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I describe myself as a person who likes analysis and thinking, and is keen on pursuing and researching new things. After years of learning, I realized that I have a strong interest in computer science, and that I was familiar with the skills of using computers to collect data and resolve everyday problems. On the other hand, I hope to study the computer science and technology in University

and has a deeper learning in this field.

BP1:  love using computers resolve problems and help others

R: familiar with the skills of using computers to do research

E: Participated in the 8th Healthy Information Student Ambassadors Scheme, being the vice chairman of Computer Club in school , being the IT prefect for 2 years

BP2: Keen on analysis and thinking
R: Helps broaden my horizon
E: Study ICT for 3 years, familiar with programming, self-learning by reading IT books (eg. Pascal program, C++ program)

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I believe that engineering is one of the most meaningful sectors in our life since it applies our knowledge to innovate different areas. I am so desire to have a deep understanding of engineering. Thus, I am particularly keen on engineering. Since then, I have made every effort and strived for excellence to strengthen my talent in this regard persistently. As a result, I have developed my potential and essential qualities for my future academic pursuit.

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P: good leadership skills & IT skills

R: able to guide students & disseminate valuable messages

E: iTe Leader Programme

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P: good logical thinking

R: I have acquired knowledge on science subjects which require lots of logical thinking

E: Awards of public science competition

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In those years of secondary school life, it helps me to create my personality. By joining different programs, my life is enriched, learning different kinds of essential skills. And now, I am interested in science and mathematics. It is believed that those can help me to confront the obstacles of my future.

communication skill
project,work together,making important decision
smoke-free youth ambassador--holding stall game design games,buying prizes

able to get along with others
meet different people,classmates. important to have good social network
AYP --work with strangers,many times three day two night camping hiking running together

decisive
sometimes work alone ,able to to making some decision yourself
rogaine --making a plan to run  in 6 hrs  ,sometimes have to make up you mind immediately

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“The secret to living the life of your dreams is to start living the life of your dreams today, in every little way you possibly can” Mike Dooley – the renowned American author once said. I sincerely believed that the beginning of University life indicates the start of a chapter in my life, undoubtedly at the same time, it’s my dream. Apart from 4 core subjects, I’ve picked Physics, Chemistry and Biology as my 3 electives, as not only because I am enthusiastic in studies of topics related to science but also eager to help peoples in need, moreover, I am proud and confident with my ability to analysis and to think rationally and logically, over 3 years of hard working, I’ve picked up the skills to handle with statistics and to derive information mathematically, and carry out investigation to discover varied methods in order to solve problems, hence, I am wholeheartedly in great interest of applying for programmes related to Science and Social Work.

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Having observed the rapid emergence of diverse diseases around the globe throughout my secondary school life, I have always been wondering: why the pathogens can bring tremendous casualties to a country? How did the scientists achieve the breakthrough and invent the cure? I believe I have cultivated a fond interest in biology and medicine, therefore I am eager to take the Biomedical Science Programme in your esteemed university.

Programmes applying for: biomedical science/ biology/ cell& molecular biology
Body para1, P: analytical skills & logical thinking
R: In process of synthesizing and designing medical drugs,
need to find alternative solutions to the same problem
E: Shanghai high skl sci camp, required to design & carry out exp on conditional reflex using mice,
encountered difficulties as our procedures wont reach our goal,
how we solved it
Body para2, P: ability to research
R: In biology, always tons of questions abt complex human/animal structure
research essential for conducting grp project and exploring vast knowledge abt cell and body
E: TW student ambassador study tour to UK
research - helped reach our goal more easily
Body para3, P: leadership skills, communication skills, teamwork
R: team work essential in biology studies, work as a team to conduct experiment
E: Head Prefect

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Solving question is challenging and full of satisfaction. Throughout my secondary school life, I have cultivated a fond interest in ICT. Programming can provide me chances for coping with challenges and this has always fascinated me. What’s more, climate and weather influence our life at any time. Lately, numerous news about natural disasters were widely reported through every mass media, which raise my awareness of these disasters and being interested in Earth Science. To confront with climate change and extreme weather or research for the Earth’s system constitutes, I'm looking forward to focus on Earth System Science and also Computer Science in much more depth in university.

