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For today's tutorial, you are required to write a paragraph of at least 80 words in order to be marked as present. The topic is "Which is more important - personality or wealthiness? Why?".
Your paragraph has to consist:
- a topic sentence
- at least 3 supporting details
- a concluding sentence
*Tips: Remember the burger analogy?
Please complete your paragraph latest by 12.20pm for me to go through.
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Personality or wealthiness, which is more important? (revised)

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Personality or wealthiness, which is more important? (revised)

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People would argue that money is a lot more important than personality in today’s cruel world. I personally think that personality is more important because it’s permanent, it’s the combination of characteristics or qualities that form an individual's distinctive character. Personality is qualities one has to work hard to acquire and unlike wealthiness, you could be broke one day and rich the next. Good personality can also help you to progress in your career, which is proportional to one’s wealth. Therefore, these are the reasons why I think personality is much more important than wealthiness.

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With a great personality comes great achievements. Thus, comes wealth along. A person with a prominent personality tends to stand out from other people making other people see them as a person with quality. With just wealth, the person himself is no different than other people around him and without the qualities then the wealth itself may not be well mantained. Personality is an essential essence in a person too because by that a leader can be born to lead and influence other people. A good human network is very important to gain wealth. So, in terms of prioritizing between personality and wealth, personality comes first.

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Which is more important? In my opinion , i will choose personality . Personality is important to describe someone's behavior . People will feel comfortable with someone who has a good character . Most people attract to a good behavior people . Wealthiness also can show someone's attitude , so we need to use our wealth to do a good things . Wealth cannot buy a good behavior, but it can be changed by ourself . These are a few reasons why personality is important than wealth .

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Everyone grows up in a diffrent environment, as we human being were not all created equally. Some might find personality is more important compared to wealthiness and visa versa. Personally, i would go for both of them. Why? Because first of all, i believe that we don't have to be a billionaire to have a wonderful life.End of the day, it is all in our mindset after all. Secondly, having the right type of person with you always will motivate you in everyway which sometimes, money can't be used at this matter. Finally, health wise. Let's face it, we will never know when we will become ill or how much the cost will be to be cured. At this point, wealthiness plays it's role to keep our mind free from that depressing thoughts. The way I see it, personality and wealthiness is important in ones life as it compliments each other.

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Every person has different point of view and opinion upon the importance of wealthiness either personality . In my point of view, both are equally important. This is because, as much as wealth is important , personality is also important. A rich man can have all the wealth in the world with no personality but in the eyes of people he's still poor. We need money but at the same time personality plays a huge part. I prefer to be respected with my personality along with my wealth. So in conclusion, both; wealthiness and personality are equally important.(DC96093)

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Every person has different point of view and opinion upon the importance of wealthiness either personality . In my point of view, both are equally important. This is because, as much as wealth is important , personality is also important. A rich man can have all the wealth in the world with no personality but in the eyes of people he's still poor. We need money but at the same time personality plays a huge part. I prefer to be respected with my personality along with my wealth. So in conclusion, both; wealthiness and personality are equally important.(DC96093)

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Every human has a diverse view of personality and wealth. In my opinion, personality is more important because of its individuality it will bring us into wealth. Other than that, some person will place a high level of trust in people with good personality. But, if we have a lot of money, it will also help us to be a good personality. This is because, through the wealth , we can help the poor people , homeless, orphan  and so on. In conclusion, personality and wealth are an important thing for everyday life. I hope that , we can use our wealthiness wisely and have a good personality.

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The question is which is more important – personality or wealthiness? I personally think that personality is more important than wealthiness because with a great personality you can achieved your goals in your career and improve yourself to be a better person. Other than that, you can attract people’s attention to listen and be comfortable talking to you. So, when you are a leader they can work well and follow your instructions correctly. Being wealthy isn’t always going to help you in a situation but personality is. Also, with a great personality, you can gain a lot of friends and open up so many opportunities in career. The conclusion is we need to have a great personality rather than just wealthiness.

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Which is more important-personality or wealthiness?Why?

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Which is more important-personality or wealthiness?Why?