Para2:P-I have a strong IT skills and I am suitable for studying Computer Science

R-This can help me to catch up the knowledge of Computer Science easily

E-I was given chances to hold lots of activity about technology when I was the vice-chairman of Computer Club

Para3:P-I have a good problem-solving skills

R-It is essential for coping with numerous problems while I am writing programs and even studying Computer Science

E-I had got high distinction in ICAS (Maths in English) and credit in SSMSC (Physics)

Para4:P-I am good at making observation which helps to study Computer Science and Earth System Science

R-1)This can help me to observe what functions I should improve or add in the programs

2)This can let me know more about the Earth system easier through my observations

E-I was able to make some observations through doing some experiments in Physics project for learning deeper about a new physics’ tropic.

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Dear sir/madam:

I am applying for biology studies in CUHK.For me,biology studies is a really captivating program.By delving into the mechanisms of living things,I have found a lot of pleasure which fascinating me.Therefore,I would like to devote to studies of biology in my university life.

P I manage to develope good teamwork with others which fits in with
bio studies having a large dose of group project

R I have played a vital role in scouts
E recieved prizes like Chief scouts awards,
communicate with teamates to plan and stage event like course about scouts'skills
so I am confident to collaborate with other in group projects

P I have participated in several biology field studies before

R Nominated by my biology teacher,I received an opportunity to study biology in a different way.

Being fond of biology,I did my utmost in these programs and it benefits me a lot.

E Marine Biology program held by CUHK

P I have good leadship skills

R Joining extra curricular activities

to guide groupmates to finish the task effectively

E vice-chairman of Student Assoiation

leading SA member to accomplish task like staging inter-class basketball match

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As an independent and resonsible student,i have a dream to study chinese in the university.The whys are wherefores behind this dream is I already have a great interest in chinese culture when I was small.It has an enchanting spell on me .With the great interest in Chinese, I join plenty of programs and activities after school,for instance,chinese debate team ,the tour about the culture in Bejing.All these program can let me absorb more knowledge about chinese and enable me to stand out from others.

Pt1 I am rich in the knowledge of chinese.
R:I read a lot of books about chinese culture and I have a great interest about it.
E:I usually read those books when I am free. Furthermore, I have joined the tour about the culture in bejing for knowing more about chinese.

Pt2: l have the skill of researching, organizing.
R:It enables me to elucidate my standpoint through utilizing rhetorical eloquence. It teaches me the skills of researching, organizing, and presenting information in a compelling fashion.
E:I have joined debate team for 3 years and being a team leader when I was form 5.

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I always feel passionate in the study of English. It has always been an extraordinary joy for me to study English literature since I was a primary student. I find English intriguing by the introduction of the English literature given by my English teacher. Therefore, I am eager for the opportunity to study English Study in university. Since it would allow me to deepen my knowledge in English and explore the colossal world of English.

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Throughout my secondary school life, I have always been wondering: why is DNA twisted? How are fingerprints formed? How can I help the people who suffering disease? Therefore, I am confident that I have cultivated a fond interest in biology/social work. In order to pursue my dream, I am eager to study in university to seek the advanced study in your esteemed university to enrich myself, so that I can serve the society in the future.

1.      P: Good communication skill/leadership skills

R: know how to cooperate with other/how to organize activities

Play a crucial role at school

Tackle problems with teammates

Team work, vital in biology/social work

E: Chairperson of ayp/vice-chairperson of F.6 affairs committee/scouts/consultative committee

2.      P: knowledge in biology /science

R: finding alternative solutions to the same problems

Observation skill

E: Cu marine biology camp/ shanghai skl science camp(exp)/i have taken part in summer job-shadowing program in United Christian hospital which can help the elderly in the occupational therapy department.I got a chance to take care others and improved my knowledge in medical care

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Studying in university is undoubtedly my most important target recently as I am very eager to learn knowledge more thoroughly, especially in mathematics and science aspect. During the 6-year secondary studies, I have obtained some novice knowledge of science, and that aroused my interest in exploring the laws in the natural world: the way of human beings observing, understanding, and describing the world.

1. do self-learning in advanced maths (eg) > great interest in maths
2. high-distinction in maths , physics and chemistry in SSMSC 2017>reflects adequate ability in learning advanced knowledges
3. entered final in HKMO 2017 >experienced learning a large variety of aspects in maths (eg)

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I have been interested in biology starting from form four. Medicine has always fascinated me for which it is a sufficient way to utilize my biological knowledge to help people. The thankful and sincere smiles I got are not only the most treasurable things in the world, but also the forces that encourage me to serve the others. The reasons why I think suits this program are three-fold. I truly believe with my personalities, I would be suitable to attend this program.

Interested program : Medic

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Point 1: Interested and have potential in biology
- Always get high marks in exams
- Get Distinction in Secondary School Mathematics and Science Competition in 2017
- Especially interested in animals section(diseases and culprits)
- Want to utilize the knowledge learnt in biology to help people

Point 2: Love doing services
- Senior Service Leader in Red Cross
- External voluntary work (e.g. Flag Day, Health check in community for elderly, Blood donation, Mentally Handicapped school visit)
- Internal service (e.g. Head Prefect, Form 6 Affairs committee, Big Brother and Big Sister Program)

Point 3: Have been learning medical service knowledge to prepare for the program
- Saint John First Aid Experience
- First Aid Course in Red Cross(Passed)
- Treatment of dieseases(e.g. Rickets & calcium and vitamin D, Nightblindness & vitamin A, bacteria & penicillin, principal of vaccination)

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I am a responsible and perseverance secondary student seeking the advanced study in your esteemed University. I am eager to take the _____ Studies which is indispensable to my career and could benefit my whole life . The reasons are as follow.

P: a perseverance student

R: never give up easily

E: enrol in AYP silver award. Several students quit

during the activity but I never show a sign of

giving up and finish the journey at length

P: possess the ability to be a leader

R: have the experience of being a leader

E: chairman of chess club and vice-chairman of

Astrounmany club

P: have a clear mind

R: have a talent for logical thinking

E: study and have a flair for Phy Chem M2 (earn a high distinction in Icas Mathematics)

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I have been studying Mathematics Extended Part Module 2(Algebra and Calculus) in secondary school for 3 years, I find it fascinating. In particular, I notice that Insurance, Financial and Actuarial Analysis is a good programme for me to utilize my problem-solving skill and analytical skills learnt in M2 for real life. This programme also includes the studies of risk and probability that I am interested in. Therefore, I am looking forward to focusing on Insurance, Financial and Actuarial Analysis in much more depth in university. With the following abilities, I am confident that I can get a good result in this programme.

1.      P: Good problem-solving skillR: Insurance, Financial and Actuarial Analysis is not a easy programme, it involves a lot of difficult problems about the estimation of risk and probability, so we need good problem-solving skill.E: When being Smoke-free Youth Ambassador, House Vice Chairman, and Science Club Committee member, I had to design some activities for schoolmates with limited money and other resources. The school has rejected our appalments about the activies for many times with many different reasons, and after that I use my problem-solving skill to think about some alternative activities.2.      P: good analytical skillsR: the estimations of risk and probability are based on myriad of data, good analytical skill is much-needed for selecting useful information from massive data in Insurance, Financial and Actuarial Analysis.E: In a special study in secondary school, I do a research regarding the consequences of the abuse of smartphone, conducting a questionnaire survey, and selecting and analyzing the useful data to conclude that the consequences of abuse of smartphone can be classified as the consequences to our health, and the consequences to our relationship with others.

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Entering university definitely is one of my dream since I can enrich myself and learn more in the university. And studying in university can let me learn the subject in which I am interested more detail and specific.