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This kind of questions always depend on individuals because some of the people prefer personality more than wealthiness and some of the other people like wealthiness more than personality. In my point of view,i will choose personality over wealthiness this is because even if you are a millionaire but you have a very bad personality then people will hate you. A great personality is what makes people want to be like you or want to be your friends. But i'm sure without a great personality you will find a bunch of people that will be your friends. Furthermore in life people will likely to follow you if you have a great personality so my conclusion is personality more important than wealthiness because personality is something that you already have but you have to improve it and wealthiness is something that you have to work really hard to get it.

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which is more important - personality or Wealthiness? Why?

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which is more important - personality or Wealthiness? Why?

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Personality and wealthiness, this two trait that has been debated which is more important since a long time ago by philosopher and theorist around the world no matter which generation. In my opinion, both of personality and wealthiness is important to people. Of course there is saying that wealth alone cannot buy happiness but think about it, is there a someone happy when they are poor. I am sure everyone has watch Bersamamu in tv3. Of course personality is also important, every religious teach us to have good personality. this is because with personality we can increase our image to the other people. If we have good personality, everyone will feel comfortable with us and won't do anything bad to us. Maybe they will help us if we get into trouble. In conclusion, both personality and wealth are important and we must balance both of it because if we don't have personality we will make more foes than friends while vice versa, the we cannot even maintain our daily life without money.

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Which is more important - Personality or Wealthiness? Why?

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Which is more important - Personality or Wealthiness? Why?

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For me, I'd choose the personality, because personality can't be bought with money. Sure, you can buy anything from money, but an attitude can't. A person attitude comes from what they have been through, or teached. It can't be received the attitude instantly.
That's why personality is hard to find. Wealthiness, can achieve if you're working hard. In short, there is a way to achieve that. Example, when you have a great personality, you will automatically working hard which will leads to a success life, and brings money to your account. Another thing, a person’s personality can bring you towards happiness, it can cheer you up, and more.  Wealthiness can’t. You have a great spouse with lot of money, but in the end, they are busy working and left you behind for their works.
Wealthiness really can bring you happy sometimes, but personality of a person going to win you through your entire life.

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Which is more important-personality or weathiness?  why?

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Which is more important-personality or weathiness?  why?

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We live in a superficial world, where people are judged based on their wealthiness, every single day. Is that truly matters? From my opinion, personality is more important. This is because it is essential to keep a balance between both lives to lead a peaceful and stress free life. Other than that, personality helps an individual to inculcate positive qualities like flexible attitude, willingness to learn and have a friendly nature.More importantly, even were are  being called poor by certain somebody, but if we have a good personality, we will soon will get noticed by people around us that you have a nice personality.  So the conclusion is wealthiness is not so important if we have a good personality, so, being wealthy is not important anymore.

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In this modern era, people would usually say that wealth is important as it is the key towards survival in this developing world. Some adults would usually encourage or educate their infants that wealth is important rather than teaching them respect. Children would grow up and brag all about their wealth and not care about anyone’s feeling. Other than that, some people care most about their personality rather than wealth because they feel that wealth is not that important as it is only temporary and not everlasting like personality and by respecting people and so on will bring luck to them. It is so rare to find someone who is wealthy and has a good personality. In my opinion, personality is much more important rather than wealthiness. Mainly because, having a really nice personality can make you a very interesting person. Just imagine, when you do good deeds to people and they do good back to you or maybe sometimes when you smile at someone and they smile back. That is the best feelings ever knowing that someone in this world appreciate your existent.  Next, having a good personality means more friends. People would usually want to befriend you because of the positive vibes you give. Unlike being wealthy, people will only be around you because you rich. A good personality also boost your self-esteem. By doing good things to everyone you will improve your ability to communicate to almost everyone. Our confidence will also cultivate massively. Therefore through all this , I think that it is very important to have a good personality and we must try to spread the word to everyone.

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Which is more important personality or wealthiest? Why?

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Which is more important personality or wealthiest? Why?

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It is depend on persons, some of them prefer wealthiest and some prefer personality. For me I will choose personality because personality is not something that cant be faked unlike wealthiest use the money to buy person nor pay someone to show that we are good people. Conclusion, anyway personality is much better than wealthiest for me.