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I dreamed to be a teacher since I was small. As time goes by, the more I konw about how great teachers are, the firmer belief that I want to be a teacher is. Therefore, I have strived my best to equip myself with knowledge and related qualities. Also, throughout my secondary school life, I have cultivated a fond interest in science and mathematics. Why metals can conduct electricity while plastic cannot? How do the power stations generate electricity? I have better understanding to the world that I am living since I have studied science and mathematics.

Education
- able to solve problem with different ways
← studying physics and M2
Same question, plenty of way to solve, depends on your need
※ teachers hv to help different children depend on their personality
- good communication skill
← being English Ambassador for 3 yrs
← being the member of Debate Team since F3
※ can communicate and talk with students to help them

Science
- love challenging myself & interested in mathematics
← Joined a lot of mathematics competitions
※ want to hv further study in mathematics as there is no ending in mathematics
- love learning and discovering new things
← being a member of Science Club
← Joined Chinese high school science camp
※ Science aims to discover the pattern of how the world is working and the unknown

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Everyone had a dream when they were in childhood. For me, I wanted to become a nurse when I was a little kid. Even at this moment, a 17-year-old girl, my dream doesn’t change. Chasing my dream, I study Biology while I am studying form four to form six so that I am able to have a higher priority to enter the nursing school and become a professional, enthusiastic and caring nurse.

#1

P:caring and helpful nurse

R:the duty of a nurse: take care patients , being the second hand of doctor

E:Joined red cross nursing care experiential training, realize more jobs of being a nurse eg. distribution of medicine

#2

P:orgainsed person

R: nurse have to record the information of patients. No mistake is allowed

E:being a chairlady of pet pet club. I was nominated by my teacher. I have to organize many activities successfully.

#3

P:good at communication

R:communicate with different kind of patients. Nowadays, many mainlanders come to Hong Kong , use a suitable language to communicate with them

E:Had an exam before ---putonghua proficiency test level2B---communicate with others fluently.

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Being a studious and responsible secondary school graduate, I am seeking the advanced study in your esteemed university. With my family background and growth experiences, I have developed rich interest in Chinese Medicine and the regions of Environmental-friendly. I am eager to study in University to explore the professional knowledge, and to advance myself so I can help more people and serve the society in the future.
1st
extrovered: join numbers of programma eg. intership in clinci(yan chai) +hk and Fujian exchange.  √communication skills   √ finish  myriad of  tasks
2nd
comprehensive:champion of hk(buliding design competition)+maths competiton+sports    √time management   √ keep trying new things  √multi-tasking
3rd
competent and willing to serve: house  vice chaptain + chairmen of environmental-friendly  ambassador  √organise some ativities ,lightened teachers workload ,  √provide a better school live for schoolmates.

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I have a dream. Being a professional nurse is my dream since I was a form three kids. My personality is perfectly fitted to the working characteristics of nurse. I determine to study in nursing to make a well use of these personality in a way to contribute the society.

BP1

P multitasking ppl

R nurse needs to handle many task at the same time e.g. Listen to doctor's order, take care of patient I am the Vice-president (External Affairs) always organise activities

E handle many task simultaneously eg being a backstage director in the school Christmas show control ppl when come to the stage, drama, not to overrun etc
BP2

P deliberate

R nurse shd be error-free and I may think twice before I do it

E 中六畢業籌位會 plan the graduation dinner,ceremony etc no error is allowed buz bad images will leave to the ts/ principal rehearsal many times, ensure the process is fluent

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Do you know why typhoon can cause greater damage to Hong Kong if it comes to the west of Hong Kong instead of the east of Hong Kong ? Can you imagine how a typhoon forms ? When I first saw the typhoon from a satellite photo , I was fascinated and inspired about the nature , and meteorology has become my favorite topic to learn. Therefore , to pursue my interest , Applied Physics Programme in your esteemed university can provide a great opportunity for me to learn about the meteorology . I am eager to take this programme not only to enrich my knowledge , but also to achieve my dream---working in the Hong Kong Observatory.

body1
good at analysis

reason
students will do a lot of experiments to find out the results and to draw out the concludion

example
(physics group project about graviation)

body 2
good at critical thinking

reason
students need to prove something right or wrong by using physics concepts
example
(visiting Shing Shun power station, showing how the generator works by using Len's Law)

body 3
good at math

reason
physics contains a lot of equations and calculations

example ( no idea)

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When I was very little,I love drawing and creating things. And now ,I am interested in how the things are created from nothing,especially the buildings. How could numerous of people live in mixture of concrete and steel without breaking even facing typhoon? How could the houses made by merely wood and have various of constructions and designs ? I am keen to think about these questions and ,most significantly ,I want to become one of the designer. I have chosen physics and M2 as my elective subjects because I know the knowledge is necessary to understand the program.That`s why I am interested in Architecture and civil engineering .

mind map

BP1:
P: interested in designing things by using pen and computer program&likely to spend time on it
R: i would be satisfied
E:I pick dt subject in F.2, enjoy learning design program. Also, I have joined a competition about green building

BP2:
P: interested in math&phy
R: learning these subject allow me to think every is possible,
E:...

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I have been studying Physics and Chemistry for three years, but how can we apply the concepts and knowledge in real life?
When I am choosing programs for my future university life, maybe interest comes first in general, however after I have broken a bone in my leg, I finally got the answer of it, lending hands to others come up in my mind when I saw the program----Physiotherapy.
The knowledge of Physiotherapy helps me a lot, what treatment should we take after getting hurt matters, as each treatment is unique to specific area in our body.
Therefore, I am eagar to take the Physiotherapy Degree Program in your esteemed university.

UPDATED MINDMAP
Mindmap
2nd para the importance of physiotherapy after getting hurt(personal experience)/Why this program is fascinating to me.

3rd para Application of physiotherapy
Further study after university

Working in hospital

Lend hand to people who get hurt along the street before ambulance came.

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I have always found a career in business enchanting: enhancing human development, lending a helping hand to company evolvement. These are the crucial elements in our daily routine. It is my ambition to take part in a company to help maximize its profit using my knowledge. Having gained some background knowledge about marketing and management through studying BAFS and Economics in my secondary education, I am amazed by how a business runs and how to maintain it. Indeed, I am so eager to expand my business knowledge that I aspire to further my studies in this field at university and pursue a related career afterwards.

I have always found a career in business enchanting: enhancing human development, boosting world trading, lending a helping hand to company evolvement. These are the crucial elements in our daily routine. It is my ambition to take part in a company to help maximize its profit by using my knowledge. Having gained some background knowledge about marketing, management and human resources through studying BAFS and Economics in my senior secondary education, I am amazed by how a business runs and how different departments play a role to maintain a business. Indeed, I am so eager to expand my business knowledge that I aspire to further my studies in this field at university and pursue a related career in the future.

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I have always found a career in business enchanting: enhancing human development, lending a helping hand to company evolvement. These are the crucial elements in our daily routine. It is my ambition to take part in a company to help maximize its profit using my knowledge. Having gained some background knowledge about marketing and management through studying BAFS and Economics in my secondary education, I am amazed by how a business runs and how to maintain it. Indeed, I am so eager to expand my business knowledge that I aspire to further my studies in this field at university and pursue a related career afterwards.

BP1: -leadership

R:-lead your team to help the company

E: -Chairperson of Art Club (-organize different club’s activities

-gather and listen different committees’ idea)

-Prefect Leader (lead my teammates to solve different problems and maintain good order in school)

BP2: -interpersonal skill

R:-always need to socialize with different people in business

E:-Big brother and sister (to communicate with Form1 students and help them cope with academic and social difficulties)

-Music Club committee and Home Economics Club committee

(-give out the idea and listen others’ opinions to generate good idea by discussing with others

-help members during clubs’ activities)

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I evaluate myself as a meticulous and responsible student. I am keen on lending a helping hand to others. Therefore, studying in science-and-medical-related program has long been my aspiration, so that I could utilize my interest and proficiency in science and help others get rid of sickness. With comprehensive extra-curricular experience, I am confident that I am equipped to learn more in the university.

Mind Map - Paragraph 3:

P: responsible

R: be a leader, responsible for leading event precisely

E: RC.SA