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My opinion, personality is more important because personality is refers to individual differences in characteristic patterns of thinking, feeling and behaving. Personality is the combination of behavior, emotion, motivation. We can also sometimes see changes in an individual's personality over time. It is also referred to social characteristics like socialbility, generosity, kindness . Personality does not just influence how we move and respond in our environment. It also causes us to act in certain ways. A person will interact with others in a reasonably predictable way.

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Personality is a set of individual differences that are affected by the development of an individual values,attitudes and skills.Wealthiness is only use money for life and all problem.I will choose personality because that we can have more moral and good attitudes ourself.A wealthy people can use money to by anything but they can't buy happiness.A person who have personality, they must no arrogant at all people.Personality is important than wealthiness because good attitude can become occur to all people .

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Personality development helps an individual to live with a positive attitude towards life and reduces stress. A person's emotional intelligence is related to his personality, and it contributes significantly to the level of success he/she achieves throughout career. Personality development helps an individual to inculcate positive qualities like punctuality, flexible attitude, willingness to learn, friendly nature, eagerness to help others and so on. Never hesitate to share information with others. Always reach office on time. Some people have a tendency to work till late. Late sittings not only increase your stress levels but also spoil your personal life. Sitting till late at the office indicates that an individual is extremely poor in time management skills.

Personality development helps you develop an impressive personality and makes you stand apart from the rest. Personality development also plays an essential role in improving one’s communication skills. Individuals ought to master the art of expressing their thoughts and feelings in the most desired way. Personality development makes you a confident individual who is appreciated and respected wherever he/she goes.
So in conclusion,personality more important than wealthiness.

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In this modern era, arguement about health or wealth is always an issue that have no ending. For me, i think both of them is essential to have a happy life. First of all personality is very important so that people around us is confortable to be around us. Secondly, wealth is as important as personality because in this era without money we couldnt survive since nowadays everything needs money. Last but not least, we need both in our life. This is because to have a great life we need to have money and to have money we need a job without a good personality it is hard to have a good job. So it is clear that we need both of these things to have a happy life.

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which is more important-Personality or wealthiness?

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which is more important-Personality or wealthiness?

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Which is more important - Personality or Wealthiness ? Why ?

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. Everyone have their own way on making it first. In my opinion personality have to come in first, because people will love your personality more than your wealthiness. Personality makes people feel loved, because of the way who you are is more important than your money. However nowadays, younger generation will want wealthiness first and then your personality. That’s what we called as “fake friends” because they will always be there for you when you are rich. When you are poor they don’t even care about you. That’s why for me personality have to come first in the future.

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For me, i'll choose personality. All human beings have a good nature in him. It depends on someone to choose to be the best or not. Good personality will lead a person to success. For someone with wealth but without good personality, they are hard to succeed. This is because there will definitely be someone who is jealous of it and will try to make them fall. However, if we have good personality, people will be happy to help us to be a successful person.Thus we must always be kind and practice a good personality attitude in ourself so that we can be a good and useful person. So life will get better.

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Both personality and wealthiness is a good traits for every aspects. But of course, there is some negative of it such as if the person is rich but his personality is sadly poor. And for personality, lets just say if you're very kind but you're have a less income, people will insult you. The point is, balancing those is the key, becoming rich with kind heart. Making a donation, being humble. That is the good quality. But for my opinion, personality is more important than wealthiness.
Personality is more important for me because thats show who you really are. What you've think, what you've done something or making an action. Building a good personality is to be truth to say, it is really hard and sore. But the outcome is what matters the most. You could become very kind hearthed, for example, helping others in need, helping your parents, respect the elders. People will thought kindly of you or mocking you. But that doesn't matter. What's matter is, you should be proud of yourself.
But sometimes, you could do something wrong. You're helping someone but not sincere to it. You want something back. Well it not that bad. But for me, it could lead you becoming a negative person. Not everyone is perfect but why not try to be one, it won't hurt you.
Last but not least, there is a lot of personalities within each person, for example, kind, loving, keeping eviromental clean, helping other, making self good, or saving money. Not all of it is permanent because people always changes by every life such as experience.
The conclusion is, personality is more important than wealthiness because it makes of who you are and could lead yourself to become an example to people that are near to you.